[BearerOfKikuichimonji]

As i lay there in my bed,
And thought every deep thought,
I started to wish i were dead,
As i started to think of the battles i've fought

A slit in my throught is all it would take,
And my life would end,
I thought that all my friends were fake,
So why lay here day and day again

I shut my eyes and grabbed the knife,
I knew my dark goal,
Then there was a simple slit, there went my life,
There went my soul

[Mallick]

that is pretty good,I wish I could write stuff like that but I just cannot,but people can wish and if your wish is true then maybe the answer shall come to you
see isn't that horrible?I suck at writing ^_^

[BearerOfKikuichimonji]

i'd never do suicide ^_^ i just wanted to right something dark

[Mallick]

I know but it is good writing I just wish I could write good ^_^ the best I can do is here on this site

[BearerOfKikuichimonji]

^_^ thanx. writing just takes inspiration. anyone can write with some

[Iloverpgs]

That's a good poem there I thought it was a little to dark for me though but most peoms that I see are like that good job!

[BearerOfKikuichimonji]

^_^ ty. i'm working on another now