[Valistrix]

Okay! So i'm writing a new fan-fiction, but hey, I won't ruin anything for you. It'll be up very soon, soon as i've sorted things out. But how about a little preveiw?

Rico flashed his Assult Rifle frantically around the cold, dark cavern. He was alone.
So alone the silence pierced his ears.
Darkness embraced him, warning him.
Shadows lurked, tormenting him.
He knew what this meant.
Death.
His flashlight flickered, slowly fading in and out of the man's only light, a symbol of hope. "Bloody lights!". As if offended by the comment, the battery lost it's power. Death finally had it's chance. Suddenly, the bellowing roar drummed into Rico's confined prison. He slowly paced backwards, stumbling into the un-welcoming wall.
Trapped.
Sweat slipped from his forehead, diving through the air until hitting the floor. Tears swelled up in his eyes. Aiming his rifle in any direction, he let out a barrage of bullets fire aimlessly around his death chamber. The deafening clutter of the bullets was silenced when heavy thumps emerged only a few paces away from him.
The time of judgement had come. He glanced upwards only slightly, before he came face-to-face with Death itself.

So for now, I hope all enjoy.

[Caael]

Oooooh, me likes, me likes.
One small bit of criticism: Why would he have a gun in a prison cell?

Other than that, it's good. Post teh rest when it's done.

~Lord~

[Valistrix]

Well, it's not exactly a cell, and you have no idea 'what' got him there, eh? *Wink*

With a bunch of free-time on my hands i've already started. Stay tuned over the weekend!

[Platinum Sun]

I like it. Very descriptive. Just keep in mind that all italics gets old really fast.