A lot of people like poetry, so I dug some stuff up that I wrote during the summer. I like what everyone else is writing, too! :o The first two have been edited and finalized such. The rest are still free to be changed.
"The Fisherman's Silence"
The fisherman's silence
Unsettles us all.
We stand on the wharf
With him;
He used to be so chipper.
His tears float down
His strong, broad face.
Just as his wife's ashes
Float out
With the rippling tide.
"Memories of An Old Man"
The old man sits there
Wondering about things old
And knows he is lost
"Bad Day"
The boy stood straighter, inquizitive
The girl slouched in her seat, sad
The boy approached her, questioned
The girl mumbles, inaudible
He sat down, food tray in hand
She looked upon him, mournful eyes
He smiled at her, concerned
She smiled back, fake
They said nothing more
There was silence, uncomfortable
The bell rang, summoning
He said goodbye
She half smiled
She left
He stood, staring after her
He felt, pain
He didn't know, what?
He felt it inside, deep
They were connected, a bad day
"Wonder"
I wish I could tell you about
How much I love you
But I don't think you'd
Understand just how I love you
I can try to explain it
But it wouldn't come out right
I don't want you to think I'm a fool
There's a chance you will either way
I sit and wonder if you feel the same
I can only hope so
Because I'm spineless;
I'll never find out
(I was in love at the time, hehehe....)
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Posted 23 April 2006 - 02:45 AM
The last one sounds like a japanese song...
i like it ^^ keep up the good work!
I hope to see more stuff
but could you try other topics?
i like it ^^ keep up the good work!
I hope to see more stuff
but could you try other topics?
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