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Somia's Short Stories & Poems

#1   Somia 

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    Posted 26 April 2006 - 04:29 PM

    Well...yes, I write too. Just mainly too lazy to type most of the things I write out, like a GS fan fic I wrote a while back, for now I'll just put up a Prologue I wrote for a Fiction of mine - Lunakatte.

    Word Bank: (Yes you need to read this to fully understand the poem)
    Clan/Elements:
    Water Clan of North--Mithura
    Fire Clan of East--Flaniac
    Earth Clan of South--Eascaig
    Winf Clan of West--Cydrile
    Remphya is the name of the continent.
    Auriona and Aathrelle are goddesses of the land.

    Lunakatte III: Rise of the Ancient Lineage
    Prologue
    Gazing upon the distant sky,
    Where a charmed ancient tale was told.
    Wind soars,
    Water weaves,
    Reviving the forsaken legacies.
    Fire flares,
    Earth rustles.
    Uncovering those mystical lullabys.
    "When one unbalances the rest of thee,
    Auriona and Aathrelle will hear your pleas."
    The future of their home land lies within their hands,
    God's messengers will grant the strenghth for them to stand.
    Flaniac's greed, plants destruction's seed.
    Mithura's lead, will set Remphya free.
    They are the chosen children of light,
    They will repaint repaint the false azure sky.
    Bright, oh holy bright light,
    Reveal yourself to the blood spattered site.
    Pale, oh darkness' pale slaves,
    Let the swift wind take you back to your graves.
    Fight! Fight off the crazed beasts,
    And restore Remphya's glorious east.
    Rise! Rise like the waves of the ocean,
    And storm away the bitter censations.
    Rewrite the legend that will soon be erased,
    Open a new page and trace our Lunakatte's grace.

    This post has been edited by Somia: 27 April 2006 - 08:55 PM


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      Posted 27 April 2006 - 10:35 AM

      Wow, very poetic, and an awesome way to write a prologue. If you have more to show, I recommend you show it because you definitely have a talent!

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        Posted 27 April 2006 - 07:58 PM

        I can tell this is gonna be a good read. Great way to start, with an opening song-ish approach.


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