AURUS SOL
An epic postmodern retelling of the Golden Sun story
Sorry about the fact that FF.net is too dumb to host movie-script stories, and that GeoCities is too dumb to allow like 1kb of bandwidth per hour, so...yeah. You can still read it, though. Please post comments.
Full-length story + all artwork thus far
CONTENTS [PDF]
Scene 0: NOTES
Scene 0 Act i: INTRODUCTION
Scene 0 Act ii: TERMINOLOGY
Scene 0 Act iii: DIFFERENCES
Scene 0 Act iv: EXPLICIT
Scene 1: PROLOGUE
Scene 1 Act i: PAIN
Scene 1 Act ii: HEALING
Scene 1 Act iii: SANCTUM
Scene 1 Act iv: REVERIE
Scene 1 Act v: TRECHARY
Scene 1 Act vi: DESTINY
Scene 2: CURSE
Scene 3: PROPHECY
Scene 4: RETURN
Scene 5: IMMORTALITY
Scene 6: DEFINATE
Scene 7: EPILOGUE
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Aurus Sol A postmodern retelling of the Golden Sun story
#2
Posted 07 December 2005 - 07:46 AM
It's good, very dark and depressing (sad).
But I like how you used the camera, it makes it kinda hard to read cause of that but it does give me a kinda picture about how you want it to be..
But it's good :(.
But I like how you used the camera, it makes it kinda hard to read cause of that but it does give me a kinda picture about how you want it to be..
But it's good :(.
#3
Posted 07 December 2005 - 07:54 AM
Thanks! Like I said, the first chapter is dark and depressing, and the whole story is somewhat that way, but not to the same extent as the first chapter (for the most part).
I'm glad you were able to decypher what I meant by the camera actions and such; "script format" is against FF.NET policy, but I asked the help desk if Movie/TV script was okay, and they've yet to respond...hope it's okay.
Thanks for the reply though!
I'm glad you were able to decypher what I meant by the camera actions and such; "script format" is against FF.NET policy, but I asked the help desk if Movie/TV script was okay, and they've yet to respond...hope it's okay.
Thanks for the reply though!
#4
Posted 09 December 2005 - 06:56 PM
I'm getting an error message when I click on your link. Is there something wrong?
#5
Posted 10 December 2005 - 08:45 PM
Damn FanFiction doesn't allow for "script format", but I thought that only talks about those retarded stories like
Isaac: Garet, you suck
Garet: *kills Isaac*
-type stories. Apparently not.
Worry not though, I'll upload all of the story files to my own web host if FF.net doesn't agree with my opinions (I filed a complaint).
Isaac: Garet, you suck
Garet: *kills Isaac*
-type stories. Apparently not.
Worry not though, I'll upload all of the story files to my own web host if FF.net doesn't agree with my opinions (I filed a complaint).
#6
Posted 10 December 2005 - 09:16 PM
There, I uploaded all the original files (including some internal notes files) to Geocities in PDF format for your viewing pleasure. Enjoy.
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