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Age Of Hinoto Chapter 1

#1   cyberRoll 

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    Posted 01 September 2004 - 11:13 PM

    Long ago a long and greusome war was fought. A war with no victor at this time during the war the planet was seperated in two one half was with the inoto family the other Tokanoyo. the kings of both sides had began the war and one of thier eldest sons would end it. on the day the eldest son of the hinoto family had turned 15 the family had sent him hoping for him to end the war. even now the war rages between two familys and only one victor..........
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    Off goes the young warrior of the hinoto family either to return home or to never see daylight again.
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      Posted 02 September 2004 - 11:36 AM

      A little shortt, but definately interesting. Plz write more.

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        Posted 02 September 2004 - 11:45 AM

        Chapter 2 Assassin from the enemy family.

        'Why exactly are we fighting this war?' Hinoto wondered in his mind 'Can't we give it a rest?' Hinoto paused for a moment. Then he hurled around took up a pebble from the ground and tossed it into a bush. "Owwwwwwwwww! Ow ow ow ow ow!"
        A voice called from the bush. "Why have you been following me?" questioned hinoto with his back to the bush.A short person popped up.
        "C'mon was I really that easy to find out?," The person called back."Sorry I forgot to introduce myself I am assassin 1 from Tokanoyo family. I have been sent to stop the advance of you for the Tokanoyo family will win this war!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
        Hinoto knew this could mean trouble but then again what could a four feet weakling do. Assassin 1 drew his sword and swung it. Hinoto flew back having been hit by a tremendous force. then assasin swung again.this time Hinoto was prepared he held up his sword as if he was blocking a close contact sword slash. the force hit again this time at his sword.Hinoto saw sparks flying. The assassin kept on throwing powerful slashes.' I underestimated him. Can't keep this up much longer.'Hinoto gave up all hopes of survival.At this point his armlit began shinning. He just had a burst of energy and for some reason when he blocked the attacks deflected then Hinoto threw a slash at assassin 1.Almost as if out of nowhere assassin 1 flew back crashing into a tree. :lol: Hinoto could not understand how he got this energy. Why couldn't he unleash it before? What if he can't summon it again? 'Calm down the time will come when you use it again. Just not yet.'A hand reached out and grabbed Hinoto's shoulder. "You dont give up do you." He saidsuddenly Hinoto fell to his knees in pain his body was competly aching." I'm surprised you could stand that long after being hit by my attack you're certainly something."said the assassin"you son of a ---"Hinoto begain "Now now lets not get too wordy now." I'll just take you in and collect my ransom." Hinoto was too weak to do anything about it. He raised his hands showing he gave up."Good enemy"BAM Hinoto was knocked unconcious. ^_^
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        :huh: :!: "Where am I?"asked Hinoto. "Silence welp" replied a guard nearby. Hinoto looked over to his side a person sat on a slightly cracked bench. You in the Tokanoyo prison. :!: "Your kidding" "DO THESE RAGS LIE TO YOU" replied the person. 'Can't believe it I'm in prison.' Thought Hinoto.


        And thats it for this chaper pretty goon huh?

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          Posted 02 September 2004 - 11:47 AM

          sorry about the shortness of the first one it was late that night and that was all I could think of.

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            Posted 02 September 2004 - 11:49 AM

            Lots of action. But if he's an assasin...why didn't he just kill the guy?

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              Posted 02 September 2004 - 11:49 AM

              nice story, but you use to much ! marks (forgot the name). also, try using more comma's.

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                Posted 02 September 2004 - 11:51 AM

                the assassin wanted the money for bringing in the charecter. plus the story wold have stopped right there if he died.

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                  Posted 02 September 2004 - 11:59 AM

                  cyberRoll, on Sep 2 2004, 01:51 PM, said:

                  the assassin wanted the money for bringing in the charecter. plus the story wold have stopped right there if he died.

                  But then he really isn't an assasin is he? More of a bounty hunter...

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                    Posted 02 September 2004 - 12:01 PM

                    actually he was hired to stop his advance he was going to get more money to bring the guy in alive.(just being greedy thats all!)

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                      Posted 02 September 2004 - 01:16 PM

                      Nice story, cyberRoll. I am interested in more. But, just hurry and do chapter 3. And, fix your grammer mistakes.

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                        Posted 02 September 2004 - 03:12 PM

                        Chapter 3 Escape from the cell.
                        ' My weapons are by that cell over there,' Hinoto thought 'and the guard is asleep then maybe...' ^_^ "Hey you in that cell! Prisoner!" said Hinoto the prisoner across from his cell looked up "Pass me my sword" he looked down at the sword in front of his cell.The nearby guard woke up after hearing Hinoto. "Aye! Pipe down welp." 'Blast it didn't work.' he thought.
                        He looked at the guard infront of his cell. :!: Hinoto reached out Through his cell and struck the back of the guard. Knocking hin unconcious. His keys flew out to the cell across from Hinoto's. The prisoner opened up his cell. Walked out and bowed at Hinoto"Thanks for realesing me. I'd do the same but im in a hurry." He ran off.
                        'Failed again' Thought Hinoto. He looked down at the floor outside off his cell. :lol: His sword rolled over when the other prisoner opened his cell. He took his sword and cut open his cell. Hinto took the guards uniform and used it to diguise himself. He walked down one corridor "Piece of cake" said Hinoto"Yes Colonel" Said a near by officer Named Pi-okay.Hinoto had to think fast.
                        He decided he should turn around and walk the other way. Which he did 'Nice and easy' he thought. He continued to walk down the corridors. ' Which way is out?' He thought.
                        He continued to walk He began nearing a five-star war army General 'Slick and smooth' He thought. he walked past the General.He continued walking. However the General stopped.... "Intruder in the South wing" He said. Hinoto froze being identified in enemy territory was suicidal. Hinoto Drew his sword."HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! you think you can defeat me? I am a five star war army General. Fine fight me for me to see if you can beat me!!!!!!!

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                          Posted 02 September 2004 - 03:19 PM

                          WOW, that's really good cR, keep em comin, wish I had talent like that...

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                            Posted 02 September 2004 - 03:36 PM

                            yo who else is here

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                              Posted 02 September 2004 - 03:37 PM

                              A good story. Keep it up.

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                                Posted 02 September 2004 - 03:38 PM

                                thaks what are you doing now

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                                  Posted 02 September 2004 - 03:40 PM

                                  My cahpter six is done. Read it if you wish. It's long though. :D

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                                    Posted 02 September 2004 - 03:41 PM

                                    like i care it must be good

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                                      Posted 02 September 2004 - 03:46 PM

                                      cyberRoll, on Sep 2 2004, 05:41 PM, said:

                                      like i care it must be good

                                      Now,now. That's not very nice. Saying "Like I care."
                                      That's not nice.

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                                        Posted 02 September 2004 - 03:51 PM

                                        Isaac13, on Sep 2 2004, 05:46 PM, said:

                                        Now,now. That's not very nice. Saying "Like I care."
                                        That's not nice.

                                        LIKE I CARE!!!!! :D
                                        stop changing your avatar every day :D

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                                          Posted 02 September 2004 - 03:53 PM

                                          Fine. I won't read yours. I'll just have this topic closed, forever if you mind by the administrators. Now, what do you say?

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                                            Posted 02 September 2004 - 03:55 PM

                                            I can if I want to.

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                                              Posted 02 September 2004 - 03:55 PM

                                              *sigh* :D sorry happy!!!!!

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                                                Posted 02 September 2004 - 03:57 PM

                                                Isaac13, on Sep 2 2004, 05:55 PM, said:

                                                I can if I want to.

                                                fine ill just tell everyony your real name!!!!!!!

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                                                  Posted 02 September 2004 - 03:58 PM

                                                  Thanx. Now, would ya read chapter 6?

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                                                    Posted 02 September 2004 - 03:59 PM

                                                    FYI I have already read it

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                                                      Posted 02 September 2004 - 04:00 PM

                                                      cyberRoll, on Sep 2 2004, 05:57 PM, said:

                                                      fine ill just tell everyony your real name!!!!!!!

                                                      Go on! I dare ya!

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                                                        Posted 02 September 2004 - 04:01 PM

                                                        isaac 13's real name is ******!!!!!!1

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                                                          Posted 02 September 2004 - 04:02 PM

                                                          Isaac13, on Sep 2 2004, 06:00 PM, said:

                                                          Go on! I dare ya!

                                                          Issac13's real name is ******!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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                                                            Posted 02 September 2004 - 07:07 PM

                                                            That's not funny. They could just look at my profile.

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                                                              Posted 02 September 2004 - 07:33 PM

                                                              Yo, cyberRoll, don't double post and flaming unneccesarily, I'm not a mod but you can get into trouble for doing that, calm down... good comic though

                                                              Isaac13, don't double post and steal someone else's thunder, I like ures too but please if someone wants to read it, they will okay?! Now stop fighting!!!

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                                                                Posted 02 September 2004 - 07:43 PM

                                                                Don't worry. This always happens. It's normal. It's not actually a fight. We already said our sorries

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                                                                  Posted 02 September 2004 - 07:46 PM

                                                                  I no, but I don't like fights and you shouldn't flame or double post.

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                                                                    Posted 02 September 2004 - 07:47 PM

                                                                    Uh, huh. Okay. I'll remember that.

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                                                                      Posted 02 September 2004 - 07:49 PM

                                                                      Anyways, next chapter cyberRoll

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                                                                        Posted 02 September 2004 - 07:52 PM

                                                                        Chapter 4 Battle with the General

                                                                        Hinoto charged at General with all his might. The General simply slid to the side."HA! HA! HA! HA! You are a weakling you can't touch me.Suddenly BAM!Hinoto hit the General in the back."AAAACCCCCCKKKKKK!!!! danm pest," He hollered " you're betteroff dead!!" The general gave off an amazing display of psyenergy.He used inferno on Hinoto."AAARRGGG!!" cried Hinoto in pain
                                                                        "HA! DIE YOU BAST-" the General suddenly stopped. He saw Hinoto's wrist band glowhe remembered when Assassin 1 told him 'becarful of his band. When it's glowing it means trouble."
                                                                        'Yeah like I'm going to listen to a four foot weakling. When the General finaly stopped Hinoto face as somehow different.It was calm almost. It was fearless with a look of pain.It was dull almost. He was scared "AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH DIE DIIIIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEE" The more the General attacked the more the armlet shineed, the more the face changed. When the General stopped He was terrifed. His face was plain white. "ho-ho- ho- How'd you survive you should be dead." The general hollared.
                                                                        "HA! you gall youself a General You look like a trainee.SOUL STEAL!!!" Hinoto pointed his finger at the general. "You're dead" was the last thing the General heared before he saw beautiful swirls of light then one mighty one.Now the generals skin was as pale as Hinotos skin was.
                                                                        :mellow: :!: "What am I doing here Wherever this place is?" said Hinoto he looked over at the pale white body by the door. 'Oh dear what could have happned here.' He cautiosly stepped over the body. ' I dont know why bu a short time ago I felt like a different person. oh well there is the exit better leave.' :)


                                                                        Thats chapter four nice cliffhanger huh?

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                                                                          Posted 02 September 2004 - 07:57 PM

                                                                          Be careful with your swearing in your fanfic. People Administrators could find it and tell you to keep it to a mininum. They could possibly close the topic.

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                                                                            Posted 02 September 2004 - 07:58 PM

                                                                            AHHH, write more must know

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                                                                              Posted 02 September 2004 - 08:29 PM

                                                                              Yes, write more, i guess.

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                                                                                Posted 02 September 2004 - 09:47 PM

                                                                                yea write more its getting kinda interesting since theres nothing better to do right now :)

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                                                                                  Posted 17 September 2004 - 04:29 PM

                                                                                  Hi guys sorry it took so long to update. I started scholl and forgot to put in the introductions and leaving.

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                                                                                    Posted 18 September 2004 - 10:10 AM

                                                                                    Huh. Started school I have too. Use the Force Luke. Control, control, you must learn control!

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                                                                                      Posted 18 September 2004 - 12:00 PM

                                                                                      Finally I have time to update my story.

                                                                                      Chapter 5 Not Again!

                                                                                      Hinoto stepped out of the stone gray door."Ahhh the beautiful fresh air. Exept it's changed. It's foggy and something is different..." *crack* " you again.. listen pint sized baby I'm on a mission something weird happened inside and I
                                                                                      NEED a breath of fresh air. Besides where are you going to take me this time? your general is GONE."Hinoto said. "oh there are other places but this time i'll kill you and bring in your body."Said assassin 1"Persistant ******* aren't you?" "You've got it the other way around.Die!!" Assassin 1 came charging at Hinoto with incredible speed. " I'm to tired to be doing this." Hinoto wispered. Clang! thie swords clashed. "Eat this you you I don't know!"Assassin 1 said "why your'nothing but a pesky kid!" Hinoto called over the sword clashes. "I guess i'll have to finish you off quickly then now that you know my secret." Assassin 1 jumped back in the stance he was in the previous chapter( chapter 1) He swung his sword.this timt the air waves where visible."Ha ha I'll win!"
                                                                                      "Think again kid"Hinoto called out.His armlet glowing. "Tttt-hhhhat armlet it is glowing! AHH Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeese don't kill me!" "Give pity to those who don't use it? sorry not my style. PROTECTER OF SOULS I CALL FOR POWER NONE TO THOSE WHO DON"T USE IT! GIVE ME INFERNO FROM THE PITS OF HELL!" At this point Hinoto glowed with red fire ."YES NOW INFERNO!" The reddish aura flew off Hinoto and onto The assassin. "No please I don't wanno die Please spare me!"He cried out " Too late."Hinoto said.:mellow: :huh: "what happened here? Hinoto looked up he saw a freshly burnt skeleton."Why do I always miss the action? A well Better get going...?"

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                                                                                        Posted 18 September 2004 - 12:20 PM

                                                                                        It doesn't matter if it happens alot or you guys don't care, Flaming and double posting is against the rules!You guys should know that. :mellow: n00bs

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                                                                                          Posted 18 September 2004 - 12:23 PM

                                                                                          Hey piers DM thats not funny.

                                                                                          #45   Isaac13 

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                                                                                            Posted 18 September 2004 - 01:26 PM

                                                                                            Stop arguing! NOW!

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                                                                                              Posted 05 October 2004 - 05:10 PM

                                                                                              If you are waiting for the next chapter then wait until Friday Saturday or Sunday. ok?

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                                                                                                Posted 14 October 2004 - 04:25 PM

                                                                                                Dude. No one is reading this! Can't you see that?!


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