there i layed
in a puddle of my own blood
i couldn't believe i'd been slayed
all i could see around me was mud
i tried to stand
but i could not
i layed there on the cold land
i couldn't even remeber who i fought
my life started to leave me
i wished i could see at least one friend
i couldn't believe this was how it would be
but then my life came to an end
this one came from my head, iloverpgs
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R.i.p.
#2
Posted 28 July 2004 - 12:37 AM
Hmm not bad!But i'm just wondering wouldn't it take a little longer to put all the music stuff and all together?
#3
Posted 28 July 2004 - 01:18 AM
whatta ya mean :mellow: i just get inspired. i think the stuff up on my own :joy:
#4
Posted 13 August 2004 - 11:00 AM
its alright very original ahh what am i sayin i do now nuthin ill shut up now
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