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#1   Crimson Barrel Knight 

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    Posted 09 April 2005 - 01:55 PM

    I don't know if this follows along the lines of a haiku, but, I put this together just for the heck of it.

    Today’s rants are tomorrow’s criticism.

    If not for the health of the community,
    we would not be able to stay together as a human race.

    Staying the same in one place just dulls the opportunity to become a new kind of person,
    possibly different from the rest.

    In conclusion,
    this world might have never lasted if not for our variety of differences.

    We, as a human race--and a living species--are held as being unique unto ourselves.


    ... And yes, feel free to comment.

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      Posted 10 April 2005 - 03:49 PM

      I do not understand what you were trying to do, but those quotes are true (for the most part).

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        Posted 11 April 2005 - 07:29 AM

        Ever read topic titles? Seriously, folks ...

        Here's more haiku. *hint hint*

        Do or don't, there is no attempting, unless the individual is certain they might not be able to do it.

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          Posted 11 April 2005 - 02:29 PM

          I did read the topic, but I've no idea what a "haiku" is...
          How do you think up those lines? Most of them are almost all true...

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            Posted 11 April 2005 - 05:38 PM

            Haiku is pretty much the Japanese form of poetry, only it doesn't rhyme, and it usually means something. I've no experience in haiku, but, these feel as if they represent the formal format.


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