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The Rift:parts 4,5,6,7,8,9,10

#1   Isaac13 

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    Posted 27 August 2004 - 03:07 PM

    'Now, Jenna's sick with the disease. What have I done?'
    Isaac has been in bed for 3 days. No recovery yet, and he feels slightly weak.
    Knowing not what to do, His mother decides that he can use Potent cure now often.
    "Potent cure!"
    Isaac feels a little better, but not so completley healed.
    "How's Jenna doing?"
    "Not so well," Felix opens.
    "She's been in an unconsious state for 3 days."
    "This is all my fault. I opened out all my grief and wound up with this. I'm not a good husband after all."
    "Don't say that, Isaac. Even though you came down with it, and infected her with it, you can still save her. Use potent cure."
    "Okay. Potent cure!"
    Jenna opened her eyes and saw to figures standing. One of them was her brother Felix, and the other was...
    "Isaac! You're okay!"
    Jenna jumped out of bed and hugged her husband with all her strength. Sh then kissed him lightly on the lips.
    "Well, not entirley. Jenna, Your'e crushing me!"
    "Oops. Sorry. So, did you get the cure?"
    "No. I used Potent Cure. It's a temporary cure. Only lasts for about a few hours."
    Just then, a ghostly figure appeared in front of all of them.
    "Gasp!"
    "Alex?"
    'Yes, Isaac. How are you feeling?'
    "Fine, for a while now. What are you..."
    'Doing here? Quite simple, my friend. The Cure.'
    "Cure? You have it?"
    'No, you do.'
    "What do you mean?"
    'What do I mean? The Mars star. You have it. In your room.'
    "My room! The Mars star! How do you?"
    "Know? The wise one told me. He poured the power of the Golden Sun into the Mars Star and gave it to you. That is the cure.'
    "Thank you, Felix! But, I don't know what to say... I..."
    'You could deliver some of that Power to me.'
    "What? No! We need to get well!"
    'So be it... but, there are rumors of another unlit lighthouse.'
    "WHAT?!"
    'The rift. Isaac. The rift.'
    "Rift? What rift?"
    "Isaac. Mia and I saw this rift, a huge crack in the Earth to find a cure."
    'It's possibly melted by now.'
    "What? The welding in the rift? It's gone?!'
    Alex nodded. silence was abound as the party was shocked.
    "How can we get to this rift?"
    'It's just... oh, I don't know, possibly right next to you.'
    "What? What are you... oh, my!"
    A crack was right next to the group.
    "Issac. The rift will swallow the Earth if we don't stop it."
    "I agree. But, why don't we get the cure first."
    "Sure."
    Just before jenna and Isaac went upstairs, a loud knock on the door went.
    "I'll get it." Isaac's mother pronounced.
    She went to the door and opened it.
    And there was Dustin. He was drenched in sweat and needed refreshment.
    "The others... they're... down there... Ugh..."
    "Oh! Isaac! Do you have any psyenergy stones?"
    "Yeah! Right here."
    The group sat down as Isaac gave the stone to Dustin.
    "Thanks, Isaac. Get your cure and hurry. The last Lighthouse is down there."
    "What is the name of this lighthouse, I might add?"
    "Saturn lighthouse."
    "Saturn..."
    As the others were thinking, Isaac and Jenna went upstairs to get their cure.
    They both drank the elixer and after that was done, ghostly spirits lifted from their bodies and disintegrated.
    "That's over. Let's go."
    "Right."
    The group rejoined and jumped into the rift.





    Part five
    The saturn lighthouse trials

    "Hey! What took you so long?"
    Garet opened with a smile.
    "Glad to see you Garet."
    "Isaac? Your'e okay? Yeah!!!"
    "Dustin? Are you there?"
    Mia called out.
    "I'm right here, Mia."
    "Oh, thank goodness! I missed you!"
    "So did I, Mia."
    They both shared a long, and hard kiss on the lips.
    "We have to light this lighthouse before the rift destroys the Earth!"
    Isaac claimed as he ran toward the door into the lighthouse, a mosnter stepped out of the entrance way.
    "Too easy!"
    Isaac readied his weapon, as did the others.
    And began battle.
    Issac opened up with Meggido, and swung a huge meteor like fireball at the Behemoth king.
    It stepped back, and shook off the pain.
    "This thing is immune to unleashes?!"
    After that, the Behemoth king pushed the party back to a crevice.
    "Hmph, so we're to be be pushed off a cliff!"
    Dustin said as he attacked the enemy.
    "Annhialation!!!"
    Lights sparked as he summoned a huge spirit to synche with his sword and attacked the king.
    It fell back and tumbled to another crevice.
    "Everyone, we must push it down the cliff! Come on, together now!"
    "ONE, TWO, THREE!!!!!"
    Everyone yelled as they summoned their standby monsters.
    "Duluhann!!!"
    "Catastrophie!!!"
    "Boreas!!!"
    "Kirin!!!"
    "Judgement!!!"
    "Kirin2!!!"
    "Judgement2!!!"
    They all unleashed the wrath of their summons and the behemoth king fell to it's death.
    "That took alot of energy out of me!"
    "I'm fine though."
    "Let's continue on!"
    "Okay!"
    The party went on as they found certain puzzles belonging to each element, they completed them.
    "Were okay. Now, let's get to the erie."



    Part 6
    The wise one returns


    "The puzzles were no challenge."
    "Were at the erie, but I see no bowell."
    "Neither do I. Do you have the saturn star, Dustin?"
    "Yeah, right... here... Oh, no."
    'Always clueless, are'nt you?"
    "Is that, you, wise one?"
    'Yes, it is me. I have come to stop you.'
    "Why?! We already defeated the..."
    "Oh, right, sorry."
    'No, no. I have come to fight you in order to prevent you from lighting this lighthouse. And it is not called the Saturn lighthouse.'
    "Then what is it?"
    'Earth.'
    "But Venus is..."
    'Yes, but the Earth is the symbol for all things. Water, Earth, Fire, Wind.'
    "But, why would you take the Earth Star from me?"
    'What do you think?! To stop you of course!'
    "We don't want to fight you, wise one."
    'Too bad.' The wise one engaged in battle with the group.
    "Why would you do this, wise one?" Dustin asked.
    'For the befifit of Mankind.'
    Dustin opened his attack with Meggido but the wise one just deflected it.
    "How? How did he do that?"
    "Looks like we can't use our unleashes."
    "Then, we'll just have to use psyenergy! Annihalation!"
    Felix did his attack, but the wise one threw him off of the lighthouse.
    "FELIX!!!"
    Jenna screamed as her brother fell down all the way to the bottom.
    "Psyenergy is useless, too."
    "Then, I'll just use... Catastrophie!!!"
    The god of death and suffering roared down, and used it's power.
    The wise one just took the hit, and bounced it back at the party.
    Everyone was in pain as they groaned on the floor.
    But, they managed to get up and continue their defense.
    "It's time to use... Mother Gia!!!"
    Isaac caused a massive earthquake that hit the wise one, and bouced back at Isaac.
    "GAHHH!!!!"
    "Isaac! Are you okay?"
    Jenna was worried.
    "Yeah, I'm fine."
    "Nothing will work on him. What will we do?"




    Part 7
    Enter Alex-fusion

    "My turn! Explosion!"
    Garet brought up a mountain of fire as he hit the wise one, but it was also in vain.
    "Darn! Nothing can hit him!"
    'That is right. I am invincible.'
    'If your'e invincible, how come you are cowering in fear?'
    "Alex?!"
    'Hello, friends. Let me handle this. Go help Felix. He could use some assistance.'
    "He's alive?"
    'Clinging for his very life.'
    The party rushed down the steps as they saw Felix, hanging onto a dragon statue's head.
    "Felix! Your'e okay!"
    "As okay as I'll ever be. I need help."
    Felix struggled to hold on, but his strength was slipping.
    "Just like Vale, huh? That accident a few years ago?"
    "Were not losing you again, Felix! Now, come on!"
    Jenna pulled her brother up and Felix was back on dry cement.
    "The wise one?"
    "Alex is taking care of that."
    "We need to help him!"
    "Righto."
    The party reunited ran back up the steps to the arie, where they saw Alex and the wise one, glowing in unition.
    "Alex? How could you?"
    "I want power. It's all I ever dreamed of."
    There was a huge flash of light, and Alex was there, fresh and powerful.
    "Now, let us begin."



    Part 8
    Virge of defeat

    "Everyone, attack him!"
    The whole party raised their weapons for unleashes, but Alex froze them, as if time had frozen it's self. Alex, in one swift punch, had knocked everyone down.
    "We can't stop him... we're too weak to even lift a finger. It's the end."
    Felix had already lost hope. They needed some way to figure out how to stop Alex, or they were all dead.
    "Any last words, Adepts?"
    There was silence in everyone.
    "Oh, well. It is time to die. I thought you would be stronger by now. It was fun."
    "Not... yet... Alex..."
    "What?! Isaac! You're up? This... will be a pleasure."
    "Not yet, I still have some strength in me... I think."
    "I laugh at your bold attempt to stop me."
    Alex was right. Isaac had no chance of winning this battle.
    Isaac's strength was egshausted, so he fell back down.
    "Foolish mortals."
    "Meteor shower!!!!"
    Alex summoned many large Meteors in order to fall down and crush the group.
    All hope was lost. No one was around to save them. No more Adepts.
    Then, as if a miracle happened, !0 Adepts, well, ghosts of them had held back the Meteors.
    'We will deliver to you our powers. Use them well.'
    The ghosts flew into the bodies of the fallen heroes, and the Adepts who were defeated, stood back up again.
    "I'm refreshed!"
    The whole party said.
    "Our powers are back!!! We can defeat Alex!!!"
    "Now, team! Together!!!"
    "UNLEASH!!!!!!!!"
    They all unleashed their weapon's powers and aimed them right at Alex.
    "No!!! How can this be?! It is impossible!!! I will return, Adepts, and annihilate you all!!!!!"
    Alex's body flew back and went to the farthest reaches of the planet. he was thought to have crashed in a far away forest.
    The group stood, heavily weak, and tired.
    "We have done it. We have saved Wayward, and the planet."
    Both couples, Isaac and Jenna, and Dustin and Mia, shared long and hard kisses.



    Part 9
    Days later, the group talked on how they really beat Alex.
    "Well, I infected him with Warriors guilt. And then, spirits from it came and restored our bodies to defeat Alex."
    Isaac said.
    "Very well planned, Isaac. Now, can most of us please go our seperate ways?"
    Felix said.
    Everyone laghed and commented each other on how they fought.
    "Well, I gotta go back to Anemos Sanctum. Mia's going with me, of course."
    Dustin said.
    "Right. We'll see you again."
    Isaac complemented.
    Everyone shared their last good byes as the whole party split ways.



    Part 10

    Forests and forests away, Alex's body slept, for many years to come, he would stay there.
    Then, one eye opened.



    The End
    Hopefully!

    #2   Isaac13 

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      Posted 27 August 2004 - 03:18 PM

      Who ever wants to talk with me about the rift, post here.
      I am a lover of star wars too, so don't get all confused about the star wars stuff.

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          Posted 27 August 2004 - 10:36 PM

        I LIKE!I LIKE!!!I wish I had talent *sighs* but oh well I guess I have my guitar. *picks up electric guitar and plays crazy solo*I actually did what I said inside these**

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          Posted 29 August 2004 - 01:57 AM

          well, the stories are a little short, and 9/10 of the whole sotry is talking, without knowing who talked. I think you must put more details in your story. who is waying what? were are they? how does it look like? those are some questions I don't have an answer to, maybe in the next chapter (if you will make one) you can make a more detailed story. but still, it isn't bad or something, just... not finished. 7/10

          (btw, these images take up a lot of space from the forums... that might cause that GSSF reaches his maximum...


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