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My Poetry ....

#1   Kemosabi 

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    Posted 22 April 2006 - 10:10 PM

    A lot of people like poetry, so I dug some stuff up that I wrote during the summer. I like what everyone else is writing, too! :o The first two have been edited and finalized such. The rest are still free to be changed.

    "The Fisherman's Silence"

    The fisherman's silence
    Unsettles us all.
    We stand on the wharf
    With him;
    He used to be so chipper.

    His tears float down
    His strong, broad face.
    Just as his wife's ashes
    Float out
    With the rippling tide.

    "Memories of An Old Man"

    The old man sits there
    Wondering about things old
    And knows he is lost

    "Bad Day"

    The boy stood straighter, inquizitive
    The girl slouched in her seat, sad
    The boy approached her, questioned
    The girl mumbles, inaudible

    He sat down, food tray in hand
    She looked upon him, mournful eyes
    He smiled at her, concerned
    She smiled back, fake

    They said nothing more
    There was silence, uncomfortable
    The bell rang, summoning

    He said goodbye
    She half smiled
    She left
    He stood, staring after her

    He felt, pain
    He didn't know, what?
    He felt it inside, deep
    They were connected, a bad day

    "Wonder"

    I wish I could tell you about
    How much I love you
    But I don't think you'd
    Understand just how I love you

    I can try to explain it
    But it wouldn't come out right
    I don't want you to think I'm a fool
    There's a chance you will either way

    I sit and wonder if you feel the same
    I can only hope so
    Because I'm spineless;
    I'll never find out

    (I was in love at the time, hehehe....)

    #2   Yuki 

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      Posted 23 April 2006 - 02:45 AM

      The last one sounds like a japanese song...
      i like it ^^ keep up the good work!

      I hope to see more stuff
      but could you try other topics?


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