[blade]

Golden sun 3
"Isaac" "Felix" wake up...
"a storm is coming".says Jenna "hurry up".
"Okay okay im up" they both said at the same time.
they got outside. "Hey wait a minute the clouds are not supposed to be RED Alex"!
suddlenly blast of water and fire rise up form the ground reveling 4 people... "Prepare to die issac and felix".
issac got out his fire brand and felix got out his soul blade.
Isaac said carpet bomb as a big explosion happend in front of the mystery peopl.e
supernova said mystery person one.
Anniliation yelled Felix as he hit the second person..
Inferno said person two.
Pyroclasm!!!!! yelld mp 3.
Grand Gia said the 4th.
Suddleny Mia walks up and
she enters the battle by casting ice missle
Isaac unleashed smog
Felix casted thunder bomb
mystery people 1 &2 cast firey blast
Mia goes down.
mystery person 3 downed Felix with condemmed.
mystery person 4 casted dragon fume and the battle ened
The mystery people heard Piers say "what was that" and when he got there the mystery people left
Chapter two:Piers was confused when he saw Felix, Isaac and Mia on the ground.He used water of life on all three. When they all were awake they told him everything that happened.After that they were talking about the mystery people.
Isaac:They looked dark blue...
Felix: they had golden hair...
Mia:they mainly use fire psyenergy
Piers:thats weird....
Mia...i know
Piers:i think i know their next targer
Everyone gave a shocked look
Piers:simple i think they are headed for mercury lighthouse
Mia:makes sense....but why
Piers:they are most likely trying to altar the elements
IMPOSSIBLE PIERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Piers:just throing out suggestions but lets go anyway
as everyone headed for mercury lighthouse they enountered mystery person 3
MP3:</span>
a fire serphent shot up and hit isaac.
Piers said DIAMOND BURG!!!!!as a big glacier tumbled and piers striked through it
MP3 fled.
Piers:was that one of them
Isaac:yep sure is
as they reached mercury light house the healing water vanished from the spring.
Mia:What!!!!...how did this happen?????????????????//
3 of the mystery people did a sneak attack
You are not going in...Dragon fume.mia contured with freeze prism thus canceling out dragon fume.issac's brand began to glow...PLURGATORY! issac yelled as a net-like fire began to circle number 1.Felix unleashed Flint as mp2 cast inferno
they cancled out.suddleny a huge earth happened as the light began to crack
MP12&3:you are to late as they jumped to the top.
Issac:mia and piers go in well stay here in case they jump down
Chapter3:MIa and piers started to climb but kept falling due to the light house shaking.They started to climb but kept falling over due to they aftershocks. as they climbed the light house piers said"look there is 2 mystery people .
Mystery people 2:not you again
Mystery person4: you got lucky by not dying.
Mystery person2:time to die!!!!
Mia:freeze prism as prisms kept falling.
Mp2 calmy said pyroclasm
Mp4:sering beam!!!
piers:megacool
"glaicer"
"Dragon Fume"
"Supernova"
"Diamond Burg"!!!!
"Pure Wish"
"Grand Gia"!!!
"Stone Spire"
"Fog"!!!!!!!
"Mist"
"Inferno"!!!!
"Pyroclasm"!!!!!!!!!!!!!
"Ice Missle"!!!!!!
"Wish Well"
"Sering Beam"!!!!!!
"Firey Blast"
"Sleet"
"Hail"
"Inferno"
'Dragon Fume"
"Boreas"!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Mystery person 2&4:AHHHHHH!!!!!!!
the mystery people used a smoke bomb and fled
Again,they climbed the lighthouse and when they got to the top the mystery people Were talking...
Mp1:This Lighthouse will collaspe any time now
Mp2:But Satarous then the seal will be reinstated
Mp1:I Know menardi but it wont happen
Mp3: get this over with satrous
Satrous:Patience Karst This takes time you know
Mp4:okay then im helping out
Menardi:Thats a good idea agaito.
Karst:When can we sap the power?
Menardi:The beacon will turn red<an that is when we strike.
Karst:very well...
Piers:we cant let that happen
Mia what do we do?
Piers:I got an idea...
Mia:what..,.
Piers: set dijjini on stand by
Mia:okayyyyyyyy????
Now summon neptune
Mia:Okay
Neptune!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!![/font]
as the water blasts hit the everyone the lighthouse grew red! "
Agaito:yall take care of them ill sap the beacon!
Agaito sapped the beacon as the light house fell to the ground
they all managed to escaped
As Piers and mia Found Issac and felix and told them what happend
Felix:satrous,Menardi,Karst,and agaito are BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Issac:No way
Piers...way
Chapter 4 :
Piers:Me and Mia need to do some thing.
Mia: We do?
Piers: our kids Mia..
Mia: oh yea.
Issac:Your
KIDS????
Piers:yep.
Felix:where are they?
Mia:daycare
Issac:there is a daycare?
Piers:yep.
Everyone headed for the daycare and payed the sitter for watching them.
issac:these your kids?
Piers:yep.
Felix:what are their names?
Piers:we named our boy Wave
Mia:and our girl was named Jenna.
Issac: Jenna?
Mia;i loved that name,so?
Wave:hi mom,hi dad.
Jenna:will you teach us psycenergy?
Mia:...you...want...to...learn...psyenergy?
Wave: yep
Jenna::sure do
Mia:when you are older
Piers:Mia,lets teach them
Mia:WHAT????
Wave&Jenna:Thanks Dad
Piers:but first we ne to catch up with the saturos menardi karastand agaito
Mia:Right
Everyone:okay
They headed for kalay to rest.When they got there they headed for Hammet's palace.
When they entered the palace they went to ivan's room.
They found ivan .
Ivan:hey guys
issac:hey ivan
Ivan:whats going on?
issac started to explain when ivan started reading his mind.
Ivan:i see
Mia:we thought you coulod come with us
Ivan:sure ill come with you
they started to head for tolbi,completley forgetting the shortcut.
they went to kalay dolks and bought a tickets to cross the karagol sea
they had to fight like last time ,
when they got to tolbi they went to the palace and found out that no one was ruleing tolbi
they headed for the beach and found piers's ship.
Piers:so thats where i left the boat
Wave:Daddy can we explore the ship?
Jenna:pleaseeeeeeee?
Piers:why not
Wave &Jenna:yeayyyyy thanks dad
Mia:are you sure about that
Piers:what could happen?
they started to sail and the boat stopped
Piers:what the---
Wave&Jenna:sorry daddy.
Piers: it is okay
Mia:what could happen huh?
Piers:okay ill fix it piers fixed the orb back on the pedal
Felix:where should we go?
Issac:Back to vale
issac steered the ship to vale
when they reached vale everything was back to normal
Felix:we came here why?
Issac: to get my wife.
Felix:oh yeah,jenna
Jenna:yes?
Piers: not you Jenna.
Jenna :but he said MY NAME.
Piers: he means another Jenna.
Jenna:oh sorry
Issac went to his house to talk to jenna
Issac:where is our kids?
Jenna:Daycare
Issac and Jenna went to the day care to get their kids
Jenna(the young one): hello im jenna
Mary:hi im mary
fyro:im fyro
Piers:you had kids too?
Jenna; yeah i see you did too
Wave:daddy can i learn psycenergy?
Piers:sure
they left to the ship and headed for contigo and
when they got to contigo they went to hammas house on a hill overlooking the other houses.
Ivan:answer te door hamma
no answer
Ivan:open up
still no answer
Ivan:SPARK PLASMA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
dozens of plasma bolts hit the door
Ivan:HAMMA WHERE ARE YOU????????????????????//
the room turned pitch-black.
"ray"
the room lit up
They found hamma unconcious.
Hamma dissapered
A pheonix took her place
Ivan:its a trap
the pheonix fled
Ivan tried to use psyenergetic power to contact
Hamma sounded weak but ivan made mot the letter a-n--e-o
They decied to try aneomos santum when they got there the gate was still open
Hamma:help Me!!!!!!
Piers:PLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hamma: thanks a lot.
They now headed for jupiter light house
they heard menardi and karst talking
Menardi:whats taking them so long
Karst:I'm not sure.
Piers:lets do a sneak attack
Mary:I'll take care of this
Fyro:Me too
Jenna:Excuse me?
Mary:Flare!
a small flame appeared and struk menardi
Menardi:what on weyward.
Fyro:Fire!!!!
small flames scattered everywhere and some hit menardi
Karast:what the-
Wave:douse as rain drops hit karst
jenna:Drench as bigger drops hit karst
Piers:dimond dust as huge gems hit menardi
Jenna:sering beam no as a hugh beam hit them both
Issac:oddesy as three swords fell on menardi
Felix's sol blade began to glow MEGIDDO!!!!as he hit the sun tworads Menardi
Menardi:so thats who has been attacking us
Menardi:SUPERNOVA and casted a hugh explosion over felix
Harast:Meter blow as she sent a huge meteor towards isaac
Isaac: quake sphere as an earthquake happend
Felix:Bane as he poisiond menardi
Ivan:SPARK PLASMA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!as dozens of bolts hit karst
Mia:Ice missle
Pyroclasm
rising dragon
neriaid hit menardi
pyroclasm
Agaito:whats going on.
Agaito walks yp with satrous and dicovers the battle
Agaito:fire blow as fire hit everyone
Isaac:vine!!! as vines intangled everyone
Felix:ECHO!!!!as the dijinni hit menardi
Jenna:scorch!!!!!!!@!!
Ivan:Destruct Ray!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Mia:Pure wish
Isaac:Flint!!!
Felix:judgement
They all fled
Sheba:i thought i heard a battle
Felix:Uhhhhhhhhhhh...........hello
Sheba:felix
Felix:Yeah:sheba
Sheba:where is our kids
Issac,felix,Piers,Mia,,jenna,Ivan:YOUR KIDS
Felix:yeah...Me and sheba got married
Sheba:best day of my life
Felix(saying under his breath):yeah right
Sheba:what was that
Felix:nothing at all
Felix:so the kids aren't with you
Sheba:no
Felix Oh no.
Sheba:they not with you
Felix:Poor soul
Sheba:I know
Felix:where would she go?
Sheba:hmmmmm lets see...Anemos santum
they ventured into anemos santum and came across a girl trying to use psyenergy.
Felix:soul...what are you doing here?
Soul:uh-oh.....Hi daddy
Felix:what are doing Here????
Soul:learning psyenergy.
Felix:you learn any yet...
Soul: no
Felix:Thats okay me and sheba will teach you
Soul: thanks dad
They left the santum when wave saw a puddle.
Wave:daddy?
Piers:yes wave.
Wave:why is the puddle purple????
Piers HUH??????????
the puddle started glowing and a weird person started coming out
Mystery person:I am free At last!!!!!!!!
Piers:who are you?
Mystery person:You idiot Its me:Alex!!!!!
Felix,Mia Piers:Alex!!!!!!!!
Alex:Yes its me
Piers:why were you a puddle
Alex*(hits piers)*Shut up,you crazy water adept
Piers:who are you calling crazy you big idiot?
Alex:grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr...Spark PLASMA!!!
Felix:enough,how did you become a puddle??????????
Alex:simple,[i]when the four elemental beams hit me,Mt.aleph started to sink,Iwas still trying to master my power so when i was trying to use retreat,I winded up using frost so Mt.Aleph elemental balance was thrown off thus shooting me into the air when i came to the ground i was this puddle that you saw and you gave me enough energy when i sensed a lot of psyeneygy.
Felix:so how did you see th stone of sages form?
Alex:It began whenn the golden sun starrted to form.......
(THREE WEEKS LATER...)
Alex: and thats how it happend.
Felix: dont belive you...
Alex: What!!!!!
Felix:YOU HEARD ME!!!
Alex: What is not to belive?????
Felix: Everything!!!!!!
suddlenly,Garet and some guy in a mask come up using a new type of fire power
Garet: take this!!!!!!as he starts waving his hands and monitens his hands foward as huge fire spreads as he does so.
Alex: huh????
the guy in the mask did a flip and then he breathed fire but garet put his hands foward and quickly put his hands to the side thus canciling out the attack.
Garet: is that all you got?
Garet suddleny started doing a flip then he he kept punching,kicking,filps,and then he punched foward as a HUGEfire apeered and hit the guy from 50ft acroos the land
???: well done you passed your test garet.
Garet: allright I did it!!!!!!!!
Alex: what on earth was that!!!!!!!!!!!!
Garet:[color="blue"] Alex!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Alex: Thats right you idiot.
Garet,mad at the insult, did a flip and tried to hit alex,but alex dodged it and casted ice missle.
Alex: Anyway we shouldnt fight
Ivan: Why?
Alex: There is another world...a paralell world with people stronger than me.
Felix:awesome
Garet: Why should we trust you,
Felix: I belive him Garet.
Garet*Tries to talk but winds up getting hit by oddesy*
Felix: Please continue alex.
Alex: When I was on Mt.aleph i saw the people
on the other world and I think that someone is trying to knockover the lighthouse so they can sap enough power to open the invisable gate and go to the other world to become the strongest people in the world.
Felix:Menardi And co.
Alex: those idiots are alive?
Three months of talking...
Alex: you got it all now?
Felix: Yes and you can come with us if you want
Alex: why not?
Garet: *Tries to say something but gets hit agian*
(Alex joins party)
Eveyone:a Re you nuts!!!1
Felix:No,So garet how did use create fire without using psynergy???
Garet: Simple: There are 4 elamental warriors who can do this...I was in Prox When I came across the fire guy.
Inferno:Pleased to meet you.I was on vacation when i came across garet.
so I taught him fire moving....
Garet: ...and it rocks.
Jenna:awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Jenna:Daddy,I want to learn psyenergy NOW!!!
Piers:okay*Piers and Jenna walk off*
Mary:Mommy,teach me fire psyenergy
Jenna:Okay fyro you come too *Jenna,Mary,and Fyro leave*
Soul:*Looks at Alex*Why do you have such feeling Psyenergy????
Alex:Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Soul:Hey mom I want to go to contigo
Sheba:Okay Soul
Felix: Lets all go
When they got here Ivan Let everyone stay at their house beacuse Menardi destroyed sheba's house. Felix snuck out to create a new house using earth and feild psynergy.
Chapter 7: Sheba awoke in the middle of the night to see felix using psynergy to create a house and also snuck out .
Sheba: Felix,What are you doing up so late?
Felix:I want to live in a house us and soul can really like
Sheba:*Starting to tear*That is super sweet.In fact ill help you
Felix: No Way!!!!!!
Sheba: *Upset*(Darn I want to do this by myself)
Suddleny felix repeated what sheba was thinking and went inside and instantly fell asleep.
Sheba:*super-shocked* I have the power to control Minds...Awesome!!!!!!
Sheba now started using wind psynergy to make the house wind-proof.
Sheba then went to bed.
The next morning everyone woke up they saw the house was a real mini-manision

[Izar]

Lol, still very hard to read, and you could have psoted this in that other topic, not a new one.

You wanted this is an RP text format? It's probably easier in dialog.

[Somia]

Alright..so far it's okay, but it's kinda hard to rea, maybe u should try to underlien soem parts like Psysenergy or something.

[Izar]

Try putting the whole thing together as if it was a book, with "quotations" around what people say 'n all. Makes it alot easier.

[MysticWarrior]

Script format is convenient for humor fanfiction, but if you wish to make a sequel to GS1 and 2, I suggest you revert to normal writing.

[Someone Else]

I agree with all the stuff above.

Anyway, it ain't bad. But (just my random two cents) I really want GS3 to take place with a new generation of kids, Preferably Eoleo, cuz it'd rock to be a Pirate kid with magic. :lol:

[Elliott]

Ugh, talk about hard to read, try a different format like a few people said. But you're only 12 so we should prolly cut you some slack.

[blade]

i know in chapter four we find out that piers and mia had kids and were paying someont to take care of them also issac and jenna have kids too

[blade]

[ok ill give it a try thx

[I'm Always BROKE]

... I won't say it's bad. It's nice writen but... You didnt do this thing before didn't you? Oh and: It's Isaac not Issac... :lol:

[Izar]

blade, on May 31 2005, 09:34 AM, said:

i know in chapter four  we find out that piers and mia had kids and were paying someont to take care of them also issac and jenna have kids too

Holy moly! Hoe far in the future is this? It's good, kinda, but I mean... Kids?

[blade]

only 11 months. felix and sheba have a kid too also check out the twist

[Elliott]

I doubt a 19 year old would do a 15 year old and aget a kid in Weyard, this is starting to sound very farfetched.

[blade]

:angry: :P :angry: :angry: :angry: :( :huh: :) did you ever think psyenerygy accident may have sped up a few years in their livES :agitated: :agitated: :agitated: :agitated: :agitated: :angry: :agitated:
bESIDES...[B][FONT=Optima][COLOR=red]whop asked you!!!! :!: :!: :!: :!: :!:

[Elliott]

Learn BB code, learn english, and calm down, then I may just listen to you.

[blade]

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Im waring you back off

[Elliott]

Still hasn't learned BBcode, and a lot of R's really don't do much but stretch the forums.

[blade]

since no one was reading on my editing on the same post i am justi puutying the chapters i posted earlyier
Chapter6:Alex:Yes its me
Piers:why were you a puddle
Alex*(hits piers)*Shut up,you crazy water adept.
Piers:who are you calling crazy you big idiot?
Alex:grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr...Spark PLASMA!!!!!!!!
Felix:enough,how did you become a puddle??????????
Alex:simple,when the four elemental beams hit me,Mt.aleph started to sink,I was still trying to master my power so when i was trying to use retreat,I winded up using frost so Mt.Aleph elemental balance was thrown off thus shooting me into the air when i came to the ground i was this puddle that you saw and you gave me enough energy when i sensed a lot of psyeneygy.
Felix:so how did you see th stone of sages form?
Alex:It began whenn the golden sun starrted to form.......
(THREE WEEKS LATER...)
Alex: and thats how it happend.
Felix: dont belive you...
Alex: What!!!!!
Felix:YOU HEARD ME!!!
Alex: What is not to belive?????
Felix: Everything!!!!!!
suddlenly,Garet and some guy in a mask come up using a new type of fire power
Garet: take this!!!!!!as he starts waving his hands and monitens his hands foward as huge fire spreads as he does so.
Alex: huh????
the guy in the mask did a flip and then he breathed fire but garet put his hands foward and quickly put his hands to the side thus canciling out the attack.
Garet: is that all you got?
Garet suddleny started doing a flip then he he kept punching,kicking,filps,and then he punched foward as a HUGEfire apeered and hit the guy from 50ft acroos the land
???: well done you passed your test garet.
Garet: allright I did it!!!!!!!!
Alex: what on earth was that!!!!!!!!!!!!
Garet: Alex!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Alex: Thats right you idiot.
Garet,mad at the insult, did a flip and tried to hit alex,but alex dodged it and casted ice missle.
Alex: Anyway we shouldnt fight
Ivan: Why?
Alex: There is another world...a paralell world with people stronger than me.
Felix:impossible!!!!!
Garet: Why should we trust you,
Felix: I belive him Garet.
Garet*Tries to talk but winds up getting hit by oddesy*
Felix: Please continue alex.
Alex: When I was on Mt.aleph i saw the people
on the other world and I think that someone is trying to knock over the lighthouse so they can sap enough power to open the invisable gate and go to the other world to become the strongest people in the world.
Felix:Menardi And co.
Alex: those idiots are alive?
Three months of talking...
Alex: you got it all now?
Felix: Yes and you can come with us if you want
Alex: why not?
(Alex joins party)
Everyone: Are you nuts!!!!!!
Felix:No,So garet how did use create fire without using psynergy???
Garet: Simple: There are 4 elamental warriors who can do this...I was in Prox When I came across the fire guy.
Inferno:Pleased to meet you.I was on vacation when i came across garet.
so I taught him fire moving....
Garet: ...and it rocks.
Jenna:awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Jenna:Daddy,I want to learn psyenergy NOW!!!
Piers:okay*Piers and Jenna walk off*
Mary:Mommy,teach me fire psyenergy
Jenna:Okay fyro you come too *Jenna,Mary,and Fyro leave*
Soul:*Looks at Alex*Why do you have such feeling Psyenergy????
Alex:Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Soul:Hey mom I want to go to contigo
Sheba:Okay Soul
Felix: Lets all go
When they got here Ivan Let everyone stay at their house beacuse Menardi destroyed sheba's house. Felix snuck out to create a new house using earth and feild psynergy.
Chapter 7: Sheba awoke in the middle of the night to see felix using psynergy to create a house and also snuck out .
Sheba: Felix,What are you doing up so late?
Felix:I want to live in a house us and soul can really like
Sheba:*Starting to tear*That is super sweet.In fact ill help you
Felix: No Way!!!!!!
Sheba: *Upset*(Darn I want to do this by myself)
Suddleny felix repeated what sheba was thinking and went inside and instantly fell asleep.
Sheba:*super-shocked* I have the power to control Minds...Awesome!!!!!!
Sheba now started using wind psynergy to make the house wind-proof.
then went to bed.
The next morning everyone woke up they saw the house was so big it was virtully a manison.
Sheba:You like it?
Sheba:(whispering to jenna)watch this.
Sheba:(Man I want these people to fight!!!!)
Everyone started fighting.Jenna:Woah You can control minds?!?!?
Sheba:yep I sure can!!!!!!!! Wave saw everyone fighting.Confused he used deluge and snapped eveyone out of it. Sheba: Hey i was having fun there.Everyone looked at sheba.Sheba*thinking hard*ummmmmmm want to help me with our house???
Alex: No time.
They got on the ship and headed east for loho on there way a huge beast appeared and threw the ship over gaia falls
Chapter 8:Confused
Felix awoke.He found a note soon after he got up it reads:Felix,
went east.as soon as you wake up head east towards omahu
pass 2 tasks to get to omahu signed sheba.
feliix went down to the cargo hold to get a few vials ,some herbs, his dark sword, some rope, water of life, psy crystals, potions, and a few antidotes. and started east
his first task was big river of fire he pondered his option
1. he could buy snowcones.
2. he could cast odessy and use the big sword as a slider.
3. he could ran across it and die a dumb death.
he decided to go with number 2 he yelled out odessy and across the river to task # 2

(in voice that makes you want to to vomit)
NOWW FOLKS IT IS TIME FOR YOUNG FELIX TO TEST HIS WITS, IF HE SUCCEEDS HE WILL WIN
THE LUNA BLADE!!!!!!!!!!!!
a powerful blade capable of unleashing luna meteor!!!!!
also he will win the entrance key to omahu...
NOWW FOLKS IT IS TIME TO FIND OUT WHAT IS CHALLENGE WILL BE!!!!!
Felix has to cross a field with boulders going 180 mph!!!!
Felix started to go across and use quake sphere to redirect the boulders path.
He easy got across and when he got to the gate the luna blade dropped in front of him , he grasped the luna
blade, power surged through him as he steathed the luna blade and decided to give the sol blade to isaac for a birthday present.

He grabed the key and went into omahu .
Chapter 9 OMAHU
He went and found the INN and asked Where was Sheba and the gang was and went to room 5.
Felix: I'm here Sheba
Sheba:you made it!!!!I am so glad *kisses felix* Soul:"Daddy you made it!!!Felix: Like i wouldn't come for my favorite 2 girls.
felix: Where is everyone?
Sheba:SHOP...lets go there now.They headed for the wepon shop when they encountered a traviling merchant yelling:"Get your luna wands here""get your luna wands here" Sheba: how much?
Merchant;3,000,000 coins.SHEBA:WHAT?????Can you lower it?? Merchant: Not for a girl like you.Sheba *crying* that hurt my fellings. Felix,angry at the merchant for making sheba cry,unseathes his luna blade and points it at the merchant:you better give her one for free for that. Merchant :no.Felix:Oddessy!!!as three blades hit him.Merchant, surprised at the venus psynergy stomped the ground,thus sending felix up in the air with a huge earth collum.as felix was in the air he was charhing a super powerful ranarox.RANAROX!!!!as a huge blade hit the merchant,followed by a stroke with felix's sword.Merchant roswe his fist in the air,taking Big clo
ds of eath rose above felix when the earth was about to hit felix he heard sheba yell:Destruct rasy!!! as the rock split in half.felix,blinded by fury yelled:Grand gia,Stone spire, Quake Sphere,Oddessy,Grand gaia,Quake Sphere,Stone spire.all but oddessy missed him.merchant kept stomping the ground in different direnct as pillars of earth kept rising and stayed at that highet.the merchant lept o the pillars jumping at felix.Felix had an idea:He used quake sphere and used most of his might to control where it goes.he hit a pillar sending it to another pillar causing a chain reaction of crumbling pillars finally creating enough sparks to cause an explosion right in front of the merchant.as the merchant fell to the ground felix jumped and put his sword near his throat.Merchant: well done venus adept,you fight with much fire in your heart.I am the earth mover master of non earth psyenery gy you passed my test.Felix?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?.cool.
Merchant started and beams went towards felix after that he stomped the ground creating a pillar.
Merchant dissapered.Sheba at least i get a free luna wand*Happy*.
Isaac:What is going on.
Felix*grining*nothing...oh yeah happy birthday*hands isaac his sol blade
Isaac*emerald with envy*:wow the sol blade!!thanks
Felix:np.Isaac got the following for his birthday
1 pair of ninja gloves,2.a gem.3.an warriors ring.4.luna boots
a beting with felix 's pillar of earth

[blade]

Isaac:what country are we in?anagra?gondowan?Hesperia?Atteka?
Felix:we are not sure.Jenna: lets ask some one.
the inn guy:ask someone what?
Jenna:what conitent we are in?
Inn guy ;you are on the sol conitent.
Everyone?[color=green?????????can we buy a map for 20 gp?[/color]
They bought a map and looked at it there were a ton of different contintents.
Isaac:where should we go next???Felix:we should go to the city named canyon city.They all headed northwest across a lake with poision inflicted inside it.piers felt a plurge of psyenergy from the lake. he didnt know what to do.he decided to counter the psynergy with pure ply.the feeling left for a few miniutes but came right back...stronger than ever.Piers felt like exploding,he secreaty called out fog,"fog,go down there and find a sample of anything that is giving a plurge of psynergy.fog went down into the water ...
Chapter 10: the lake
fog went under the lake.he found a psystone but there wasn't charged psynergy inside but he grabbed it anyway.he found an tunnel,went through it,and found a network of tunnels,forming a maze there was a sign that read:only the one that is true and mighty may grab the treaure through the puzzle.to get it:one must have an eye of truth found inside this maze.Fog started to head left and started upward but there was a ogre guarding it.so fog went back.

fog went back up to the surface and pulled piers down here to see what is going on.
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yes i know its short but i had to go for a while ok?also i will post the rest of chapter 10 later

[blade]

Chapter 11:erase(note: about half of this CHAPTER is conversation so skip if you like)
When they got across the lake vines rose up and gems started falling.they hit everyone's head the gems glowed and then...blackness.
The next morning evrying started to wonder where-and who- they are.
Mia:who am I?
Piers who are you?
Felix:why am I here?
jenna: how did I get here?
Sheba:Huh who are you?
Garet:what the----
Isaac: how did I get here?
Ivan:huh?
(so on so forth)
Where are we?
Piers:what is this picture?
(the picture shows Piers and mia at the imil santum when they got married)
Piers so me and that girl are married???
Mia:I have the same picture.
Piers:so uhh What happend if we cant remeber our marrige???
Mia:i dont know but it is the same like i dont know my own name.
Felix:enough about your problems.who are we?
Jenna:yeah.
Sheba:maybe those 2 have a picture
Piers we will look.......heres one(holds a picture of jenna and isaac on there marrige day)
Issac:this is getting weird.
Jenna:so were are married too?
Isaac:seems that way.
Sheba:what about me?
Piers:I found a picture(holds a picture of felix and sheba on their marrige day)
*yada yada you get it*
Felix:now that we know everyone Lets get out of here
Piers:why do we have to answer to you?
Mia:yeah.
Everyone: i trust him

Piers&Mia:Fine were leaving!!!
(piers and mia leave the team)
Chapter 12:alone
Piers and Mia started towards canyon city .Piers:"can you belived that actullay worked,everyone knows water adepts are immune to memory loss"Mia:"I know and now we can start are own team"Piers"in fact faking stuff remindes me of how we faked sickness so we can privatley get married"
(flash back)(this is when they fist got to know each other)(anything in* *means that personis thinking)
It was at jupiterhouse when karast and agaito sprung the trap sending Mia and garet to the tiny ledge.
Piers:*that poor girl i have to help her*felix jenna sheba and piers headed for the top floor
when they got to their floor karast and agaito took out isaac and ivan.(all that happens in game next)piers and felix go to beacon(the lighting the battle etc.until they meet)
piers:*get this over with i want to meet that girl*
Mia:*why is that boy looking at me so weird*
(conversation)
Later on the ship piers goes to mia's room
Mia;oh its the boy who helped felix fight those two.
Piers:yes it is me miss.
Mia:call me mia
Piers:okay mia.
Mia:i like you for some reason.
After that mia and piers went on a date evey time they landed in a town.
(end flash back)
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------okay ill be gone for some time so you will have to wait sorry

[angelchii]

the only thing i hate about it is that..... they got married and had kids?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! no offense but man that's stupid

despite that it's kinda a little bit ok

[blade]

oh well, thx anyway
Now for the storys twist,

Mia:yeah I remeber that.We had 12 dates before we got married.but it took a year of dating.Remeber our last date at prox?
Piers:yeah:prox decied to have a carnival with everything from tolbi and contigo.
(flashback)
It was Piers and Mia's Last date. Piers had bought Mia a few things.Like rings
When a carnival opened up.Piers used psynergy to win a ultra water ring.witch allowed her to learn water explosion:a deadly water wave.
Mia and Piers Then went to a cafe that opened up where felix's parents were held.
It was there that piers and Mia ate when piers started to ask her to marry him.
Mia:Of course i will marry you piers!then they where at lemuria for their wedding.
(end flash back)
Mia:that was the best day of my life now.
Suddleny piers was hit by oddessy.Mia:glanced at piers:unconiunsiens.She turned around to find felix.
Mia:why did you do that?
Felix:gwa ha ha ha...Grand gia!!!!!!!Mia,confused,fainted.
Chapter 13:??????
Piers was the first to awake.he glanced around and relized he was on the ship.Piers started to get up but failed do to psykenitic chains..
Piers:"Mia wwwake up"
Mia:why did felix attack us?
Piers furious"what???that was felix???
Felix:so your awake.
Piers:why are you doing this?
Felix:*hits piers*shut up .but sinced you asked...i have been introduced to true power!!!!We were hit tablets which gave us power beyond control.Now we are all teamed with satrous and game.
Piers:why did you capture us though?
Felix:you have the last ingredient.*santches pier's tablet*This tablet will be of use ..,.I summon wave!!!
A huge creature appeared and hit felix.Felix
started to glow then he turned black.
Felix:at last i have true power!!!!
Sheba:did I hear that right?(sheba walks in her hair black)
Felix:Yes!!!
Sheba:my turn...but for wind adepts we need a water adept...piers.
Piers :"never" felix:(unseaths sword and holds it toward mia's throat)do it or your wife dies...Piers:okay(starts glowing)the water psynergy heads towards sheba and starts glowing.Piers there.sheba started to go out of control and light hit the chains...realising piers and mia...Piers:"Shade"as the mercury dinjji appeared in front of piers and mia.The light beam hit the barrier and hit felix and sheba...they went up in the air and crashed...then the beams went toward the tablet.piers reascted by hiting the tablet...it went inside felix...felix,now over powered caused a supernova sendingfelix against the wall...mia tried to heal him but failed.Felix was dead.
Tada how was that?