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Show Me No Quarter A Fire Emblem: Seima No Kouseki fic.

#1   Blade Lord Lyn 

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    Posted 11 October 2004 - 12:24 PM

    A fic for the newest release in the Fire Emblem game seiries, Seima No Kouseki. I was in a angsty mood when I started writing this. . . so yes, it is an angst. It's mostly based on their supports. . . .

    SethxEirik

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    Terms you'll need to know

    Armor Knight - Knight.

    Social Knight - Cavalier

    Valkilii - Valkyrie

    Long Arch - Ballista

    Those should be all the terms I use that you may or may not be familiar with (should you follow FE)
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    Show me no quarter

    A Blade Lord Lyn One - Shot

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    "Ya!!!"

    The wooden target broke with ease, I may be getting stronger. Though, I was aiming for a critical blow, I wasn't expecting that much.

    I didn't even realize that sweat was dropping off the side of my face, all I could do was just pant like a tired dog, it seemed.

    "Milady Eirik."

    Ah, that voice, that lovely, baritone voice. I longed to hear it so.

    "What is it, General Seth?" I replied. I kept my tone soft. I didn't want to show him. . . anything, really.

    "How is your training? Have your sword strikes improved, milady?"

    "Yes. I've been working hard, and your training has helped me even more." I replied.

    He guided me to a tree, letting lean lazily against it. He put up a different target, on of Iron. He cut through it neatly and cleanly, like it was butter, his battle cry echoing across the meadow, the breeze running through his flaming hair.

    I sighed. How did it come to this? I think about him all the time now. . . but he treats me as he should. As a Knight protects his Lord.

    That's not what I want though. I would give up my lineage quicker then Myrrh can lay waste to an army if I had the chance.

    So I can be with him.

    "Milady. Milady. Are you paying attention?" he asked. Worry lined his voice, and his eyes were full of concern.

    Oh, those lovely, lovely eyes. They seem to refle -- no. I shouldn't be paying attention to that right now. The training he is giving me. . . . it's all I have with him.

    I drew the Rapier he had given to me, back in Lunes. Why, the fact it has yet to show signs of wear is of shock to me, this is my preffered weapon!

    "Now. . . position your arm like this. . . and then extend as so. . . ." Seth explained to me, guiding my arms as he held me close to him, to show precise movement.

    Of course, I was in the quintessence of bliss. I could care less about hiding the light blush that crossed my face as I felt his muscular features press lightly against my back.

    Tch, bliss, unfortunately, does not last forever. I almost wanted to order him to assist me with the strike again, just so he could be close.

    But, it couldn't happen. With a wave, he walked away, checking upon others in the camp.

    I focused on the target. It was supposed to represent a Armor Knight, warriors who cover their entire bodies with heavey armor, and wear a massive shield on their chest.

    "Weak against magic. . . as they focus on defense. . . examples would be a Mage Knight, a Sage, or a Valkilii. . . . would be suggested to use a more powerful weapon. . . such as a Silver weapon. . . most Armor Knights prefer using weapons to defeat Social Knights. . . as they make up a large percent of an army. . . ." I echoed, remembering my lessons from years past.

    Focusing on the target, I jumped back, following the motions as if Seth was there, guiding my hand, and lunged.

    I couldn't believe it.

    I pierced through the target.

    I set off to find Seth, hoping he would extol my accomplishment. On my first attempt, no less!

    I ran through the meadow, but not un-equipped. Monsters were common in this area, and I would be defenseless should I not be prepared. The wind made the grass sway left and right easily, and the trees followed with a dance of its own.

    I saw him then.

    He sat by a river, tossing stones across its surface.

    "General Seth. . . ."

    "Milady Eirik? What are you doing here?"

    "I wanted to tell you. . . I pierced the Iron. On my first attempt."

    "Why, that is excellent! Come, sit here. You can relax, training is complete for today." He patted the ground beside him.

    The Lady of Luck must be smiling upon me! What chance is this that I get to spend time with the one I long for.

    We sat for long, everlasting moments, in silence.

    "Milady. . . ."

    "Yes?"

    "May I have permission to pose a question?"

    "Of course."

    "Milady. . . do you not think. . . we've spent. . . too much time together?"

    "What do you mean?"

    "It is good for two companions to spend time with each other. . . but it seems that we've spent time. . . in excess."

    "I only wanted to make sure you were all right. . . that wound you recieved from before, at Lunes, while we were escaping. . . it was bleeding for so long. . . ." I should be scolding myself right now, thinking of such a pathetic excuse.

    "You have asked about it before, though, and you know that it is all right, milady."

    "And, you promised to assist me with my swordplay. . . ." I pleaded. What is he trying to do?

    "It turned from once a week, to three times a week, to every other day, to every day, miliady."

    "And --" he cut me off.

    "Milady. . . permission to share a statement?"

    "Y-yes. . . ." I replied. My heart felt heavy, as if it already knew what to expect. He closed his eyes as he spoke, as if he wanted to veil his true intentions.

    "It. . . it is not proper for royalty to care so much for a lone Knight."

    "But. . . you are the general of our Social Knights! As a Paladin, you should be held in high esteem!" I pleaded even more, to him, I must sound like a beggar.

    "Milady. . . permission to be excused."

    "No! Wait. . . I. . . I. . . I've been longing for you. . . you're always tending to your duties. . . but I. . . I want to be with you. . . But, you may. . . be right. . . it may not be so fitting. . . for a princess. . . ." I blurted. I said that in the most unladylike fashion! Why would he care about such a horribly said statement? Nothing like in those romantic novels. . . where there is always a happy ending for the two lovers. . . .

    "I'm glad that you understand, milady."

    He turned away from me, and walked away. Each of his steps were slow and heavy, an emotion weighed down upon him.

    I looked up at the grey sky. Looking down at the river, I watched as rain quickly began to pour, each one hitting the river like a Long Arch hitting a Pegasus Knight.

    I let the tears flow free, knowing that they would be cloaked by the rain.

    "Milady. . . ." I heard from behind, the familiar baritone.

    "General. . .?"

    "Permission to speak freely?"

    "Permission granted. . . ."

    "The truth is. . . I want to forget about this. Everything. And live. . . with you. . . somewhere. . . ."

    My heart rose, a choir seemed to sing throughout my body. He wants to be with me!

    "But. . . this cannont be. . . unfortunately. . . but know. . . that next time I fight. . . it will be as a dedicated Paladin. . . fights for his liege. . . ."

    He sat beside me, wrapping his arms protectively around me.

    I just let the rain continue to conceal my tears.

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    FIN.

    #2   Mallick 

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      Posted 11 October 2004 - 02:16 PM

      Wow that is GREAT!! I would like to see you write more fan fics!

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        Posted 11 October 2004 - 03:02 PM

        This your first fic? That's really good!!

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          Posted 11 October 2004 - 03:10 PM

          It isn't my first fic, I've written others before.

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            Posted 11 October 2004 - 03:12 PM

            kay then, but it's still really good

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              Posted 11 October 2004 - 05:45 PM

              o.O Yeah...! Overall it's really good BLL! =D *claps and eats popcorn*

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                Posted 11 October 2004 - 06:30 PM

                *Takes some popcorm* Hey! This is good! Like it much better than your comic. Rock on!!! Oops. Sorry. I must have overreacted.

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                  Posted 12 October 2004 - 10:00 AM

                  Woah BLL that blew me away, it was brilliant, well done.

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                    Posted 20 October 2004 - 01:45 PM

                    Isaac13, on Oct 12 2004, 08:02 PM, said:

                    This is getting good. Hmm.. wonder if there is any popcorn left...

                    I13 soon you are gonna be so badly told off by a Mod. Good work BLL hope there is a next Chapter or I await your next FanFic. :P

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                      Posted 20 October 2004 - 06:20 PM

                      o_O Was there really a need to double post like that? nvm
                      ^__^??? Will there be more made by you BLL?

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                        Posted 21 October 2004 - 03:42 PM

                        Yes, Link. I like it when people don't double post. Be wise about your posting cababilities. Don't abuse them. And, yes, please continue the fic, BLL.

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                          Posted 22 October 2004 - 05:15 PM

                          Actually. . . that was it. I may write another fic, but the point of a one-shot is that it's one chapter. So. . . . there it is.

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                            Posted 22 October 2004 - 06:10 PM

                            O.O So you did the one chapter story kind! Ayee!
                            It's still good though...!

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                              Posted 22 October 2004 - 06:27 PM

                              Oh, I see. Okay, then.

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                                Posted 25 October 2004 - 09:28 AM

                                Isaac13, on Oct 21 2004, 05:42 PM, said:

                                Yes, Link. I like it when people don't double post. Be wise about your posting cababilities. Don't abuse them. And, yes, please continue the fic, BLL.

                                And i'm hearing this from the guy that posted over several times in a row?, I think so...

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                                  Posted 25 October 2004 - 10:44 AM

                                  Link, on Oct 25 2004, 06:28 PM, said:

                                  And i'm hearing this from the guy that posted over several times in a row?, I think so...


                                  Am I that guy? :ph34r:

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                                  Posted 25 October 2004 - 11:48 AM

                                  O_O, an FE sotry...yay I love FE, really really good story Blade Lord Lyn.

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                                    Posted 25 October 2004 - 03:00 PM

                                    DiddyKong, on Oct 25 2004, 12:44 PM, said:

                                    Am I that guy?  :ph34r:

                                    Nope. It's me. The one and only.

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                                      Posted 30 October 2004 - 02:27 AM

                                      Isaac13, on Oct 25 2004, 05:00 PM, said:

                                      Nope. It's me. The one and only.

                                      Yeah but he learnt his lesson and will never do it again.


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