[Laharl]

yeah, i thought i'd post some of my stuff, but i warn you now some of it will Offend if you're religious, so sue me. btw plaguarists may be eaten. Only got my latest one with me atm.

World Affairs

From the tree of morals hangs justice,
while her executioner mire the sacred ground below,
Corruption, Greed, Death and Capitalism revel in their deed,
tightening their grip,
Capitalism wears a mask of peace,
to hide the glare of War in his eyes.

Hope lies dead in the gutter,
and Faith is just a puppet,
of the church that extorts the damned,
the damned who extort the pagans,
free yourself from the pompous dogmatic bull****
that controls your life.

I need to escape this,
the noose tightens it's stranglehold on my sanity,
razors kiss my veins,
I'm drowning in my crimson sea,
12 gauge kisses my forehead,
a savior in a shell,
end this life of misery.

So now i'm dead, who gives ****?
no one in this void, especially their manufactured god,
Religion, the deciever, perverter of truth,
Creationism, an abomination unto logic,
banish this demon, along with the rest,
and let the world know true peace.

[pHantOm]

Its very powerful and violent in a way, but I like the

"I need to escape this,
the noose tightens it's stranglehold on my sanity,
razors kiss my veins,
I'm drowning in my crimson sea,
12 gauge kisses my forehead,
a savior in a shell,
end this life of misery."

Very well written, good job. I like alot :P