Enemies, But Friends
#1
Posted 19 June 2004 - 03:30 PM
‘We are walking for 2 days now Felix, when will we reach Prox?’
Felix, Isaac, Piers and Garet walked along a river, heading to Prox. Their Boat hit the rocks, and since then they walked. Garet was very tired, since he has quite a bad condition. He got behind all the time, which slowed the others down.
‘Come on, Garet. Be patient, like we are. We are – just like you – tired of walking, and are badly in need of some rest. So stop complaining and keep walking.’ Piers loudly said. He started to get a little frustrated.
‘Don’t talk like that to Garet, Piers. You know our condition is better then his, so he has more trouble walking so long.’ Isaac replied.
‘then leave him here, so we can hurry up.’ Felix mentioned.
Looking at eachother, Piers and Felix stared angry at Isaac and Garet, who were doing the same against Felix and Piers.
‘Just, just stop this,’ Isaac yelled. ‘We are acting like we are eachothers enemies. But we aren’t, we are friends.’
‘Nice friends,’ Garet continued. ‘Friends care about eachother.’
‘Friends do indeed, so we don’t have to care about you, do we?’ Felix laughed.
Now Garet became quite angry.
‘What?’ He screamed. ‘Then why are we a group? Fighting side to side!’
‘Maybe it is a good plan to don’t do that anymore!’ Piers became angry too now.
‘I’m sick of this!’ Isaac, yelled. He jumped back, and mumbled something. Piers and Felix looked up, giant Spheres were falling down. Felix acted quick, and grabbed Piers, then jumped away.
‘Now it’s my turn!’ Felix said. Followed by Piers: ‘together with me!’
Felix took out his Sol Blade, and jumped towards Isaac. A great ball of fire was unleashed from his sword. Piers took out Excalibur, and attacked Garet. Also with an Unleash. But just before both attackes arrived, a huge explosion takes place, and blows away all four.
‘What was that?’ Isaac said.
But the answer didn’t came, and so the groups decided that they would split up, but both went to Prox. So there was a good change they would meet eachother there. Isaac and Garet would probably needed some more time, but finally they would reach it. And a next fight could occur again.
#4
Posted 24 June 2004 - 11:07 AM
#5
Posted 24 June 2004 - 11:35 AM
#6
Posted 24 June 2004 - 03:56 PM
#7
Posted 24 June 2004 - 04:13 PM
#8
Posted 24 June 2004 - 06:14 PM
#9
Posted 26 June 2004 - 03:21 AM
kingofthedead, on Jun 24 2004, 10:56 PM, said:
then don't read it! :angry:
#10
Posted 28 June 2004 - 01:22 AM
#11
Posted 29 June 2004 - 11:20 AM
What happened to your other story, NG?
#12
Posted 29 June 2004 - 11:53 PM
Go for it :P :huh:
#13
Posted 30 June 2004 - 04:22 AM
IZ2, the other stories dissapeared from my computer, very strange, but it happened. that's why I started a new one.
#14
Posted 04 July 2004 - 05:47 AM
so stay tuned!
#15
Posted 15 July 2004 - 12:19 PM
And another question, what happened to the ladies? I like the plot, it's awsome, and I think it would be good, so keep at it!
#17
Posted 05 August 2004 - 04:25 PM
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grrr...don't listen to them...the only reason they're saying that is because they don't know how to write fanfiction. I thought it was great. so what, fanfiction doesn't have to be lengthy, it doesn't have to be anything except fanfiction. (and make sence, but don't worry, it makes perfect sence to me) keep up the good work
p.s. very good advise for SOME people: if you don't have anything nice to say, then don't say anything at all ^_^