The Ge Story - Finishing Part 1, PG-13. You've been warned. Options

[Blade Lord Lyn]

(This is picking up exactly where the comic left off.)


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BLL frowned.

"Why are we still here?" he asked, sighing from his white steed. He held the newly repaired Tyrfing in his hands, he was aching for battle. He rode foward, twirling the shining blade lightly as he proceded to ride short laps. Linear stood distant, standing near WindDude.

"We've got a long way to go." she mumbled, Hero's Sword still stained with blood. She ignored the small cut that she had on her arm, earlier, WindDude could swear she was scolding herself for being hit.

"Whenever you all are ready!" BLL cried from ahead.

Not being one to be left behind, Linear ran ahead, noting the red glare of Armor Knights in the distance. Agatio followed close in suit, arrow ready. WindDude followed behind with his favorite Steel Sword, while Kate had the legendary Ichival.

"Not much of an army we've got." BLL mumbled. His steed rode ahead of the others, scoping out the territory.

"They've got a couple of Ballista's. Nothing to much to worry about." he said.

"Are you sure? That can be a problem. Arrows falling from the sky isn't fun, you know." WindDude replied comically.

Linear shrugged.

"Whatever you say." she replied calmly.


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(Lubeck Castle)

"Uhm, Lord Nick1. . . I have some troubling news."

"What is it?"

"BLL is just over the hill leading to Lubeck sir."

"Our troops are already deployed. Just fire the Ballista's at him as he gets close." Nick1Presta said. He turned away from the soldier, pondering his next move.

"He has the Tyrfing too."

"WHAT!!!!!!!"

"I said, he has the Tyrfing, too."

"I heard you the first time, fool! Making things harder than it should be. . . ." Nick1presta trialed off. He walked to the wall, grabbing a large, silver colored axe.

"The Swanchicka will take care of the problem. . . ."

Solemn as a statue, Nick1Presta headed outdoors, to the gates of Lubeck. He held the Swanchicka before him like a magical wall, a titan among armors. His heavy armor, now enhanced by the powers of the Swanchicka, made him a defensive monster. He sniggered as he saw the aura of the Tyrfing in the distance.

"Fire!!!!!"

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"Linear, get down!"

Falling to the ground, a large, steel bolt falls to the ground behind where she stood before. She stood again, panting.

"They're not playing games! They're using siege weapons!"

BLL tensed for a second, but covered it up with a grin.

"WindDude and Agatio, you can take care of the Ballista's right?"

"No problem." Agatio replied.

WindDude nodded in agreement. They went off in there seperate ways, looking for the ballistas.

"Now, we charge the castle."

Linear and Kate following him, they approached Lubeck castle. It was strangely empty, completely devoid of military of civilian presence. Agatio caught up, panting, with WindDude behind.

"They're all outside the castle! They've been waiting outside the castle!" Agatio said.

"Not good. . . ." BLL mumbled.

Heavy footsteps echoed across the quiet courtyard.

"BLL!"

"Nick1presta. . . .'

Nick1presta tightend his grip around the Swanchika, BLL replied silently by mimicking the motion with the Tyrfing.

"You really think you stand a chance." Nick said, smirking.

BLL nodded.

"I've been through to much to lose." he said, eyes narrowing.

Nick shook his head, extending his arms towards the Lord Knight (BLL, if you didn't know). Grinning, he let go of the Swanchika. The axe lunged on its own at BLL, aiming for his neck.

"Ya!!!" BLL cried, motioning for his steed, Mahnya, to move according to the reins. He swerved to the right, charging at the Baron (Nick).

From behind, BLL heard a woosh sound, behind him. Swerving to the left, he stared wide-eyed as the Swanchika returned to Nick.

Nick chuckled as the Swanchicka landed neatly in his hand.

"Like that?"

BLL's eyes narrowed angrily. Linear stepped foward, still standing in the courtyard.

"Save your strength, BLL. I'll defeat him with one attack."

BLL nodded, already knowing the technique she would use. Grinning, she drew her Hero's Sword, black robe moving with the wind.

"Shooting Star Dance!" She cried.

Leaping into the air, she flipped, landing before the Baron, slashing downwards with the Hero's sword. She followed it quickly with another strike, and stepped back.

Ten clean slices through the armor appeared, Nick slumped to the ground as his eyes rolled behind his back, and parts of his dark brown armor turned red from bleeding.

"How. . . could I. . . have lost. . . . "

Linear smirked.

"That takes care of that." she said.

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More tommorrow. I think this is long enough.

[Kikuichimonji]

cools story but does that mean no more comic?

[Blade Lord Lyn]

Yeah, I'm to busy with the game to really do it anymore.

[Kikuichimonji]

oh well, atleast its being continued! (IMG:http://www.goldensun-syndicate.net/forum/style_emoticons/default/happy.gif)

[Mike Babcock]

WOW!

That's awesome, BLL..I almost like it better then the comic! O_O

[Isaac13]

Aww, I'm not in it anymore...

[Kikuichimonji]

You'll be in it again I'm sure...

ARR AVEST!

When do you think you will be able to continue it?

[Linear]

That's awsome BLL! I really like it! Comic or Story, I'll still like it!
Continue it! n.n

[Valistrix]

Yay the comic continues as a story! Now I will get to see me in it.

[Blade Lord Lyn]

[u]Chapter 5, part 2[u]

The Desert Oasis

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Linear had defeated Nick1Presta at Lubeck, and BLL had recieved the Holy Tyrfing. His next goal towards GSS was Phinora, south of Lubeck.

Phinora was known as a star in the desert. It's an oasis, defended by general Link and his Fire Mages. Earlier, BLL had decided that going through this oasis town would be a good idea. Stocking up on food and water for the inevitable march through the Yied Desert would make things easier, and defeating the Fire Mage's now would be better than later.

BLL motioned for MysticWarrior and Wind Dude over to him.

"Listen. I want you to head towards the country of Isaac." he said somberly.

"What? But sir. . ." Wind Dude whined quietly.

"You won't go alone. If you go back with MysticWarrior, the people will treat you like a hero."

"Sir. . . ."

"That, and I want you to take Isaac Zero 2 with you. He's only 2 years old, he shouldn't be involved with war marches." BLL said quietly.

"But. . . ."

"No buts. MysticWarrior, you'll help Wind Dude, right?"

"Yes, sir."

"All right. After everything's settled down, I'll come back for you." BLL said.

Wind Dude nodded, as BLL handed him a small baby wrapped in a light blue, cotton blanket. The small boy was asleep, smiling. Wind Dude turned away from the Lord Knight, looking down.

"I'll be seeing you later, then." he said.

BLL nodded, sighing lightly as he watched MysticWarrior, a short sword in hand, leave the castle, followed by Wind Dude, Isaac Zero 2 in hand.

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"So, all packed and ready to go then, right?" BLL asked, now mounted. He was overseeing the desert, attempting to plan the best path to Phinora. The rest of his army was in line in front of him.

"Yes, sir!" they said ardently.

"This may be our last battle. But, it won't be. Because you've all fought so long, and so hard. We've fought through bandits, tyrants, rebels, ursurpers, and even conspirators of GSS. We must bring them down, and show Max the truth. Which we [i]will[i] do with this battle!"

The line before him applauded, wide smiles spread across the various members.

"Now, move out!"

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South of Lubeck, a Duke Knight, Isaac13, and his wife, BLL's sister, a Paladin named Sparkie (a friend of mine), rode foward.

Isaac13 was a tall man, dark, bark colored hair. His eyes were sharp as a hawk's, matching his hair, and he always had a ****y smirk spread wide across his visage. His skin was tanner then most, from being from Lenster, in the south. His build was lean, and his breastplate was white, with a red tunic underneath. His pants were loose, and colored red, and an odd aura surrounded him, emanating from the lance he held in his hand - the holy Gaelbolg.

Sparkie pulled beside him. She was average height for a woman, but stronger than most, having holy blood running through her veins. She wore a light tunic, colored lightly golden white. She wore white leggins, and held the Light Sword that Lightningstar gave her two years ago.

"We're going to help BLL. Charging GSS is no simple feat." Isaac13 said, riding ahead.

"I'm glad you want to help my brother." Sparkie said, smiling. She whistled loudly, telling the knights that they brought with them to form up.

"According to our spies, BLL is going from Zaxon, to Lubeck, to Phinora, to Velthomer, finally to GSS. By now, he should be leaving Lubeck. We'll be his reinforcements." Isaac13 said.

"Yes sir!" the knights replied eagerly.

Isaac13 rode close to Sparkie, leaning in.

"We shouldn't have brought Kate." he whispered, eyes trailing to Sparkie's lap.

"I'm not fighting, remember? I'm retreating when we get halfway. We're just going a bit further. Just a bit." Sparkie replied in a hushed voice.

The couple's eyes trailed to the baby in Sparkie's lap. The baby was asleep, making silent whining noises as she moved slightly. Her hair matched her fathers, and she wore a little dress sowed by her mother.

"Let's go." Isaac13 said.

Just then, one of their knights ran back in a frenzy.

"Milord! It's Trabant!"

"What??!!"

Isaac13 turned to Sparkie.

"Hurry and retreat!" he said.

"No. I'm staying with you." Sparkie replied firmly.

"But Kate. . . ."

"We won't lose if we fight together."

Isaac13 nodded.

"You're right. Let's go."

A shadow appeared over the horizon, as a loud cackle was heard from the distance. A young man with wild, long light green hair and heavy silver armor flew ahead. He had an aura similar to Isaac13's, the Gugnir in his hand.

"A'ight boys! We're gettin' payed big ones for this! The desert'll be their resting place!" he cackled.

The Wyvern Riders swooped devilishly onto the group of knights, yellow colored Knight Killers in hand. This weapon is doom for any mounted units, which Lenster's army was known for. The battle quickly rested on the hands of Sparkie and Isaac13.

"Tough. . . ." Isaac13 mumbled.

In a surprise move, a Wyvern Rider flew behind Sparkie, lance pointed at the back of her neck. Trabant cackled happily.

"Looks like you're in a pretty tough state, Isaac13. But you can save your wife."

"How. . .?"

"Give me the Gaelbolg."

Isaac13 nodded.

"Don't do it! Don't give it to him!" Sparkie cried out in desperation.

"I want to save you. That's all I care about." Isaac13 said somberly.

Sparkie closed her eyes, sighing as Isaac13 handed the Gaelbolg to Trabant.

"Hahahahahahahaha! Slice her neck!"

"What?!"

The Knight Killer poked a perfect, large hole through Sparkie's neck. Her eyes widened, then shut.

". . . ."

"Kill him." Trabant said coldly.

Isaac13 offered no resistance as the Gungir pierced his armor, and he fell to the desert sand. Trabant walked over to Sparkie's body. Leaning over, he heard a loud, crying sound.

"It's a baby." he said.

"Sir, you need not waste your time on it. I'll kill the baby if you want." a Wyvern Rider said.

Trabant shook his head.

"No. I'm taking the girl and the Gaelbolg back to Thracia. I'm trusting you to kill BLL and his cadre."

"Yes sir."

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[Linear]

O.O That was so awsome BLL! *throws confetti* n.n whoohoo...that was an awsome chapter!!

[Blade Lord Lyn]

Chapter 5, part 3

The Desert March

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The Wyvern Knights that Trabant sent after BLL where decimated easily by the small group that he took along with him. The cruel sands of the desert stood before him, a dry wind blowing through the harsh terrain.

"Phinora isn't to far, everyone. We'll take it, then move on to Velthomer." BLL said, placidly. The group nodded, thus beginning the infamous March to Phinora.

In less than two hours, the granite castle stood before them, seemingly empty.

"What's this?" Agatio said, confused. "Something's definately wrong here."

BLL nodded. "I think you're right. It's too quiet. . . I was expecting Link to attack us. Even just a few Fire Mages. But nothing. Nothing at all."

BLL rode to the gate, the Tyrfing's aura shining around her.

"ATTACK!!!!!" he heard from above.

"METEOR!!!!!" BLL heard from all around him. Large flaming balls of fire descended upon the army. The Tyrfing simply repelled the attack. Linear slipped out of the way of the descending attack, and Agatio rolled towards the gate.

"Watch out everyone!" BLL cried out. He rode towards a Fire Mage now revealed, flaming aura surrounding them. Powerfully, he swung the Tyrfing at him, sending the Mage flying into the wall, blood spilling towards the ground.

"I'm going straight for Link! Distract them!"

Riding through the battle, evading and repeling Meteor attacks as he moved on, BLL entered the courtyard. In there stood Link, tall, flaming red hair, and red eyes.

"Finally. I've been waiting for you."

"Link. We don't need to fight."

"Yes we do. There is one thing you do need to know. All your base are belong to us."

"What are you talking about, Link?"

"Nothing. Nevermind. Prepare to die."

BLL made the first move, charging on his white steed towards the Fire Mage. Link was expecting the attack, stepping back, and flipping through pages of his tome.

"Borganon!" he cried.

The ground below BLL opened, with a volcanic eruption occuring beneath him. Fortunately, the aura of the Tyrfing pushed the eruption downwards, sealing the whole. The soft green light pulsated stronger, as BLL narrowed his eyes. Pushing his heels into the horse so it leaped towards Link. He swung low with the Tyrfing, going for a clean slice to the neck. Link ducked, preparing to cast upwards.

"Borganon!" Link casted again, hoping that it'd work.

Again, the Tyrfing glowed, repelling the volcanic explosion coming from the ground.

"What?! I don't get it. . . what's happening?!" Link exclaimed angrily.

"The Tyrfing was made to repel most average spells. . . Borganon barely stings me." BLL said, smirking. "Good luck." he said.

Link's eyes widened. Turning around, he retreated through a pair of doors, quickly heading to a balcony above.

"ALL FIRE MAGES, RETREAT!!!!"

Another one down. . . . BLL thought, sighing.


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Yep, two more parts to go guys.

[BUTTSEX]

Your story's getting really good BLL! (Go Tyrfing!). Can't wait for the next part!

[Elliott]

How did I get in there? Well, I'm too lazy to read it now, leave it up a while and I'll read it later.

[Linear]

x.x wow, another chapter. O.O I luved it! XDDD *throws more confetti* >_> I like it how its going.