Well, here's my first one. My comp crashed alot which was annoying but I finally managewd to save it before it crashed again. I kinda had to rush it but who cares as long as someone out there finds it the least bit funny. :wacko:
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Silver Sun Because gold is too expensive!
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Posted 23 October 2005 - 11:21 PM
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Posted 23 October 2005 - 11:27 PM
Its pretty good, I like the tree part best though..
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Posted 23 October 2005 - 11:29 PM
Kind of average, except for the last cell. That brought a smile to my wrought iron mug.
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Posted 24 October 2005 - 03:43 AM
Any part that plain sucked or felt cheesy or wasn't funny at all? Basically, anything I should know that will improve my next page?
EDIT: Other than the background. That was just temporary.
EDIT: Other than the background. That was just temporary.
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Posted 24 October 2005 - 07:56 AM
Not really, the only part is the top part where you explain the backgrounds, because you explained it the backgrounds werent that funny anymore...
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Posted 24 October 2005 - 09:58 AM
I thought the fact that I'm telling people they were made by an 8 year old girl would have made the explanation funny enough to accept. Over 20 views and you're the only person who replied with an opinion, these people are hatin' on me. ;D
Come on people, take your fingers out of your arses and give me some feedback.
Come on people, take your fingers out of your arses and give me some feedback.
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Posted 24 October 2005 - 02:34 PM
*Takes finger out of his ars*
Typical Britisch humor... Take that as a compliment.
*Puts finger in mouth*
Typical Britisch humor... Take that as a compliment.
*Puts finger in mouth*
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Posted 24 October 2005 - 02:40 PM
I was expecting some offensive language from them.
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Posted 24 October 2005 - 03:23 PM
I like the tree part, but I think the Kraken part is a little overused or cheesy. Whichever one works. No constructivity in this critisism, however, because I suck and cannot think of one. <<b
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Posted 24 October 2005 - 04:45 PM
Meh. The last bit was alright. The tree diss was good as well. Other than that.....*grabs an ugly stick and starts smacking the comic* It's all good.
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Posted 25 October 2005 - 01:33 AM
Okay, alot of people like my tree diss thing. This can either mean you guys want to see more people/things getting abused or you have a tree fetish. Well I'm at my dads house right now so I may as well create page2 here. I won't have the pixel fonts I used but the sprites and stuff are all here. :wacko:
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Posted 25 October 2005 - 04:23 AM
Ladies and real ladies, I present you with the new and improved PAGE2. You can also see all pages as they are added on my first post.
http://jupiter.walag...SilverSun02.png
FEEDBACK. How funny is it?
http://jupiter.walag...SilverSun02.png
FEEDBACK. How funny is it?
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Posted 25 October 2005 - 03:46 PM
That Djinni issue ended kind of suddenly =P Nevertheless, the comic as a whole was pretty funny.
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Posted 25 October 2005 - 05:49 PM
Yeah I wanted there to be a variety of jokes that were short but varied so the strip could appeal to a wider range of people instead of just one bunch, I have no idea if I have achieved this of course and I doubt I will anytime soon since for some reason I'm getting alot less feedback than I expected. Either GSSF is really dying or my comic sucks some serious ass. :wacko:
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Posted 30 October 2005 - 10:34 AM
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ROFL. Both issues made me laugh.. pretty ****ing hard. >_>
No constructive criticism for you. >=T
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ROFL. Both issues made me laugh.. pretty ****ing hard. >_>
No constructive criticism for you. >=T
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