[Angelic_Raine]

I will post a few of my own that I found... I used to write quite a bit of poetry way back in my preteen and early teens as it was a form of expression for me, I was painfully shy. Collin changed me so I don't write quite as much but here goes.

DISARRAY
Busy tearing up my heart thinking about you,
Can’t stand you but yet I love you.
Wish that you felt as strong as when we first met,
But its not the same, its not the same, it won’t ever be the same…
Why do we try to make something that will never work, work?
Its pointless to bother anymore!
Tears burn my soul, make my eyes sore,
And yet I stay.
Blind with my own foolishness, blind with my dismay.
Forever in Disarray.


NOW I BELIEVE
This feels like a dream,
Is this what it seems?
There is a light above me,
And a winged creature standing there behind a golden gate.
It’s wearing a long and silken gown,
Its hair is golden, long and wavy blowing in the breeze.
Is this my guardian angel?
As I see the gate opening,
I can see the angel’s face.
Its eyes are blue as the sky,
Its skin, pure, silken snow.
It welcomes me with open arms,
And a smile upon its face.
As I approach the gate,
I feel at heavenly peace.
Then all of a sudden I fall!
Down, down, down,
Back to the Earth.
I go back into my body,
And sit up in my hospital bed.
The nurses, doctors, family and friends,
All sigh with relief.
I tell them my story and how I felt,
I know they don’t believe it.
In my heart, my soul, my mind I know,
Now I believe.

Wrote those in grade nine I believe... wow long time ago... I'll post more when I find them all...

[Kikuichimonji]

*sighs* you sure wrote better then I did when I was in grade nine (even if it was a year ago lol)

I really like it, nice stuff and keep it coming

[Ravenblade]

wow.. Poetry can be awesome in the hands of someone who can use it!

Very nice - post the rest soon^^

[Angelic_Raine]

Thank you guys! ^_^!!! Here is some more I found.

This is the very first poem I ever wrote... it was when I was 10 I think so its not quite as good as the others and it shows how strong my religious beliefs were back then.

Life and Death

Life is like a rainbow,
many different colors.
Death is like a rain-cloud,
dark and gloomy.
Life is like a flower,
blossoms and blooms when given love.
Death is like snow and ice,
cold and no kindness.
Life is like a waterfall,
flows on forever.
Death is like a hard rock,
if thrown may hurt others.
Life is like a bright star,
sparkles and shines with happiness.
Death is like darkness,
frighteningly real.
Life is a new generation,
but only death shows us the gateway to life everlasting.

This one is for a friend that moved away, luckily she moved back into the city when she was old enough to live on her own and we are closer than ever.

FRIENDSHIP
A mother’s love,
a child’s tears.
Friends forever,
through all the years.
Hope is blind,
Without any light.
You taught me to love,
Not to fight.
Tears from the heart,
Crimson and gold.
You showed me a new life,
Saved me from the cold.
Cherished every moment,
Lived life like one should.
Your heart was so kind,
Your spirit pure good.
And please know dear friend,
You were a gift from above.
Thank you for the memories,
Thank you for your love.
And although we may be torn,
And you may be gone.
Please know dear friend,
Forever your spirit lives on.

This is the second poem I ever wrote... I remember it quite well, I was sooo proud of it.

The Song Sparrow’s Melody

The Song Sparrow’s melody is a beautiful tune,
especially when joined with the harmony of the loon.
The grasshoppers and crickets join the orchestra,
That soothes and relaxes while the mind sings la de da.
Overhead the stars sparkle;
tranquillity on Earth,
all the creatures big and small listen with mirth.
It’s a very spiritual time,
Which evokes feelings sublime.
When the Song Sparrow’s melody reaches as far as the moon.

That's it for today, I have to go get ready for work but I'll post more tomorrow.

[Darklink79]

Awesome. Very Impressive. Poetry is the one thing I can't write. :(

[Echo_djinn]

Do you write this stuff in school as well? There awesome.*cries*No there beautiful. Please write more.

[Lind]

Wow... These are great! You have serious talent!! Please post more!

[Mallick]

I haven't read them all, but I can tell, that you really put thought into your poetry, you're awesome. I don't see why you don't write as much.

[Angelic_Raine]

Just kinda wrote this one... just the way I'm feeling I suppose... to sum it up its about an inner battle I'm having with myself.. I guess work really is a downer... stupid Christina hating me just because >.<... well anyway, regardless I hope you like it...

Lugubrious Spirit

Is an angel with stained wings even an angel?
Tarnished but not forgotten?
Suffering in its own eternal hell?
Broken but not forgotten?
I am that angel so spoken of,
Wanting to give so much of my love.
But alas I have none left for even myself.
For I put myself in that eternal hell,
Hating what I’ve become…
An angel with stained wings,
Of all things,
Is an angel… none
the less.

EDIT: ***To reply to ED, no I don't usually write them for school. I've wrote a couple for school but when I'm forced to write them they don't turn out quite so good so most of those ones I've just thrown out.. and to everyone else thank you so much for your compliments and encouragement :huh:!***

[Ravenblade]

that one is very solemn and from the amount ive spoken to you i can see comes from the heart. Like the others said, you definately DO have talent here, so perhaps going to that festival you mentioned wouldnt be a bad idea?

[Kikuichimonji]

wow, your poems have alot of rhetoric yet thoughtful language. I really like them, so post more soon ^^

hangon, aren't you 19 or something?

[Elliott]

Here's a tip. Look in people's profiles for their birth date =)
Yes, she's 19 at the moment.
Nice poetry, though I'm not a fan in general.

[Kikuichimonji]

my point was, at the time, how can she be in school if she was 19?

But I didn't finish reading all of the post so now there's no further confusion.

Again, nice poems and sorry for spamming it just now

[Somia]

they don't have to put their real age in the profile..soo..but who cares, her poems are really good.

[cyberRoll]

Nope cant thingk of one right now.