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Aurus Sol A postmodern retelling of the Golden Sun story

#1   Adam 

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      Posted 06 December 2005 - 08:44 PM

    AURUS SOL
    An epic postmodern retelling of the Golden Sun story

    Sorry about the fact that FF.net is too dumb to host movie-script stories, and that GeoCities is too dumb to allow like 1kb of bandwidth per hour, so...yeah. You can still read it, though. Please post comments.

    Full-length story + all artwork thus far
    CONTENTS [PDF]
    Scene 0: NOTES
    Scene 0 Act i: INTRODUCTION
    Scene 0 Act ii: TERMINOLOGY
    Scene 0 Act iii: DIFFERENCES
    Scene 0 Act iv: EXPLICIT
    Scene 1: PROLOGUE
    Scene 1 Act i: PAIN
    Scene 1 Act ii: HEALING
    Scene 1 Act iii: SANCTUM
    Scene 1 Act iv: REVERIE
    Scene 1 Act v: TRECHARY
    Scene 1 Act vi: DESTINY

    Scene 2: CURSE
    Scene 3: PROPHECY
    Scene 4: RETURN
    Scene 5: IMMORTALITY
    Scene 6: DEFINATE
    Scene 7: EPILOGUE


    #2   Saturos S. 

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      Posted 07 December 2005 - 07:46 AM

      It's good, very dark and depressing (sad).
      But I like how you used the camera, it makes it kinda hard to read cause of that but it does give me a kinda picture about how you want it to be..

      But it's good :(.

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        Posted 07 December 2005 - 07:54 AM

        Thanks! Like I said, the first chapter is dark and depressing, and the whole story is somewhat that way, but not to the same extent as the first chapter (for the most part).

        I'm glad you were able to decypher what I meant by the camera actions and such; "script format" is against FF.NET policy, but I asked the help desk if Movie/TV script was okay, and they've yet to respond...hope it's okay.

        Thanks for the reply though!

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          Posted 09 December 2005 - 06:56 PM

          I'm getting an error message when I click on your link. Is there something wrong?

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            Posted 10 December 2005 - 08:45 PM

            Damn FanFiction doesn't allow for "script format", but I thought that only talks about those retarded stories like
            Isaac: Garet, you suck
            Garet: *kills Isaac*
            -type stories. Apparently not.
            Worry not though, I'll upload all of the story files to my own web host if FF.net doesn't agree with my opinions (I filed a complaint).

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              Posted 10 December 2005 - 09:16 PM

              There, I uploaded all the original files (including some internal notes files) to Geocities in PDF format for your viewing pleasure. Enjoy.


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