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R.i.p.

#1   BearerOfKikuichimonji 

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    Posted 28 July 2004 - 12:07 AM

    there i layed
    in a puddle of my own blood
    i couldn't believe i'd been slayed
    all i could see around me was mud

    i tried to stand
    but i could not
    i layed there on the cold land
    i couldn't even remeber who i fought

    my life started to leave me
    i wished i could see at least one friend
    i couldn't believe this was how it would be
    but then my life came to an end


    this one came from my head, iloverpgs

    #2   Iloverpgs 

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      Posted 28 July 2004 - 12:37 AM

      Hmm not bad!But i'm just wondering wouldn't it take a little longer to put all the music stuff and all together?

      #3   BearerOfKikuichimonji 

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        Posted 28 July 2004 - 01:18 AM

        whatta ya mean :mellow: i just get inspired. i think the stuff up on my own :joy:

        #4   Metalix 

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          Posted 13 August 2004 - 11:00 AM

          its alright very original ahh what am i sayin i do now nuthin ill shut up now

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