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Ds's Doodles Not art. Doodles.

#1   Ironsight 

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    Posted 15 January 2008 - 09:37 PM

    Okay, first things first: 1) I don't expect this to last long. I'm only doing it because i'm bored and stuff. 2) This isn't art, their just doodles I do while bored at school. 3) Most of these are RP inspired. Trust me, you wont find anything origional here. Just badly sketched versions of existing franchise/charecters/ect.

    This was done during English class. It's basicly somewhat like what I imagine a Scythe from the Yesterday in the Future RP. (He's not wearing shorts BTW)
    http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/3320/scythevn1.th.jpg

    And this is the same Scythe, just put through an X-Ray.
    http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/3474/scytheskeletonzj5.th.jpg

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      Posted 15 January 2008 - 10:24 PM

      Lovin' the O SHI-

      Those are pretty awesome, actually. The poses seem to be pretty nice as well. I mean, there's not much you can critique about doodles XD

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        Posted 15 January 2008 - 10:53 PM

        nice art

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          Posted 15 January 2008 - 11:21 PM

          eh, killercoz, try posting something a little bit more productive than that. Remember, 5 words is the minimum for posts outside of the common room. And the art topic is for posting art and critiquing it. It's courteous to give pointers, advice, even pick apart a piece of art so the artist can improve.

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            Posted 16 January 2008 - 04:34 PM

            They're pretty amazing for doodles, I'll tell you that much. If I had a scanner , I'd post my drawings of cars. *sigh*

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              Posted 16 January 2008 - 04:54 PM

              Nice drawings, but if you look at a human ribcage there arent any ribs past the halfway point down your spine. Plus they all join into the sternum. But other than that, I like them, original.

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                Posted 16 January 2008 - 05:00 PM

                View PostEarth Dude, on Jan 16 2008, 05:54 PM, said:

                Nice drawings, but if you look at a human ribcage there arent any ribs past the halfway point down your spine. Plus they all join into the sternum. But other than that, I like them, original.

                Thanks Mr.Know-It-All.


                Great doodlings there DS.

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                  Posted 16 January 2008 - 05:25 PM

                  http://www.dkimages.com/discover/previews/1002/20014810.JPG

                  The ribs also curve upwards, not just sideways. Apart from that minor detail, very nice. You should draw more.

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                    Posted 16 January 2008 - 05:40 PM

                    View PostIcy, on Jan 16 2008, 12:21 AM, said:

                    eh, killercoz, try posting something a little bit more productive than that. Remember, 5 words is the minimum for posts outside of the common room. And the art topic is for posting art and critiquing it. It's courteous to give pointers, advice, even pick apart a piece of art so the artist can improve.

                    You're right, so I am going to take this oppurtunity to be more constructive. I dont know much about art, so my points probably might not be consice. Anyways, I do not personally like this drawings after looking them over more carrefully. They have no mystery or interest to them. It doesn't explain a view or a concept, it is just a monster. I guess I look for something different or advanced skills when I look at art. Then again, I have no ability of my own in art, so who am I to judge.

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                      Posted 16 January 2008 - 06:48 PM

                      View PostEarth Dude, on Jan 16 2008, 02:54 PM, said:

                      Nice drawings, but if you look at a human ribcage there arent any ribs past the halfway point down your spine. Plus they all join into the sternum. But other than that, I like them, original.

                      Huh, your right. I guess I never really payed attention to what a human ribcage looks like. I could try to defend myself in saying its not really human, but then i'd be wrong again.
                      Oh well, thats why I prefer to make little drawings instead of actuall ones.

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                      But other than that, I like them, original.

                      Eh, not completely origional.

                      View Postkillercoz, on Jan 16 2008, 03:40 PM, said:

                      You're right, so I am going to take this oppurtunity to be more constructive. I dont know much about art, so my points probably might not be consice. Anyways, I do not personally like this drawings after looking them over more carrefully. They have no mystery or interest to them. It doesn't explain a view or a concept, it is just a monster. I guess I look for something different or advanced skills when I look at art. Then again, I have no ability of my own in art, so who am I to judge.

                      There just doodles. It's not like I put every ounce of effort into them like Icy or Linear (or CR).


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