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Star Wars: Jedi Knight Jedi Academy 2 Star wars story. Interesting!

#1   Isaac13 

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    Posted 18 September 2004 - 10:40 AM

    This story is gonna be based a few years after Jedi Academy 1. For any of you who have played Jedi Academy, here is the story: The Sith lord Marka Ragnos has been resurected. The Jedi have lessened, and some of them have turned to the Dark side. Only a few Jedi are left, and they are without support. I already began this story in my notebook, in the real world, so it will take at least a few days, mabey weeks, hours or months to complete. I just gave you an intro, so here are the characters.

    Dramatis Personae

    Dustin Ihekwaba( Yes my last name. I rule!)
    Jedi Master; Rouge squadron commander
    Matt Sidoti; A friend of Dustin
    Jedi Master
    Luke Skywalker; you know him. Jedi Master
    Mara Jade Skywalker; Jedi Master
    Kyle Katarn; Jedi Master
    Marka Ragnos; Sith Lord
    Reborn; Dark Jedi
    Jaina and Jacen solo; Jedi Knights
    Linear; Jedi Master
    Link; Jedi Master

    All characters here are all human. I hope you enjoy this story
    when I write it!

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      Posted 18 September 2004 - 10:45 AM

      Oh it sounds really good, i'm gonna like it cos i've played jedi academy and completed it all difficulty and both sides and i'm a huge star wars fan so make it good for us

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        Posted 18 September 2004 - 10:47 AM

        Hah hah! That's good! I've beaten it too many times! I've picked the Jaden Kor
        with the blonde hair, the black vest, and he is the male one. What's yours?

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          Posted 18 September 2004 - 11:09 AM

          I picked the normal male one and can I please be in your story?

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            Posted 18 September 2004 - 11:24 AM

            This is gonig to be interesting. *eats popcorn*

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              Posted 18 September 2004 - 11:39 AM

              Interesting huh?*joins Linear with the eating of the popcron* WHAT NO BUTTER?

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                Posted 18 September 2004 - 12:13 PM

                I can put you in my story if you guys want to be in it. Hey can I have some pocorn too?

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                  Posted 18 September 2004 - 01:27 PM

                  Hey i'm here two! *Starts eating popcorn* post the story soon I13 and thanks for putting me in it :mellow:

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                    Posted 18 September 2004 - 03:04 PM

                    Well sounds okay, I might be interested.

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                      Posted 23 September 2004 - 10:52 PM

                      wow sounds great! i looooove star wars, im about to put that game back on my computer (long story why its off)

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                        Posted 26 September 2004 - 09:03 AM

                        Ok ok when will it be released its been ages

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                          Posted 26 September 2004 - 02:45 PM

                          HeyI13 hurry up and post your story.By the way how do you put a picture on top of your sig?

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                            Posted 26 September 2004 - 03:49 PM

                            :blink: ooOooOOoo...can I be in the story too? *eats popcorn reading just in case she forgot anything*

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                              Posted 26 September 2004 - 07:56 PM

                              I can't wait to see how this turns out. *Steels Linear's popcorn*

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                                Posted 02 October 2004 - 02:15 AM

                                cyberRoll, on Sep 26 2004, 04:45 PM, said:

                                HeyI13 hurry up and post your story.By the way how do you put a picture on top of your sig?

                                That wasn't relevent to this topic go post it in artwork.

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                                  Posted 03 October 2004 - 03:10 PM

                                  o.O;; It's been a while since he even updated....oh well...O.O How do you post a picture on top of your sig? @_@ That was random...

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                                    Posted 04 October 2004 - 02:50 PM

                                    Hey, guys. sorry I took so long.
                                    Well, here goes.

                                    Star Wars
                                    Jedi Academy II


                                    Jedi Knight Dustin Ihekwaba flew into YavinIV's atmosphere,
                                    after visiting the hoth system. He was sent there to take care
                                    of some disturbaces. He only fell into a trap by Marka Ragnos.
                                    ' Damn him. I have to be more careful.'
                                    He thought. Once he had landed onto the landing pad of the Jedi Academy,
                                    He went to see Master Luke Skywalker. He found Jedi Masters Linear, and Master Link.
                                    " Hello, Dustin. Was your trip to Hoth progressing?"
                                    Linear said.
                                    " Well, if you count Ragnos's reborn attacking me, yeah. It was."
                                    Dustin said back. Link shrugged.
                                    "Then, if you needed some help, you could have asked someone."
                                    "Look! I know how to handle Reborn okay?!" Dustin boomed. He had never been this angry before.
                                    'I need to watch my anger.' He thought to himself.
                                    "Well, see you later." Linear said.
                                    "Yeah. You too." Dustin waved goodbye to his fellow Jedi. He also saw Colonel Tycho roaming the halls.
                                    "Tycho! How are you?" He asked.
                                    "I'm fine. We just finished another mission on Cajiim. The planet is ours once again. How have you been, lately?"
                                    Tycho asked.
                                    "Oh, you know, so so. I need to get to Luke."
                                    Dustin said.
                                    "I'm sorry, but Luke has left to Dagobah to visit Obi-Wan Kenobi."
                                    A figure came in and said. It was Kyle Katarn.
                                    "Kyle! How are you?"
                                    "Just myself. Been teaching the kids while you were gone."
                                    Kyle said.
                                    "Oh. I see. Well, thanks for the update. I gotta go. See ya round."
                                    "Anytime, Dustin." And Kyle walked off.
                                    'Always so mysterious and all.'
                                    Dustin thought.
                                    Tycho then left to his Y-wing.

                                    It was late noon when Sith Master Marka Ragnos was dueling with a Master Reborn. He had challenged him to a death match. The Reborn gradually accepted the challenge. Marka had activated his saber and swung left.
                                    The Dual Reborns saber blocked that move, but was backed by Ragnos's power.
                                    "Come on. Now. Let loose your anger. Only that can destroy me."
                                    Ragnos said in confidence. The Reborn master had all his fury built up and attempted a gutting stab. He missed and Ragnos easily slayed him with a lower cut.
                                    "Easy kills all the time."
                                    He said. He then went to his throne and called forth two Reborn.
                                    "It is tiem to put our plan into action. The Revival of Darth Vader shall now begin. But, instead of one, we shall create an army of them. That will strike the utmost fear into all the Jedi."
                                    He said.
                                    "Yes, Master Ragnos."
                                    Both Reborn said in a low tone.
                                    They both exited the room and Ragnos sat waiting for their return.


                                    On Dagobah, Luke Skywalker was chatting with Dead Jedi Master Obi-Wan Kenobi.
                                    "Obi-Wan. Have you ever heard of the Eye of Palpatine?"
                                    Luke asked.
                                    "No. Not at all. It seems a mystery to be revealed."
                                    Obi-Wan said.
                                    Then, the ghost of Anakin Skywalker appeared.
                                    "Luke. I know what it is. It is another planet killer. A horrid machine that will destroy even the whole New Republic. The Emperor had it built some time after Darth Vader slayed all the Jedi."
                                    Anakin said.
                                    "I see. Thank you. Father, Ben. I have got to leave now."
                                    Luke said.
                                    "Take care, Luke."
                                    Obi-Wan said.
                                    "Stop by and visit again."
                                    Anakin also said. Luke then got into his Xj X-wing and took off.
                                    'A machine that also can destroy planets and such. This is bad.'
                                    Luke thought.

                                    Back at the Jedi Academy, Dustin was teaching a vast few of Jedi Children.
                                    Along with the help of Jaden Kor.
                                    "Thanks, Jaden I would not have handled this class all by myself."
                                    Dustin said.
                                    "Don't worry about it. I'm supposed to teach too, you know."
                                    Jaden spoke.
                                    "Yeah. But thanks anyway."
                                    Dustin walked out of the room and returned to his quarters.
                                    'Well, it's not all bad. The Sith have been extinct for some time, now. At least we will have some thrill instead of too many kills.'
                                    He thought.
                                    Then, the day went by.

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                                      Posted 05 October 2004 - 11:12 PM

                                      =D Cool, I'm in it! Yay...! *claps and wonders if anyone wants popcorn* @.@ Continue it soon Isaac13!

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                                        Posted 06 October 2004 - 06:39 PM

                                        Your welcome. And thanks for the kind remarks. I spent some time making this story.

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                                          Posted 06 October 2004 - 09:18 PM

                                          @.@ Well stories cant be made just like that. Stories are created by the persons heart and emotions, so I know. @.@ Many others too.

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                                            Posted 09 October 2004 - 08:03 AM

                                            Please don't say it's the end I13 it's brilliant.

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                                              Posted 10 October 2004 - 09:22 AM

                                              Sorry. I was just waiting for more replies.

                                              Part 2


                                              Jedi Master Luke skywalker has just returned to YavinIV, at the Jedi Academy, he was glad to see all the Jedi Knights and Masters teaching all the students.
                                              'Everything is going well. It looks like we will have the Jedi back into power.'
                                              Luke thought as he passed all the classrooms. He then thought of Dustin. He forgot that he had returned from Hoth. He rushed over to the TRaining room, and saw Kyle and Dustin sparring. His wife, Mara Jade Skywaler, along with Masters Link and Linear, watched from above.
                                              "Just like them not to watch from below." Luke said.
                                              He then turned his attention to the fight. He saw a parry that went to Dustin's head, but was blocked by the Jedi Knights lightsaber. Dustin then elaped into the air in a high somersault, then landed on Kyle's head. Kyle fell down, losing his balance. He quickly then got up to block Dustin's next move. Dustin brought his lightsaber down to Kyle's blue saber. They clashed, and then untangled. Dustin landed on the floor, exhausted and sweating, he turned off his lightsaber.
                                              "That's it, Kyle. You got me." He said.
                                              "Hey, you did pretty well yourself, kid." Kyle said back.
                                              'Yeah, but your'e a Jedi Master. There's no way i can beat you, yet.' Dustin thought. He was right. He was soon to be a Jedi Master, as soon as he completed one task. He didn't know what it was yet, so he just waited for Luke's overview of it.
                                              "You two did very well, today." Luke said
                                              "Luke! I didn't know you were there. By the way, I need to give you my report."
                                              Dustin said in an act of surprise. He bowed in Luke's direction, and came back up.
                                              "So, did you find anything about this Eye of Palpatine?"
                                              Kyle asked. He wiped sweat from his face and deactivated his lightsaber.
                                              Luke looked down in saddness.
                                              "It is another planet killer. The Emperor had it built by the time he and Vader destroyed the Jedi."
                                              He said.
                                              "Oh, depressing." Link said. He and Linear came down from the viewpoint and landed on the floor. They both walked up to Dustin and Kyle.
                                              "You guy's did well today." Link said.
                                              " Yeah, thanks. I think we did." Kyle said.
                                              "I think it's our turn to spar. We've been waiting all day."
                                              Linear said.
                                              'Yeah. Sure. I need to get to my quarters. See you later."
                                              Dustin said. He walkedout the door to the quarter area's of the Academy.
                                              "That Linear sure is calm about things. But she can sometimes be too serious. And to believe one time I actually kissed her. A wierd feeling."
                                              He said as he went to his quarters and got into bed.


                                              "Okay. Yes Master." A Reborn said as he received his order from Marka Ragnos. His order was to go to Bespin and stop the Jedi from securing the area. He was to bring 10 other of his Kin with him. He went to his ship, the Bane of Ragnos, and saw his fellow Reborn in the passenger seats.
                                              "Are you ready? I am ready to kill some Jedi today."
                                              He said. He strapped himself in and blasted out of the skies of Korriban.
                                              Once they were in space, the Reborn aboard the ship got ready to make the jump to Lightspeed.
                                              "Setting coordinates to Bespin. Getting ready to jump to lightspeed. Jumping on my mark. Three, two, one, mark." The Reborn pilot said. Stars turned to streaks as they went to hyperspace. The ride would be long, so, tehy had decided to gather their energy for the ride. They used the Force to completly heal themselves, and went to sleep. They would sense tehor coming to Bepin and wake up at that moment. They had nothing to worry about.

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                                                Posted 10 October 2004 - 11:57 AM

                                                Woah cool story, HAH that was funny bout Dustin and Linear kissing, lol. Continue it soon buddy you're doing well.

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                                                  Posted 10 October 2004 - 02:37 PM

                                                  o_O;;;;; Meep...! O.O Nani????? Yare, yare~! Nice story Isaac13...! =D Cant wait to see the next chapter...! *claps*

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                                                    Posted 10 October 2004 - 06:53 PM

                                                    Jedi Academy
                                                    Part three


                                                    "Am I in love with Linear? I'm probably just crazy. She's just my friend. That's it. I cannot be in love with her. I should talk to Luke about this."
                                                    Dustin said. He was woken up by a dream, a horrible one as it was.
                                                    He went to Luke's room, and saw him meditating. He thought that he shouldn't bother him, but he had to talk to the Jedi Master about this.
                                                    "What is it you want to talk about, Dustin? I'm free for advicce." Luke said. It seemed he was out of his trance. He got up and walked up to Dustin.
                                                    "Well, I seem to be in love with Linear. Do you have any ideas?" Dustin asked.
                                                    "Well, at last you start to let your emotional life in some time. Well, I fell in love with Mara. She wanted to kill me at first, but then we fought a battle side by side. We defeated the enemy, and all of a sudden, we were in love with each other. I gave her my father's lightsaber, she refused at first, but then, a few months later, she accepted it. Then, as soon as you know it, we got married. It took time. But we had our start in love."
                                                    Luke said. He walked over to the doaid. Then he walked toward the door, and turned around. He made a guesture towards a protocal droid to give him some Jawa juice.
                                                    "If you are in love with her, just tell her. I know it will take some time, but you'll tell her. I know it." He said as he left the room.
                                                    'Wow, nice advice. I guess I should tell her.'
                                                    Dustin thought. He went to Linear's quarters, and came just in time to see her undressing.
                                                    "Oh, God! Sorry! Sorry! I'll leave now!" He said. He rushed out the door and walked along the cooridor.
                                                    'Oh, no. What am I gonna do, now? I can't tell her yet. I'm too... embarrased.'
                                                    Dustin thought. He shrugged as he turned around, once again to Linear's quarters.
                                                    Linear emerged, fully dressed this time and looked at Dustin.
                                                    "Sorry about that. I uh, forget to lock my door. I usually do it, but I sometimes forget." She said. She apologized for screaming and throwing stuff at Dustin, and then hugged him.
                                                    Dustin blushed as he also wrapped his arms around Linear. His stomach was turning as the embrace got harder. He couldn't breathe.
                                                    Then, as he was on the brink of fainting, Linear let go of him.
                                                    "I'm sorry. I gotta go!" She exclaimed. She went outside, looking as she needed fresh air.
                                                    " I am on the vurge of dying. She nearly crushed me. I think she likes me. I hope she does. " Dustin said. His hopes grew as he walked down to the hangar bay.

                                                    " Kyle. What's the report from Luke?" Jaden Kor asked.
                                                    "Well, I haven't gotten anything from him, yet. I think he needs more time. He might be gathering his thoughts, or better yet, planning for our counterattack against the Eye of Palpatine." Kyle answered. He shrugged, and folded his arms.
                                                    "Well, I believe that he is just meditating, or mabey talking with Mara Jade." Jaden said.
                                                    "Now don't make any conclusions. You don't know what goes on in the mind of teh Jedi Master. I know that you are one now, Jaden, but you shouldn't start talking about the ranks of Masters higher than you. I think he is just gathering his thoughts. Don't start a fight with me. I don't want to kill anyone." Kyle said.
                                                    "We'll see, Kyle. We'll see."


                                                    Commander Dustin Ihekwaba came out of Hypersp-ace, along with the rest of Rouge Squadron, appearing to see the dark side of an Imperial Star destroyer.
                                                    He ordred all wings to report n and lock S-foils in attack position.
                                                    "Okay, guys. Lets's make this run nice and swift, shall we?" He said over the transmission scope. He flew in with his three flight and attacked the shield generators. He banked his X-wing left and saw some TIE fighters behind him. Ten of them to count. He saw the shield generators and flew straight to one of them. He jammed on his accelerator, and then slid his ship ship straight up. All ten TIE's slammed into the generator, and it blew up.
                                                    "Yes! Finally! 7000 kills now! Yeah! Okay Rouges. Concentrate all your fire dtaright on the second generator." Dustin said. He saw most of the squadron still alive, so he had nothing to worry about. Lietenant Commander Corran Horn had both of his wingmates gone, so he had to do it alone. He went to the underside generator and shot three laser bolts at it. It exploded, and there was one more to go.
                                                    He regrouped with the others, and saw the battle was raging on. There were more TIE's than X-wings, so they would have a hard time.
                                                    "Dek! Dek, pull up!" Dustin said. His wingmate had a TIE on his back, and his shields were down.
                                                    "No. I'm alright... AH!!!!" Dek's X-wing disintegrated and sparks just flew in space.
                                                    "Guys! We have to destroy the last generator! Now! quickly!" Corran yelled over his channel. Dustin had the situation solved. He had shot two torpedoes at the generator. And it blew up.
                                                    "Okay! Now, for the command deck!" He yelled. What was rest of the Squadron, rushed the command deck with a volley of proton torpedoes. It blew up with a complete lightshow.
                                                    "Hooah! That got em'! Now, let's get outta here. We lost too much of the squadron as it is already." Corran said. All 7 ships jumed to lightspeed, and went back to the fleet.
                                                    "Looks like another victory for the New Republic!"
                                                    Dustin yelled.

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                                                      Posted 10 October 2004 - 08:50 PM

                                                      o.O O.o <.< >.> O.O Nice chapter...! =D I want to know what happens next!

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                                                        Posted 11 October 2004 - 10:22 AM

                                                        Hey you said i'm in it, i'm hardly in it at all, where'd I go :mellow:. Nice story though, keep it up.

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                                                          Posted 11 October 2004 - 05:47 PM

                                                          @.@ He did put you in the story. Maybe he'll give you more things to say later in the story. @_@ I have no idea though.

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                                                            Posted 11 October 2004 - 06:20 PM

                                                            Linear, on Oct 10 2004, 10:50 PM, said:

                                                            o.O O.o <.< >.> O.O Nice chapter...! =D I want to know what happens next!

                                                            Hey, Link. Don't worry. You are going to Bespin along with me, Linear, and Kyle. We get caught up in some Reborn fighting. I hope you will enjoy it. When I write it anyway...

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                                                              Posted 11 October 2004 - 09:32 PM

                                                              O.O ooOOoOo......cool Isaac. ^.^ Cant wait to see it when you make it!

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                                                                Posted 12 October 2004 - 09:33 AM

                                                                wicked Isaac13 youre definatley gonna be in my new story.

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                                                                  Posted 12 October 2004 - 03:20 PM

                                                                  Part 3
                                                                  Jedi Academy 2


                                                                  Dustin wandered the halls of the Jedi Academy. He had just gone through a rough mission at AlzocIII. He had to stop the Imperial convoy from getting a cargo load of super weapons onto the planet. He and Rouge Squadron had succeeded in doing so and returned safely. But some of his men were lost in the battle.
                                                                  "That was some mission. I guess I should go do some training excersises." He said. Just as he was about to get to his quarters, Link came and stopped him.
                                                                  "We have another mission. Luke has asigned us to Bespin. He senses some disturbances there." Link said. He shrugged, knowing Dustin would refuse. he had gone through a mission already, so he should take a break.
                                                                  "No. I'm fine. Let's go. Who else is coming with us?" Dustin asked.
                                                                  "Linear, and Kyle." Link answered. Dustin's heart thumped madly. He started sweating. But, he knew what was going on.
                                                                  "Okay, let's go." Was all he said.

                                                                  Linear, Dustin, Kyle, and Link all went to their own ships. Kyle, the Ravens Claw.
                                                                  Dustin, his specially modified XJ X-Wing. Linear, her won specially modified XJ X-Wing as well, and she had another ship, a corellian frieghter, but she had decided to take the X-wing because it was faster. And link, his own fully armored Jedi Starfighter.
                                                                  "Okay, everyone. We will have to guarentee that we will have a safe ride to Bespin." Dustin said.
                                                                  "Yes, yes. We know all that, Dustin." Link said.
                                                                  "Don't let anyone behind once you set in your hyperspace coordinates. You'll get lost." Kyle marked as an imortant trajectory.
                                                                  "Of course, Kyle. We won't lose anyone. We know that much already." Linear said. All 4 Jedi started thier fuel thrusters on their ships, and took off.
                                                                  "Okay, guys. Setting coordinates for Bespin now."
                                                                  "We blast off into lightspeed at kyle's mark."
                                                                  "On, two, three, mark." Kyle said. Stars turned to streaks as the ships all went into hyperspace. It wsa a short ride to Bespin. Only a couple minutes. Once they got there, the Bespin guards opened the doors inside Bespin. There, the Jedi formed groups of two. linear with Dustin, and Kyle with Link.
                                                                  both teams split up to seperate areas. Linear followed Dustin all the way to Carbon Chamber 178. The doors closed behind them both, as if it was a trap.
                                                                  There was a figure ahead. It was not very visible, but linear could sense a tremor in the Force.
                                                                  "Dustin. Iv'e got a bad feeling about this." She said.
                                                                  "Don't worry." Was all Dustin said. There was heavy breathing at first, then a red lightsber activating.
                                                                  "I sense you, Jedi." That was what the voice said. It sounded cold, almost evil. Dustin activated his green lightsaber, and Linear her silver one. Both Jedi jumped up to meet their foe. Lightsabers spun around as if in a dance. Dustin delivered the first blow, only to be blocked by the foe's red saber. Dustin looked into the face of the enemy, seen to be a Reborn.
                                                                  " I thought so." Dustin said. Linear then delivered a side thrust, once again blocked by the Reborn.Both Jedi were pushed back by the power of this Reborn.
                                                                  Then, the Reborn pulled out another saber. He ignited that one, and he now had two sabers.
                                                                  "A dual phase Reborn." Dustin said.
                                                                  "This will be a fight that we may lose." Linear remarked.


                                                                  Kyle and Link traveled the buliding of the Bespin mining platform. They saw nothing to begin with, so they went to the dining room. There, they also saw nothing. So, they went back to the landing platform. There, they got a surprise. They saw a Reborn there. Right there. It looked like he killed the Bespin guards.
                                                                  " A Reborn? Oh, no. Luke did have a wierd feeling about this. Be extra careful, Link." Kyle said.
                                                                  "Right. I'll be fine." Link activated his black lightsber, a rare color for lightsabers these days. And Kyle activated his blue one. Both Jedi jumped at the Reborn, who was wielding a double bladed lightsaber, and lalnded a kick at him. The Reborn moved back a little bit, and ran towards the Jedi. They exchanged blows, Kyle swung his saber to the Reborn's head, and the enemy blocked. Kyle was pushed back by the Force and went unconcious. So, Link was alone. Link delivered a backhand thrust twoard the Reborn's belly, but the double saber countered him. Link was pushed back a bit, but was still in action.
                                                                  " Thsi may be a problem. He said. He just stood there, thinking of a next tactic.

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                                                                    Posted 12 October 2004 - 03:35 PM

                                                                    heh, another good chapter isaac. keep it up.

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                                                                      Posted 12 October 2004 - 06:15 PM

                                                                      Linear? You have any idea where Link is? He hasn't posted here for some time.

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                                                                        Posted 12 October 2004 - 06:16 PM

                                                                        x.x;; Link posted today. Dont worry, he'll post here when he logs on, I'm sure of it.

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                                                                          Posted 12 October 2004 - 06:17 PM

                                                                          Okay, thanks for the info. I'll wait.

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                                                                            Posted 12 October 2004 - 09:49 PM

                                                                            he'll pobably post tomorrow. (I dont know, I am not a psyhic on this x.x)

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                                                                              Posted 13 October 2004 - 10:27 AM

                                                                              Isaac13, on Oct 12 2004, 08:15 PM, said:

                                                                              Linear? You have any idea where Link is? He hasn't posted here for some time.

                                                                              Woah it's okay Isaac I live in England and have school. Woah Nice chapter, damn reborns (Kyle is so weak) and cool I have a Black lightsaber. Good luck on the next part.

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                                                                                Posted 13 October 2004 - 10:40 AM

                                                                                why am I soo stupid at times...

                                                                                Anyway cool story

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                                                                                  Posted 13 October 2004 - 01:52 PM

                                                                                  Your'e not stoopid. Just, uh....

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                                                                                    Posted 13 October 2004 - 03:03 PM

                                                                                    Jedi Academy 2
                                                                                    part 4

                                                                                    Dustin was tired out. His fight against the Reborn took nearly all his energy out of him. He thought it was over. Then, Linear took a step up. She safeguarded Dustin for the time being. Linear executed a downward strike toward the Reborn's arms, and the Reborn's left hand was cut off.
                                                                                    The Reborn yelled in pain. Dustin saw everything. Linear was fighting extremely well. He was impressed. The Reborn still had a hand left, but he could not hold out for long. The Reborn tried to use the Force to recall his lightsaber, but Linear countered him. She also used the Force to pull it to her. It came to her hand, and she activated it. The red glow flashed the room. Linear then ran up to the Reborn, raised both lightsbers, and slashed down. The Reborn's other arm came off, and he died. Linear helped Dustin up and returned his lightsaber to him.
                                                                                    "Thnks, Linear. Now, let's go help Link and Kyle. They are in trouble too." Dustin said. They opened the doors to the landing platform and saw Link fighting a double bladed saber Reborn. Link seemed to have an edge, but the Reborn was slowing him down. Link cut right, the Reborn block that, and he pushed Link to the wall. Links lightsaber flew off toward the direction of the Reborn, and sliced through. The Reborn fell off the platform and fell to the endless skies of Bespin.
                                                                                    "Good job. Kyle, let's go before more Reborn come." Dustin said. Link recalled his lightsaber and walked inside. There, the Jedi saw many Reborn inside. They must have formed this as a trap. Everyone was too weak rightnow, but the Jedi activated their lightsabers and rushed forward.

                                                                                    Luke sensed a disturbance in the Force. He felt the powers of the Jedi at Bespin weakening. He felt he should send more Jedi.
                                                                                    "Yes. That would be an idea. A good one." He said. He motioned for the 10 Jedi near him to go to Bespin and help Dustin and the others. The 10 of them boarded a ship and left YavinIV. It would take some time to get to Bespin, so they just sat and meditated.

                                                                                    Dustin was tiring. He only managed to defeat one Reborn. He wouldn't know how he would fare against a second one. He went over to help Linear fighting hers. She was having a hard time as well. Dustin sent an uppercut toward the Reborn he was fighting. He sensed weakness from him, but a different kind of weakness. The Reborn was knocked off balance and fell. Linear finished him off with a downward stab. The Reborn died instantly. They both moved on to the next foe.
                                                                                    Link and Kyle had easily disposed of three Reborns. But their power was draining as well. Kyle swung left as he hit the reborns shoulder. It bled quickly, leaving him open to attacks. Link sidestepped, switched his stance, and attacked. His saber went right through the reborn's stomach. His saber came out and the Reborn slumped down. The others saw what Link had done, and they saw that their numbers had lessened, so they retreated. The Jedi saw the Reborn's ship take off, they thought the Reborn would escape and get reinforcements, but they had a surprise. Laser bolts flew onto the Reborn freigter and it blew up. Dustin saw that a Jedi cruiser had blasted them, and smiled.
                                                                                    "Luke must have sent them. I give him my thanks." He said. Kyle, Dustin, Link, and Linear went to their seperate ships, and took off back to Yavin.
                                                                                    "Hey, thanks, guys. We thought we would have been killed." Linear said.
                                                                                    "No need to thank us, Linear. Luke sent us, so you should thank him." A Jedi said.
                                                                                    "That we will, Matt. That we will." Dustin said. And they shot into lightspeed.

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                                                                                      Posted 13 October 2004 - 05:00 PM

                                                                                      <(^.^<) And the story continues! (>^.^)> Yay! I was fighting! Wwweeee! =D Heh, continue it soon.

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                                                                                        Posted 13 October 2004 - 05:09 PM

                                                                                        that was thrilling, so much detail

                                                                                        :angry: it was really good

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                                                                                          Posted 13 October 2004 - 06:06 PM

                                                                                          I'll be doing moe tommorow. I need a break.

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                                                                                            Posted 13 October 2004 - 06:26 PM

                                                                                            x.x yessu, writers need a break from story making SOME DAY!

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                                                                                              Posted 13 October 2004 - 06:37 PM

                                                                                              Yes I do. *Hugs Linear* see you tommorow.

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                                                                                                Posted 13 October 2004 - 06:41 PM

                                                                                                =P byebye isaac, dont abandon this story while you are taking a break.

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                                                                                                  Posted 13 October 2004 - 06:49 PM

                                                                                                  Bye, bye, love. *Hugs Linear one more time* I won't abandon it. I never really abandon my star wars stories. :blink: :lol: :joy: :joy:

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                                                                                                    Posted 13 October 2004 - 08:41 PM

                                                                                                    =P dont leave us hangin' Isaac. Bye

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                                                                                                      Posted 14 October 2004 - 08:13 AM

                                                                                                      Listen you two don't spam like that as it isn't relative to the topic but anywho, brilliant next chapter I13 but i'm thinking you really do fancy Linear, not just the story.

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                                                                                                        Posted 14 October 2004 - 10:59 AM

                                                                                                        read the gssf couples topic for more details *cough*

                                                                                                        Anyway, yes don't abandon this story

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                                                                                                          Posted 14 October 2004 - 03:49 PM

                                                                                                          Jedi Academy II
                                                                                                          Part 5

                                                                                                          Linear jumped out of her X-wing to greet the others that landed. She hugged Dustin when she came out and greeted everyone else.
                                                                                                          "I hope you guys are all right. I was worried." She said in a joyus voice.
                                                                                                          "Yeah, Lin. Wer'e all right. Shaken, but all right." Dustin said. He looked up to his X-wing, which looked badly damaged. He was previously in a dogfight, so he was going to have to do repairs. He then looked back at Linear, who had a smile on her face.
                                                                                                          "Come on. Let's go." Linear said to everyone as they went to the meditation room.

                                                                                                          Luke Skywalker was waiting in his quarters for the other Jedi to arrive. He sat patiently as he sensed three people coming in to see him. Luke turned to see 3 REborn behind him. He stood, unleashed his lightsaber, and swung right.
                                                                                                          In a second flat, all three Reborn fell flat.
                                                                                                          "Reborn have entered the Academy." He said. He quickly gathered all the Jedi to his room.
                                                                                                          "Luke? Now? We just came back. We're tired." Kyle complained. He was right. Everyone was tired and frustrated. Dustin, Linear, Link, and Kyle, were all exhausted from their battles.
                                                                                                          "Look. I know you all just came back, but we need to get all the Reborn defeated or else they will take the Academy." Luke said in a desperate voice. He did not want the Academy in further danger.
                                                                                                          "All right, Luke. We'll do it." Dustin said.
                                                                                                          "Then it is agreed. I'm sensing more Reborn in the hangar. Go." Luke ordered.
                                                                                                          The three tired Jedi all went to the hangar, but in an act of salvation, all of them used Force heal to get themselves warmed up. That would only save them for a while. When they reached the hangar, they saw many assortments of Jedi fighting and trying to stave off the Reborn. Dustin activated his lightsaber, and yelled,
                                                                                                          "Charge!!!" The three of them went into the fray to help the other Jedi. Dustin jumped up into the air as he struck down. His Reborn enemy blocked his attack and used the Force to push Dustin back. Dustin yelled in pain as he hit the back wall with a hard thump. He was out, unconscious.
                                                                                                          Linear followed up in a forward stab. The Reborn stopped her blade as he also pushed her back. She hit the wall next to Dustin. The same for the others. Kyle and Link. All four of them watched the other Jedi, fight and fall, to the Reborn.

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                                                                                                            Posted 15 October 2004 - 02:10 PM

                                                                                                            *Stares in astonishment* ...............woooooooow, you're getting really good at this I13.

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                                                                                                              Posted 15 October 2004 - 05:19 PM

                                                                                                              x.x it takes time for people to make good stories. =9 even ones that are really exp. nice new chapter issac

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                                                                                                                Posted 15 October 2004 - 05:24 PM

                                                                                                                Thanks, Linear.

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                                                                                                                  Posted 15 October 2004 - 06:03 PM

                                                                                                                  =P You know it's true. x.x less than 5 words is...spammy! x.X

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                                                                                                                    Posted 15 October 2004 - 06:10 PM

                                                                                                                    Yeah... I know that, Lin. I just can't think of alot of words right now.

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                                                                                                                      Posted 15 October 2004 - 06:12 PM

                                                                                                                      anyway, this is shaping up to be an epic

                                                                                                                      pls continue

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                                                                                                                        Jedi Academy II

                                                                                                                        Dustin was unconcious. So were the others. But, he felt something dark... almost evil surging inside of someone. It felt too close, too close...
                                                                                                                        'Link? Is he giving off that dark aura?' Dustin thought. He struggled to get up, but he coildn't. He was completely paralyzed. He was sure that he would be finished off by then. Just then, a Reborn walked up to him. Wait, not Dustin... Link. A Reborn was walking up to Link. Why? Why?
                                                                                                                        "Get away from me you... you... you piece of bantha fodder!" Link said.
                                                                                                                        "Oh, no, young one. I am sure you will help us in our cause. We will take you to complete your proper training." The Reborn said.
                                                                                                                        "I'll never join you! Never!" Link sounded argry. Link should not have sounded so mad.
                                                                                                                        "You will come with us, wether you like it or not. Now, come." The reborn brought Link up and brought him outside. There, Link saw hundreds, no.. thousands of Reborn.
                                                                                                                        Link finally got the power to get free. He got out of the Reborn's grip, and activated his black lightsaber. He charged for the Reborn and stabbed. He missed. The Reborn was right next to him, and kicked Link in the belly. Link yelled in pain as he went out. The Reborn bent dowjn, took Lin's body, and went to their ship.
                                                                                                                        The last Dustin saw was the Reborn frieghter, taking off into deep space.

                                                                                                                        A day passed and Dustin was in a bacta tank.
                                                                                                                        'What? What am I doing here?' He thought. He tried to think back. Nothing. He got no visuals of what happened. Mabey his mind was completely blank. Mabey... no. No. That can't be true.
                                                                                                                        Dustin erased the thought out of his head. He saw many people around him. Linear, Kyle, Luke... but, he did not see Link anywhere.
                                                                                                                        'Where is he?' He thought. he then felt himself being pulled up by something. A moment later, he was lying in bed.
                                                                                                                        "What? What happened?" He said. Kyle entered the room.
                                                                                                                        "Woah. Calm down, kid. Wev'e got trouble. Link isn't here. He was probably taken by the Reborn." Kyle said. It was all clear in Dustin's head now. The Reborn said somthing about them taking Link somplace, but he didn't know where.
                                                                                                                        "Where? Where did they take him?" Dustin asked. He seemed tense.
                                                                                                                        "They possibly took him to Kooriban." Linear came inside and said.
                                                                                                                        "Are you okay? You were pretty badly injured." Linear said.
                                                                                                                        "Yeah, I'm okay." Dustin said. He then felt a bone crack. He ached in all directions, and fell down.
                                                                                                                        "Woah. Hold it steady, kid. Your'e still suffering from the crash. You may have some broken ribs." Kyle said. He moved back a few steps and said,
                                                                                                                        "And, we're looking for Link."
                                                                                                                        "No. I'm going with you. It may be a trap." Dustin said.
                                                                                                                        "Isn't everything a trap?" Kyle asked. He stared at Dustin.
                                                                                                                        "Look. Don't worry. I'm sure he's fine. Just stay here and rest. You'll come later."
                                                                                                                        "Fine. But when I'm back in shape, tell Luke to get a droid to gear up my X-wing." Dustin said. He attempted to get up.
                                                                                                                        "Sure thing. Hey. May the Force be with you." Kyle said.
                                                                                                                        "You too." Dustin said back.
                                                                                                                        Kyle then left the room with Linear and Dustin still inside. Linear looked at Dustin for a moment, tehn looked away.
                                                                                                                        "Sorry about your'e injuries. We could really... use yor help." She said.
                                                                                                                        "Don't worry. I'll be fine, as soon as my ribs stop cracking." Dustin sounded happy.
                                                                                                                        "Well, bye." Linear siad.
                                                                                                                        "May the Force be with you both." Dustin said, and Linear left. Dustin felt all alone in the room now. He felt, cold.
                                                                                                                        Then, the door hissed open. It was Luke.
                                                                                                                        "Luke, I'm surprised that your'e here. I thought you'd be off meditating."
                                                                                                                        "Well, some one has to watch over you. Anyway, your X-wing is ready to go. And so should you. The checkup droid says that your ribs aren't about to collapse, yet."
                                                                                                                        Luke said. Dustin was puzzled. He never heard Luke talk like this before.
                                                                                                                        "What? My ribs are bound to collapse?" Dustin asked. Luke nodded.
                                                                                                                        "Yes. They should be about ready to in an estimate of, 20 weeks." Luke said.
                                                                                                                        Dustin exhaled in relief.
                                                                                                                        "Well, I guess that I won't die, yet. That's a good thing." Dustin stood up.
                                                                                                                        He nodded to Luke, and left the room. Once he was out, he immedietly went to the hangar bay.
                                                                                                                        Luke was right. His X-wing was ready to go. He saw no flaws at all. Nothing out of the ordinary.
                                                                                                                        "Hey, R6. You ready to go?" He asked his droid.
                                                                                                                        R6, beeped happily and went in circles.
                                                                                                                        "Okay, come on. I'm starting the ship now. You should be tightly strapped in."
                                                                                                                        Then, Dustin felt a rib crack.
                                                                                                                        "Ah! Looks like the collapsing wanted to come early. Looks like I'll die soon enough." Dustin said. With his injury, he would have a hard time flying. So, he put it on auto-pilot for a while.
                                                                                                                        "Looks like I'm going to Korriban."

                                                                                                                        As soon as Dustin's X-wing entered Sith space, he encountered two sith fighters. He decided to try to evade them. He hid in the planet's dark and unihabbitable atmosphere. He felt like he should bring some sort of mask to protect himself from the death-like sands. he hopped out of his X-wing, donned his protective breather, and walked. It was difficult to see through sand, so he would have to see through the Force. He spotted an outpost, several miles due mnorth of where he was now.
                                                                                                                        "Looks like I'm walking it." He said.

                                                                                                                        Kyle and Linear were nearing Kooriban, Linear had a eirie feeling.
                                                                                                                        "I have a bad feeling about this. I feel like were walking into a trap." She said.
                                                                                                                        "Don't worry. We are Jedi masters. No reborn' sgonna stop us from saving Link. Right?" Kyle said. There was utter silence.
                                                                                                                        "Huh, the silent type, huh? Alright." As Kyle talked he prepared the landing cycle.

                                                                                                                        By the time he saw it, Dustin walked into the doors of the outpost. There, he dropped to the floor, his eyes sore and his breath nearly gone, he had to think twice about going through that hell hole again. Then, he heard a noise. He slipped behind a wall and hid, his lightsaber in his hand, and battle ready. he turned to see what the noise was, and he saw it was only a samll rat. He exhaled as he put his lightsaber back in his belt. He figured this search might be easy.
                                                                                                                        He then walked to a room where he heard some voices. When he entered, he only saw a recording of a will, made by a wealthy merchant. He sighed, and left.
                                                                                                                        "Where could he be?" He said. Just then, he heard lightsaber swings. He walked slowly and quietly, seeing a person with a lightsaber, he saw...
                                                                                                                        "Link? What are you doing here?" He asked.
                                                                                                                        "Oh, Dustin. How are you, my friend?" Link said.
                                                                                                                        "LInk. This is not the time to be joking around. We have to go. Now." Dustin ordered.
                                                                                                                        "No. I like it here, Dustin. the Sith have made me powerful. Sure, I was a Jedi Master, but, the sith, Marka Ragnos, they made me stronger. Now, raise your blade, Dustin. So we may do battle." Link said. He had turned to the Dark Side. It seemed nothing could turn him now.
                                                                                                                        "Never! I won't fight you, Link." Dustin said.
                                                                                                                        "Then if you won't fight, you will meet your destiny." A voice said. Dustin recognized that voice. It sounded like...
                                                                                                                        "No.... It's not possible. It can't be." He said. Then, a figure walked into teh light.
                                                                                                                        "Darth Vader." Dustin said.

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                                                                                                                          Posted 16 October 2004 - 12:33 AM

                                                                                                                          He he he, darkness will rule, nice capter.

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                                                                                                                            Posted 16 October 2004 - 11:06 AM

                                                                                                                            Can I add my own Chapter? YES OK!!!!
                                                                                                                            Isaac 13 found another Forum and said he might not coming back to this one.

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                                                                                                                              Posted 16 October 2004 - 12:06 PM

                                                                                                                              The other forums he went to are mine and Linear's forum. Just to let you know.

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                                                                                                                                Posted 16 October 2004 - 12:23 PM

                                                                                                                                Yaeh but he has anoter forum somewhere else he goes to more often GSSF is just a thing of the past to him now.

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                                                                                                                                  Posted 16 October 2004 - 12:53 PM

                                                                                                                                  Ok but now we stop posting in this topic till I13 comes back and posts his story or we close it.

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                                                                                                                                    Posted 16 October 2004 - 02:07 PM

                                                                                                                                    another good chapter, stay so you can continue it!

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                                                                                                                                      Posted 17 October 2004 - 02:38 AM

                                                                                                                                      Hey, guys. Miss me? I bet you did.

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                                                                                                                                        Posted 17 October 2004 - 02:49 AM

                                                                                                                                        hai. *sarcasm* we didn't miss you at all!
                                                                                                                                        j/k
                                                                                                                                        =P yessu, we missed ya.

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                                                                                                                                          Posted 17 October 2004 - 12:11 AM

                                                                                                                                          pretty much I guess, anyway, continue the story!

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                                                                                                                                            Posted 17 October 2004 - 01:18 AM

                                                                                                                                            Isaac13, on Oct 17 2004, 04:38 AM, said:

                                                                                                                                            Hey, guys. Miss me? I bet you did.

                                                                                                                                            Hey I13 so you came back. Make the next Chapter a good one.

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                                                                                                                                              Posted 17 October 2004 - 12:38 PM

                                                                                                                                              Jedi Academy II

                                                                                                                                              "Where is Luke?" Vader asked. Dustin just stared at him. He did not what to give the information of the Jedi Academy's whereabouts.
                                                                                                                                              "Where is my son?" Vader asked again. Dustin continued to stare.
                                                                                                                                              "Vader. Let me handle him." Link said.
                                                                                                                                              "Fine. I will look for Skywalker." Vader said. And he trailed off.
                                                                                                                                              "Now, Dustin. Draw your blade." Link said. Dustin did so. It shone green all over the walls. Link also activated his, and it shone dark black. Dustin charged at Link furiously. Link jumped up into the air as Dustin swung. Then, he landed right behind Dustin. But, Dustin acted quickly. he spun around and swung, hitting Links saber. This saber lock went on for a long time. Then, Dustin jumped up. He landed in a vent, a dark vent. He could see nothing. It was just pitch black. Dustin thought his lightsaber would not work here, so he turned it off. He walked along the halls of the vent, hearing nothing as he went by. Then, a lightsaber wizzed behind him. Dustin activated his lightsaber, turned and attacked. Link's lightsaber countered with his and they were in anither saber lock. Link grew tired of this so, he reached an arm out, and Dustin could feel a wild surge in the Force. As he felt it, he was pushed back into the darkness. Link couldn't see in the dark so Dustin had an advantage. Then, an idea burst into Links head. He reached out to the far corners of the Force and used Force grip. He had a contact, and when he brought it out, there was Dustin, caught in the grip of Link. Dustin couldn't breathe. He was about to blank out, then, Link let him go. Dustin regained his breath, stood up, and activated his lightsaber. Link once again used the Force to push Dustin outside. Thjey were both now in the death-air. Dustin could not breathe once again. He had to inhale and exhale just to reagian his breath. But, he would also inhale some of the tainted sand, altering his body system. But, if he wanted to survive against Link, he had to take that chance.

                                                                                                                                              Kyle and Linear had just landed on the other side of Kooriban, when Kyle sesned two essences fighting. He reached out into the Force.
                                                                                                                                              "I'm sensing conflict. With lightsabers. Could it be... no... no. That's not possible. He hasn't fully healed." Kyle said.
                                                                                                                                              "What? What is it, Kyle?" Linear asked. She needed to know what had gone on.
                                                                                                                                              "Dustin's here."

                                                                                                                                              Dustin executed a forward lunge, but Link blocked that. Dustin was tiring out, his body deteriorating, and his lightsaber was covered in his sweat. He kneeled down, trying to gain his momentum. Then, when Link swung down, Dustin blocked, but then, Link tricked him. He swung left, and hit Dustin's left hand. It flew off into the Korriban sandstorm.
                                                                                                                                              "AHHH!!!!" Dustin bellowed. His hand was gone, and his lightsaber was lost.
                                                                                                                                              " It is over, Dustin. You have lost." 'Link said. Dustin stared into Link's eyes. He saw burning evil in his eyes.
                                                                                                                                              Dustin tried to recall his lightsaber, but he was tired, and injured, but somehow, he found the power to do it. It flew into his right hand and Dusting swung. His saber hit Link's shoulder, just giving it a deep graze.
                                                                                                                                              Link also yelled in pain, dropping to his knees.
                                                                                                                                              Both combatants were kneeling down, both of them bleeding severly. Dustin and Link both had their lightsabers, but had no power to use them, and then, Dustin felt a presence, a strong presence. He looked to his right, and saw a figure. It walked toward him, and took out a sword.
                                                                                                                                              "Marka... Ragnos..."

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                                                                                                                                                Posted 17 October 2004 - 12:51 PM

                                                                                                                                                Mwahaha, nobody can overcome darkness, wicked chapter I13, *puts hand on shoulder* it's like it's real.

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                                                                                                                                                  Posted 17 October 2004 - 09:58 PM

                                                                                                                                                  =9 writers put they're heart and emotions in the stories to make it seem it's real. That's a gift. O.O Fighting! oOooOo...cool!

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                                                                                                                                                    Posted 18 October 2004 - 09:30 AM

                                                                                                                                                    Yeah and the fighting is between me and I13? Wooooow can't wait to see what Marka Ragnos does next.

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                                                                                                                                                      Posted 18 October 2004 - 11:13 PM

                                                                                                                                                      ^__^ mmmhmmm. OoooOOooo...fighting is so much fun! And painful.

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                                                                                                                                                        Posted 19 October 2004 - 09:59 AM

                                                                                                                                                        Yep, definatley when your hand flys off and your shoulders been Sliced & Diced.

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                                                                                                                                                          Posted 19 October 2004 - 06:09 PM

                                                                                                                                                          I can give you guys an overview of what happens.

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                                                                                                                                                            Posted 19 October 2004 - 11:21 PM

                                                                                                                                                            =P Nah, dont spoil. SUSPENSE! Ayee...I'll wait.

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                                                                                                                                                              Posted 20 October 2004 - 01:30 PM

                                                                                                                                                              Yeah I hate it when the beans are spilled.

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                                                                                                                                                                Posted 20 October 2004 - 03:22 PM

                                                                                                                                                                Okay, no no spoilers then.

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                                                                                                                                                                  Posted 20 October 2004 - 05:02 PM

                                                                                                                                                                  -.-;; we'll just wait...when you update it. Whenever that is.

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                                                                                                                                                                    Posted 21 October 2004 - 03:25 PM

                                                                                                                                                                    Friday. I need to get my thoughts straight till then. You know, who loves who, who kills who, who dies... that kind of stuff. It will be ready tommorow.

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                                                                                                                                                                      Posted 21 October 2004 - 04:11 PM

                                                                                                                                                                      cool, me wanna see what happens next <_<

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                                                                                                                                                                        Posted 21 October 2004 - 06:07 PM

                                                                                                                                                                        Isaac13, on Oct 21 2004, 02:25 PM, said:

                                                                                                                                                                        Friday. I need to get my thoughts straight till then. You know, who loves who, who kills who, who dies... that kind of stuff. It will be ready tommorow.


                                                                                                                                                                        =P mmm....alright then Isaac. We'll just be patient.

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                                                                                                                                                                          Patient as patient can br, I don't think you've heard but if I want a long time I go hyper...

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                                                                                                                                                                            [attachment=627:attachment]Here we go.

                                                                                                                                                                            Jedi Academy II

                                                                                                                                                                            Dustin was nearly blinded. He could se Ragnos, but could not sense him. He was too fatigued to sense anything in the Force right now.
                                                                                                                                                                            "Jedi. You always interfere with my plans." Ragnos said. He stared down at Dustin hard. He could not take his gaze off of him. Then, he turned to Link.
                                                                                                                                                                            "I thought Vader trainied you better than that." He said. He then went back to Dustin. He shook his head and said,
                                                                                                                                                                            "I shall dispose of you, Jedi. You have brought yourself into my affairs for too long." He said. He raised two hands, and Dustin felt the Force surge through Ragnos. Then, a moment later, he was hit by Force Lightning. Dustin yelled hard. He felt his power weakening. Link looked at Dustin. He felt his friend dying. He belonged to the dark side, so he should not be feeling these emotions. Ragnos charged up his power. More lightning was pumping out of his fingers.
                                                                                                                                                                            "AHHH!!!!!!" Dustin yelled. He was paining all over. He gripped his legs as they were the ones having all the pain inflicted on him. It started in his legs and went up. He twisted and turned as the lightning was going through him. Then, Ragnos stopped.
                                                                                                                                                                            "This is the end, do you understand." He said. He stared at Dustin for a moment, and then once again restreched his hands. Lightning once more came out of his fingertips. Dustin yelled in more pain.
                                                                                                                                                                            Then, just a second later. a silver lightsaber was swung.
                                                                                                                                                                            Ragnos all of a sudden bellowed. He moved back from Dustin. His leg smoking, he looked up in agony. He saw a figure right in front of him. Then, the dust cleared. Right in front of Ragnos, was Linear herself. Her hair was messed up from the sandstorm.
                                                                                                                                                                            "You are not going to kill my best friend, Ragnos. I will stop you first." She said.
                                                                                                                                                                            "Brave of you, child. You took me on surprise. But, it is not a matter." Marka said. He unsheathed his sword. Both Linear and Ragnos stepped into their fighter stances. Ragnos then stepped up and swung. The huge sword hit Linear's silver lightsaber, pushing Linear back. Ragnos certainly had strength. Linear hit a wall, but stepped back up. She did not seem hurt. She twirled her lightsaber around a bit, and charged. She swung her lightsaber left and collided her saber with Ragnos's. They held the lock for a few minutes, then Ragnos steeped back. He was surprised at Linear's strength. Linear was surprised at Ragnos's size. She bareley moved him 2 inches. Ragnos then sidestepped, seeing that Linear could not see in the sandstorm, he moved over to Dustin, and picked him up by the neck. Dustin was choking hard. Linear could hear him, coughing up spit and a little blood. She used the Force to clear the sandstorm and saw Ragnos, holding Dustin by the throat.
                                                                                                                                                                            "Put down your saber, Jedi. If you do, he will live. If you do not, you know what I will do." Ragnos said. He raised his lightsaber to Dustin's throat.
                                                                                                                                                                            "Do it, Linear. Attack him. Don't worry about me." Dustin tried to get the words out. He choked harder even doing so. Linear hesitated. She gripped her lightsaber and looked at it. It's silver blade shone brightly in the air. Then, she looked at Dustin. He was sweating hard, and seemed that he was nearly dead. His face was bright blue. She had to make a decision. Either let Dustin die, or drop her lightsaber to free him. She thought quickly, thinking that this was the best choice.
                                                                                                                                                                            "Do it, Linear. Attack him...."
                                                                                                                                                                            Dustin said.
                                                                                                                                                                            "Drop your lightsaber, Jedi." Ragnos said.
                                                                                                                                                                            Linear had decided. She knew what to do.


                                                                                                                                                                            Well, you guys decide my fate. Die, or live?

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                                                                                                                                                                              Posted 22 October 2004 - 02:57 PM

                                                                                                                                                                              Live d00d, touching chapter, well done.

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                                                                                                                                                                                Posted 22 October 2004 - 03:05 PM

                                                                                                                                                                                yeah, thanks. Well, I'll just be waiting for more.

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                                                                                                                                                                                  Posted 22 October 2004 - 06:14 PM

                                                                                                                                                                                  O.O Live! Live! O.o Yay, fighting! *runs in circles* x.x kidding.
                                                                                                                                                                                  =9 living is good. >.> but...death is sometimes good. (DONT ASK! <.<)

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                                                                                                                                                                                    Posted 22 October 2004 - 06:26 PM

                                                                                                                                                                                    Oh, there's another live!

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                                                                                                                                                                                      Posted 23 October 2004 - 12:41 AM

                                                                                                                                                                                      Well if the main character died then the story would be no fun. So carry on...

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                                                                                                                                                                                        Posted 25 October 2004 - 02:09 PM

                                                                                                                                                                                        Right.

                                                                                                                                                                                        Jedi Academy II

                                                                                                                                                                                        Linear gripped her lightsaber, sweating. She saw Dustin nod his head, then close his eyes.
                                                                                                                                                                                        "OKay. I know what to do." She said. She raised her lightsaber and rushed at Ragnos. Ragnos seemed surprised. Before he raised his lightsaber to Dustin's throat, but to his astonishment, Dustin was not there.
                                                                                                                                                                                        "What?! Impossible!" He yelled. He then stared up and saw Dustin, on top of his head. Then, Dustin jammed his heel in Ragnos's face. Ragnos doubled over in agony. Dustin then leaped off of his head and landed next to Linear.
                                                                                                                                                                                        Linear then charged at Ragnos, slashing at him repeatedly. Ragnos blocked her attacks, and eventually pushed her back. Linear regained her balance and ran at Ragnos again. But then, she stopped. She heard a yell.
                                                                                                                                                                                        "Linear!" The voice said. Lin turned around to see that Dustin threw a lightsaber to her. Linear caught it and activated it. She now had two lightsabers. She swung both of them at Ragnos. The sith lord blocked all of her attacks, but succumbed to one of them. He was sliced at the hand. It was sizzling, but was not a major injury.
                                                                                                                                                                                        "Linear has gotten stronger." Link said. He tried to get up and retrieve his lightsaber, but could not gain the strength to do it. So, it looked like he was staying on the ground.
                                                                                                                                                                                        I can't get up. Link thought. So, he looked on the battle ahead. He then saw Dustin inching closer to him. Link created a barrier around him, sustaining him, for now.
                                                                                                                                                                                        "Stay away from me." Link said in a weak voice.
                                                                                                                                                                                        Dustin continued to crawl closer.
                                                                                                                                                                                        "Leave me alone!" Link yelled he used teh Force to push Dustin back. Then, Dustin went unconcious.

                                                                                                                                                                                        The fight between Ragnos and Linear continued. Linear was seeming to get tired every time she swung the dual sabers. Ragnos was getting the upper hand. He then used the Force to pull the lightsabers out of Linear's hands and pushed her back. She landed next to Dustin.
                                                                                                                                                                                        "Good try." Dustin said. He saw that Ragnos was tiring out.
                                                                                                                                                                                        "Jedi. Scourge of the galaxy." Ragnos said. He turned off his lightsaber and took out his sword. It glowed red. It seemed that Ragnos was going to drain the powers of Linear and Dustin. But what of Link? By the way, where was he?
                                                                                                                                                                                        Ragnos looked behind him and saw Link, lightsaber glowing black and battle ready.
                                                                                                                                                                                        "You wish to fight me, child?" Ragnos asked.
                                                                                                                                                                                        "No. I wish to kill you." Link answered back. He had turned away from the Dark path, or did he?

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                                                                                                                                                                                          Posted 26 October 2004 - 01:57 AM

                                                                                                                                                                                          ^_____________^ Yippeeee I am not a baddy anymores. Wicked chapter I13, I am up and ready to fight again.

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                                                                                                                                                                                            Posted 26 October 2004 - 04:35 PM

                                                                                                                                                                                            ^______________^ Ayee! Yay...! Another good chapter!!! =D Continue! Continue!

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                                                                                                                                                                                              Posted 29 October 2004 - 03:36 PM

                                                                                                                                                                                              Yes come on I13 we really want to see the next part of the story!

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                                                                                                                                                                                                Posted 31 October 2004 - 01:38 PM

                                                                                                                                                                                                I'm gonna be busy. But don't worry.

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                                                                                                                                                                                                  Posted 31 October 2004 - 01:50 PM

                                                                                                                                                                                                  Isaac13, on Oct 31 2004, 03:38 PM, said:

                                                                                                                                                                                                  I'm gonna be busy. But don't worry.

                                                                                                                                                                                                  Yay! You havn't left the forums! Post up next chapter soon k.

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                                                                                                                                                                                                    Posted 03 November 2004 - 08:24 PM

                                                                                                                                                                                                    Don't worry. I will post soon. Possibly tomorrow.

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                                                                                                                                                                                                      Posted 04 November 2004 - 10:36 AM

                                                                                                                                                                                                      That's cool, I am glad you did not abandon you're story.

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                                                                                                                                                                                                        Posted 04 November 2004 - 11:30 AM

                                                                                                                                                                                                        I NEVER, EVER, abandon my star wars stories.

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                                                                                                                                                                                                          Posted 04 November 2004 - 12:30 PM

                                                                                                                                                                                                          Oh well that's very good to hear I13. I can't wait till your next chapter, hope it is soon.

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                                                                                                                                                                                                            Posted 04 November 2004 - 12:38 PM

                                                                                                                                                                                                            Oh, and Link? Could you make this a suitable avatar for me?

                                                                                                                                                                                                            Make it fit, and try to keep the animation?

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                                                                                                                                                                                                              Posted 04 November 2004 - 01:14 PM

                                                                                                                                                                                                              That is a little hard as the dimensions of the avatar exceed 100x100 as they are 110x70 and the maximum image size on this forum is 100x100, sometimes it is not good to use FE animations. I am only trying to post so you can post up your next chapter, come on I am dying to see it.

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                                                                                                                                                                                                                Posted 04 November 2004 - 02:01 PM

                                                                                                                                                                                                                Finally......

                                                                                                                                                                                                                Jedi Academy II

                                                                                                                                                                                                                Link stared Ragnos in the eyes, waiting for some kind of rebuttle or threat. Ragnos said nothing, but charged at Link with much effort. Link's strength was draining from him, but he felt like going one more round. Link swung his lightsaber to the left to counter a right thrust, but got pushed back by Ragnos's force. He hit a wall, temporairily knocked out. Ragnos stepped up to him and said,
                                                                                                                                                                                                                "You were a good apprentice, but now, you will die." Ragnos raised his blade for the killing blow, and struck down. He hit a target, but it was not flesh. It was a black bar of light, smashed against his red saber. Link had somehow created a vision in Ragnos's mind, making him see that Link was knocked out on the ground.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                "You won't get me that easily, Ragnos. I am a Jedi Master, and will defeat you." Link said. He tried his best to push his lightsaber up to regain momentum, but was weakening fast. Soemwhere else, Linear and Dustin looked on. Dustin was still unconsious from Link's Force push. Linear was gently stroking Dustin's hair, quietly repeating that she will protect him.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                Link knelt down on him knee, breathing hard from his last battle with Dustin. Then, Ragnos grasped Link's throat, and held him up into the air.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                Link could not breathe, and was losing strength rapidly.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                "You are too weak to face me. You are tired, while I am still fresh." Ragnos said.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                "But.... how? You fought Linear...."
                                                                                                                                                                                                                Link began to say, but Ragnos's grasp tightened.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                "I was not trying in that bout, Jedi."
                                                                                                                                                                                                                "so, you were just toying with her...." Link forced out. He was grasping Ragnos's arm, giving signs to let go, but Ragnos's bulk and strength were too much.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                Then, Link had an idea.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                "You..."
                                                                                                                                                                                                                "What was that, Jedi?"
                                                                                                                                                                                                                "You can let go anytime now..."
                                                                                                                                                                                                                Then, Ragnos all of a sudden let go. He staggered back in pain. It looked like Link had kicked him. Link was back on his feet, lightsaber ready. He was choking, but he was alright. Ragnos had now regained his balance, and his lightsaber was held high and ready.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                "You may have gotten me there, but that will not happen again." Ragnos said. He charged forward, with his lightsaber still high. Link readied himself in a defense postition, his saber across his chest. He clashed his saber against Ragnos's, and the Sith Lord seemed to have gav in. He was pushed back, and Link rushed forward. Ragnos looked up in surprise as the Jedi ran up to him. Ragnos raised his lightsaber into teh air, and blocke the many blows that Link gave.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                Link executed as many slashes as he could, until he finally let out. He lowered his lightsaber, and backed away. He dropped to one knee, and looked up to see if Dustin and Linear were alright. They were fine, but Dustin still knocked out from his collision. Link then fell to the ground, thinking numerous thoughts in his head.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                Be careful, sister... sister Linear...

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                                                                                                                                                                                                                  Posted 04 November 2004 - 04:29 PM

                                                                                                                                                                                                                  nyow, kudos to the story I13, tis getting better and better!

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                                                                                                                                                                                                                    Posted 04 November 2004 - 06:11 PM

                                                                                                                                                                                                                    =D The story continues! And its a great new chapter! n.n Continue it when you have the chance!

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                                                                                                                                                                                                                      Posted 04 November 2004 - 06:42 PM

                                                                                                                                                                                                                      Tomorrow, guys... and girls... :agitated:

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                                                                                                                                                                                                                        Posted 04 November 2004 - 07:41 PM

                                                                                                                                                                                                                        Good to hear Isaac13. =D cant wait to see the next chapter.

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                                                                                                                                                                                                                          Posted 04 November 2004 - 10:40 PM

                                                                                                                                                                                                                          Happy that you are liking this so far... *Has a pleasant dream of...*

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                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Posted 05 November 2004 - 10:29 AM

                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Pleasent dream...anyway cool chapter I13, good to see I am still alive.

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                                                                                                                                                                                                                              Posted 05 November 2004 - 10:34 AM

                                                                                                                                                                                                                              I've sorta just been reading this whole thing without talking much/commenting.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                              Oddly enough, it'ws keeping me on the edge of my seat. I didn't think it would be interesting at first.

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                                                                                                                                                                                                                                Posted 05 November 2004 - 06:42 PM

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                Jedi Academy II

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                Link was on the ground, drained of all strength. He could barely get up. The last thing he saw was Marka Ragnos, towering over him. Linear had her hand on her mouth as she saw Link fall. Actually, noone could stand up anymore. So, there was no hope. But then, Linear looked up, she saw a figure, drooping towards them, then, she heard a loud thump. She looked at the figure as it came into view. There, she saw Jaden Kor, Jedi Master.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                "Jaden, just in time." Linear said.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                "Glad I could come. How's Dustin?" Jaden asked. He looked at Dustin, seeing that he was still unconsious.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                "He took a hard blow. I don't know when he will wake up. All iv'e been doing is stroking his hair, and such." Linear answered. Jaden smirked.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                "Looks like you like him."
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                Linear blushed and looked away. Jaden turned his attention to Ragnos.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                "I beat you two years ago, Ragnos. How could you be back again?"
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                "Another attempted to ressurect me, Kor. And, he succeeded. Now, I will make your failure complete." Ragnos said. He raised his lightsaber in front of his face, and twirled it a few times. He stopped the twirls when his saber reached his belly.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                "I guess we will have to do battle again, huh?" Jaden said. He activated his green lightsaber, and charged. Ragnos sidestepped, dodging Jaden's attack. Jaden skidded to a halt, and turned.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                He's gotten faster. Wait, of course. He was in Tavion's body before. No wonder he has inproved so much. Jaden thought. He stretched out a hand, letting the Force guide him. He found an object, and flung it at Ragnos. Ragnos waved his hand and threw the object aside.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                The Force won't work on him, that much I'm sure of. But how am I gonna beat him this time? Jaden stepped to the right, seeing if Ragnos would do the same. He did, so Jaden took another step, this time, backwards. Ragnos copied his move.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                He also imitates me? This will be a battle not easily won. Ragnos stepped up, moving to Jaden. Jaden readied himself, in a defense position. Once Ragnos was in front of Jaden, he stood, waiting.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                "You may have claimed victory last time, but this time, I will be the victor." He said.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                "Yeah, I know. I can sense that you have gotten extremely strong. I might not be able to win." Jaden said. He eyed Ragnos. He then lowered his lightsaber in front of his chest. He then executed a sideswipe, countered by Ragnos's sideswipe. Jaden followed up with a vertical slice. That was also blocked by the Sith Lord. Jaden continued his onslaught of attacks, until the battle led him to the edge of a gorge. By that time, he knew he was in trouble.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                "Looks like this is the line for me." He said.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                "Yes. It is the end for you, Jedi." Ragnos pointed his saber at Jaden, in a stab-like position.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                "Sorry, but I had another idea." After that, Jaden lept off of the gorge. He fell, and fell, Ragnos thought it was truly his end. But then, Jaden caught onto something. A thin rockface, holding on for dear life. He knew he would not hold for long, but, he knew he would hold on for the time he needed.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                Good. I have him fooled. Now, I just need to get, up, onto this cliffface. Jaden thought. He found the strength in him, able to get onto the small landing. He looked up, seeing nothing.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                He's not there. He must be dealing with the others. I need to get to them.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                Jaden thought.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                Ragnos stared at Linear and Dustin. They were both on the ground, Dustin, leaning on Linear, unconsious still. Linear, staring at Ragnos.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                "You end here, Jedi." Ragnos said.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                Then, as a miracle, Jaden leapt up, and slashed Ragnos's back. Ragnos bellowed in pain, as he staggered back.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                "Your fight is with me, Ragnos."

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                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  Posted 05 November 2004 - 06:51 PM

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  n.n yay! New chapter! I like it! >.> Actually...I like the entire story in what happened so far! *claps while eating popcorn* ^_^ Another good chapter Isaac-san! Continue it when you have the chance to!

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                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    Posted 06 November 2004 - 02:42 AM

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    Yay the story continues, nice chapter I13.

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                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      Posted 10 November 2004 - 04:13 PM

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      I'll do more on friday.

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                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        Posted 10 November 2004 - 05:48 PM

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        n___n mmmm....ok then. Cant wait to see the next chapter on Friday! XD

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                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          Posted 13 November 2004 - 06:49 PM

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          Sorry, Can't do any right now. Computer was not going on the internet and all...

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                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Posted 13 November 2004 - 08:44 PM

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Aww...oh well. :P
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            n.n; the story was good, just hope we can see the next chapter soon.

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                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              Posted 14 November 2004 - 02:32 PM

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              I'll be doing it tommorow, since we have half days the whole week! Yay!!!!!

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                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                Posted 15 November 2004 - 11:13 PM

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                Isaac13, on Nov 14 2004, 02:32 PM, said:

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                I'll be doing it tommorow, since we have half days the whole week! Yay!!!!!


                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                Congradulations, I get the week off next week.

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                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  Posted 18 November 2004 - 05:30 PM

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  What? No! Ah well... Friday. I'm sure I'll do it tomorrow.

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                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    Posted 18 November 2004 - 07:21 PM

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    Dang. I hate double posting...

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    Jedi Academy II

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    "You never surprise me, Jedi. I thought that fall took care of you." Ragnos said. He stared at Jaden in a burning anger. He dropped his arms in defense, and rested them. Jaden looked up.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    "Well, I die hard. You know that, Ragnos. But, my strength is sapped. So uh, finish it. That parry was using the last amount of energy in my body." Jaden said. He held out his arms in wait.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    "Finish it... if you can."
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    Ragnos growled in an angry rage as he turned his lightsaber to life. He then rushed at Jaden, and prepared to slash. Jaden's eye looked in Link's direction, seeing the Jedi Master out of sight.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    Good. He's in position. I just need to buy some time. And alot of time I'll need. Jaden thought. His arms were still out wide, as Ragnos slashed. Jaden leaped into the air, for his counter-move. Ragnos looked up into the sky, seeing Jaden's body unfold, and plummet to the ground.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    "You decieved me. But I will make sure it won't happen again."
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    All of a sudden, Link was behind the Sith Lord. His lightsaber outstretched, ready to stab the Sith. He then pushed forward, and his saber hit it's mark. Ragnos's body fell, smoking in a pile of ash.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    "It was a fake. That's not Ragnos at all." Link said as he sheathed his lightsaber.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    "Yeah. I could sense it the first time I came here. We gotta get out of here. The Reborn, or worse, Darth Vader himself might arrive." Jaden said. He walked over and reached a hand out to Linear. She took it, and stood with Dustin's body in her arms.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    "You think you can still hold him?"
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    "Yeah, I'm pretty much fine." Linear said.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    "Well, we really should not stick around here. Let's get to Kyle's ship. Where's Dustin's X-wing?" Jaden asked.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    Linear pointed in the western direction.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    "Over there. Just over that bunker. You should hear his R6 unit beeping." Lin said.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    "Alright. You just follow Link to the Raven's Claw. There, you and Dustin will board with Kyle, and Link and I will take our seperate ships. I'll take Dustin's X-wing." Jaden explained. Link nodded.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    "Right. Okay, let's move it."
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    Moments later, Everyone was blasted into the YavinIV system. Once they were back home, Dustin immediately was sent into the Bacta bath. All the wounds were healed off of him, and he opened his eyes. The taste of bacta tasted like sour milk, along with a mix of stale cheese. He then was lifted up, and an hour later, he was in his bed again. He felt relieved to be back on YavinIV again. He took a deep sniff of the jungle air, and then looked down at his left hand. It had been replaced with a mechanical hand, just like Luke's. He had his control over it, but it just did not feel like his own flesh and blood.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    "Dammit. Dammit, dammit. Why? Why did he turn to the Dark Side? It makes me so angry... it it..." Dustin said. He got up and smashed a vase given to him by Mara Jade Skywalker. His anger got the best of him. Soon, he was thrashing all over the room, breaking things. He almost attempted to snap his lightsaber in half with the Force. Suddenly, he then calmed down, and focused on other things.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    "I gotta tell Linear... but how? I can't just walk up to her and tell her, "I love you." That would not be the right motive. I gotta wait for the right opportunity. The right time. Huh. All of a sudden, I feel as if..."
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    "As if what?" A voice asked.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    "As if I'm being watched. Hey, Yoda. Long time." Dustin said. He turned to see the blue ghostly figure of Yoda. He bowed and took a seat. He needed advice.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    "Yoda, what if a friend of yours turned to the Dark Side and, you felt like turning yourself?"
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    "Well, what I would do, is, focus, learn, stay calm I would. Yes. Dwell on the past I would not, and move on to the future. Yes." Yoda said. He turned his head.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    "On the other hand... never mind that you will. Focus on the future you must."
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    And Yoda dissapeared.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    Dustin turned around. Then, his eyes all of a sudden glowed red. He felt tremendous power deep inside him. He stormed out of his room, to the Academy hangar. His destination: The Borg Cube that loomed high overhead. The Borg Cube was a Sith weapon, used to destroy galaxies, without destoying itself.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    He aimed to meet Marka Ragnos there. Perhaps, strike a bargain.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    Linear walked into Dustin's room, with some hot chocolate. Seeing that he was gone, she dropped the tray. She gasped and ran off outside, there, she saw Dustin's X-wing, zooming toward the Borg Cube.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    Dustin's journey to the Dark Side, had begun.

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                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      Posted 18 November 2004 - 07:49 PM

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      o.o nice chapter again.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      -.-;; Um, there's something called EDIT! That's why it's there...-.-;;;

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                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        Posted 18 November 2004 - 08:02 PM

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        Yeah, I know.... huh... hmm...

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                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          Posted 18 November 2004 - 08:25 PM

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          =/ just use Edit next time so you dont need to double post.

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                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Posted 21 November 2004 - 06:49 AM

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Wow, that was an amazing chapter there I13, more action awaits.

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                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              Posted 21 November 2004 - 07:25 AM

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              cool story, but yeh, use the edit button next time :lol:

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                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                Posted 21 November 2004 - 12:11 PM

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                I will remember that. I need to gaher my thoughts on only that. And, some other stuff, too... <_<

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                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  Posted 21 November 2004 - 04:21 PM

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  :agitated: Other thoughts? Um...alright then. We'll just wait till your update...

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                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    Posted 26 November 2004 - 03:42 PM

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    I'd just like to tell you guys that a sequel to my Jedi Aacdemy story, will come in a few months, or years.

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                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      Posted 26 November 2004 - 08:01 PM

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      Isaac13, on Nov 26 2004, 03:42 PM, said:

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      I'd just like to tell you guys that a sequel to my Jedi Aacdemy story, will come in a few months, or years.


                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      :huh: that's a bit too much dont you think? years?

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                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        Posted 26 November 2004 - 09:00 PM

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        Well, not years... but months possibly...

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                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          Posted 26 November 2004 - 10:20 PM

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          Isaac13, on Nov 26 2004, 09:00 PM, said:

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          Well, not years... but months possibly...


                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          Next time dont be so dramatic in how long a story is going to take. We know how much you love your story, but a story cant go on for that long if you know what I mean.

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                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Posted 29 November 2004 - 05:35 PM

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Almost done. Now, for the final conflict.

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Jedi Academy II
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Final Conflict

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "Luke! Dustin, he's left. He went to the Borg Cube oriting above us!" Linear yelled when she reached Luke's room. Luke shifted his head.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "I know. It seems he is going to try his hand at the power of the Dark Side. Once he joins it, he will be one of the most powerful of the Sith, ever. I have tried it before, and my sisiter, Leia, turned me back to the light. But for Dustin, well, it'll be more difficult for him to turn back. He's already fueled by anger and despair. He has crossed that line, the line no Jedi would dare to cross." Luke said.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Linear shook her head in dissagreement. She folded her arms.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "He can't turn to the Dark Side. He's too strong. Maybe something triggered it, or he just got lost in his mind or something."
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "Wrong, Linear. I sensed everything that was going on in that room. Chatting with Yoda, sudden rage building, everything."
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "Well, we have to do something about it!" Lin said in desperation.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "We can't do a thing, but fight him up there. There's no other alternative." Link came in and said. He waved motion to other Jedi following him.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "We'll all fight him. Even if it means our lives."
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Lin looked away.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "We will get him back, Linear. I promise. on my honor as your brother, we will get Dustin back."
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Link said. He put his hand on Linear's shoulder. Linear held back her tears.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "Just how many Jedi are you taking with you, Link? We can't risk so many, you know." Luke asked.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Link counted.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "At least, say, 30. Is that a good number for you to handle?"
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "Yes, that's fine. Just don't lose all of them. That'll weaken the Jedi Order by at least half."
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "I'll try. Lin, if your'e willing to go-"
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "I'm going. Just wait for me."
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Link nodded. Then, he waved to get the other Jedi to leave.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Linear tapped her lightsaber a bit, then left.

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Dustin safely landed his X-wing in the Borg Cube's structure. He hopped out of the ship, and looked around.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            It looks pretty familiar. Like, a Death Star, or something. He thought. All of a sudden, 5 Sith guards were surrounding him.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "What is your buissines here?" A guard asked. Dustin shook his head.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "My buissines here is... to exterminate your lives."
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            The guards stepped back.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "Draw your blasters and fire!" The guards did as told, but Dustin was too quick. He had already been in the air, and in a second, he jumped down and slashed. Every single guard fell to the ground, their bodies severed. Dustin sheathed his lightsaber.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "Don't ever try that again, but wait, you can't." He said, and walked off.

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            The road ahead was quick and disturbing. Once Dustin had reached the throne room door, his memories flashed back.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "This is a Death Star! Just disquised to look like some space cube! Clever, but, why would they do that?"
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            As he opened the doors, two Reborn jumped out at him. They slashed quickly, but once again, dustin had an ace up his sleeve. His lightsaber was still ignited, so he stabbed the two Reborn's in their hearts, melting the internal organs. He stepped forward. He sensed a Dark presence, actually, two presences.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "Vader and Ragnos. I thought you would be in here. I have a deal. I get trained to the powers of the dark side, and the Jedi will be out of your way." Dustin said. Silence stood for quite some time. Then, Vader stood. Dustin saw a red lightsaber activate. He activated his as well, showing green bloody highlights over Vader's face. Vader leaped at Dustin, slashing down at him. Dustin raised a high block at Vader's saber, deflecting it back. Vader stepped back a few places, and spun his saber. Dustin stood still. Then, the Dark Lord jumped at Dustin once again. Dustin leaped high, dodging Vader's swipe, then stabbed down. Vader fell in agony, writhing in pain, his back smoking. Dustin stepped away from the burning body.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Then, he looked up at Ragnos.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "Fine, then. I will train you.Of course, it will not be easy." Ragnos said.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "You think anything is easy?" Dustin asked. He stepped up to ragnos, and his training begun.

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            31 Jedi Starfighters, plus one X-wing flew out of YavinIV's atmosphere, and to the disquised Death Star.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "Okay, guys. We all got to be careful. The Sith starfighters are gonna be after us, so be prepared."
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Link said over all channels. after everyone reported in, teh Sith fighters sped into space. All Jedi Squadrons broke flight formation, and picked on each fighter. Crossfire was everywhere, and Linear could not get a clear shot of a starfighter on her crosshairs. It outmanuvered her by three kliks of speed.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "I need some help, here! Now!" Linear yelled. No one could hear her, though. So, she gave up on that fighter. She saw the Death Star, but could not reach it yet, so she waited for the tractor beam to pull her in. It took time, but it started up. She was pulled in quickly, she could not control her X-wing. It rumbled and shook violently, but she made it on board the Death Star, and out of her X-wing.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "Link, I'm in." She said.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "Good. You should be able to find the throne room door. It has the special seal of the Sith. You know, big horned head, and all." Link said over his comm channel.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "Lin looked around the room. She couldn't see anything, then,
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "Wait. I see it. No guards, though. Okay, I'm going in." She crept up, and touched the door handle. She could hear no noise outside, meaning probably that the dogfight was over. Then, she saw the remaining Jedi starfighters enter the hangar. She then saw Jedi pile out of them. She went up to greet Link.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "Well, thatwas quick."
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "Well, yeah, it was. All we had to do was dump our seismic charges on them." Link said. Linear blinked. She waved the Jedi towards the door.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "There it is. It's time." They opened the door, lightsabers activated, and they saw Dustin, next to Ragnos.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "What a surprise. The Jedi. I expected you would come here. Well? What are you waiting for? Come and get me." Dustin said. He stood there, he looked pretty defensenless. But, there was something wrong. But, anyway, the Jedi leaped at him, everyone, one by one, surrounding him. One ran head first at him, but was unlucky. Dustin had his lightsaber in his hand, and activated it. The green blade went through the Jedi's stomach, and the body fell to the ground, lifeless.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            The others gasped, and the cycle of death went on, till it was two Jedi standing: Link and Linear.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "You can leave the Dark Path, Dustin. Like I did! Just forget all about this!" Link yelled. Dustin shook his head.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "Sorry to dissapoint you, Link. But this path, I chose." Dustin brought a gloved hand out, and closed it as a fist.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "Come." He said. Immediately, Link got angry and flew at Dustin in a mad rage. Linear yelled at him to control himself, but it was too late. Link sent a backspin slash straight at Dustin, only to be parried, and sent back. Link stumbled back abit, then rushed forward. He repeated the same moves over and over again, double thrust met a high uppercut, burning the floor, then a spinning slice meeting a low thrust. The two warriors moved in a dual-motion, parrying each other's moves, side by side, back to back, they each performed about 100 attacks on each other. Then, Dustin stepped back, suffering no harm, or loss of breath.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "You have grown, Link. But not as powerful to stop me. My training is already complete, and I am the strongest Sith ever. Not even Darth Vader can stop me. As you can see next to you, Linear, the body of Vader is smoldering." Dustin said. Linear took a peek to see what was next to her. There was the dead body of the sith lord. She gasped and sidestepped many times to her right. Then, she looked at Dustin, staring hard.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "I see you are speechless. Link, shall we get on with our battle, Link?" Dustin asked. He saw Link in plain view, still with his lightsaber, breathing heavily.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "I see that you are already fatigued, Link. What a fool to think to challenge me. Next time, think twice." Dustin said. He extended a hand, and used the Force to push Link across the room. Link fell unconcious.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Linear looked to Dustin now. She had determination in her eyes, and walked toward Dustin. Dustin had a worried glow in his eyes, and prepared for battle. He shifted his stance, to the one Link preferred. Linear was surprised at this, as Dustin only chose his own stances.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            But, that was when he was a Jedi. She thought. She chose her stance to begin, and waited there. Dustin gripped his lightsaber, sweating, and breathing softly. He then stepped toward Linear, staring her down, in a fury unmatched by anyone else. Linear stood, gripping her saber as well. Then, Dustin made the first move. He swiped his saber to the left, hitting Linear's silver lightsaber with his green one. They held the saber lock for some time, then retreated backwards. Linear then leaped into the air, and slahed her saber down at Dustin's. Dustin guarded with a high block above his head, and pushed Lienar back behind him. This would have been a mistake of Dustin's, but he planned that move out carefully. Lin moved back a few steps, then darted forward. She imitated Link's and Dustin's last battle, and the circle moved on and on. Dustin kept on moving with a forward parry every time, and they, too, were in dual-motion. Ragnos sat, watching the feirce battle. Dustin then tricked Lienar by performing a low cut, and then kicking her saber out of her hand. The silver lightsaber flew straight into the air vents, up above. Lin raised her hand, and recalled her lightsaber. She reactivated it and moved back.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "Dustin, you could turn back to the lightside. It's not too late. We won't hurt you."Dustin did not listen to this, as he thought it was all a lie. So, he darted forward, and slashed again. This time, it seemed that Linear had the upper hand. She moved gently through the fight, swinging her lightsaber in random directions, blocking Dustin's every move. A sideswipe deflected a thrust, then a forward lunge batted away against a backward spin-slice. Dustin retreated back a few, and wiped his forehead.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "You, especially, have gotten stronger, Linear. But I can sense that you are faultering. Just give up this worthless conflict and we can end this." Dustin said. Linear shook her head.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "No, Dustin. No until you are back to your normal self again. Your true Jedi identity."
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "Linear, can't you see that I belong with the Sith? My great-grandfather was a sith Lord, Darth Revan to be exact. Then, he turned from the Dark to the light again. But I, I was not ment to turn back, Linear. Iwas meant to stay with the Dark." Dustin said back.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "That's a lie!" Linear yelled. She rushed at Dustin with every ounce of her rage, and sliced wildy. Dustin deflected every one of her blows, and pushed her back once more.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "Linear, stop it. You will only tire yourself out." Dustin said.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            But Linear refused to quit. She continued her onslaught, letting her anger take over. Her fury was near the line of killing Dustin, but she did not want to let that be so. She tried to hide her anger, but could not control it. Tears came flowing from her eyes, as she swung. Then, a move too quick to be seen, stung her for a bit. her clothes sizzled, as she saw Dustin's lightsaber tear through her tunics right arm. The sleeve was severed, but Lin's arm was not gone, luckily. Dustin then continued where her assault left off. He turned the battle around, by swinging madly at Linear now. But, he had not lost his control. He knew what he was doing. Then, he pushed linear to a spot to where Linear had no chance of escape. He pushed her to the edge of a vaccum.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            How come I never saw that there? That's why it was so cold in here. He held his saber lock for quite some time. Then, he moved back, letting Linear move up for space. Linear was breathing more heavily now. Her hair drencehd in sweat, and her clothes in sweat also. Dustin had gotten her to the brink of collapsing. She was too tired. Dustin pitied her. He then moved up to Linear, but then all of a sudden, pulled back.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "Ragnos? What ard you doing?" Dustin said in a hard tone.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "I am altering your brain to attack more visciously. I am tired of you and your slow progression. Kill her already." Ragnos said. Then, Dustin's eyes were glowing red. He raised his lightsaber, but tried to gain control.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "Stop, Ragnos. I can do this myself."
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "You acnnot. I am taking over." Ragnso then made a ghost of himself, then slipped into Dustin's body. Dustin had no control anymore, then, Ragnos moved back some more, giving Linear more space. Linear moved up, and said,
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "Dustin. You cannot let him control you. You cannot. Let him out of your body! Please... don't end it this way. You can still turn-" But, Linear's sentence was stopped, as she looked down at her body, she saw a green lightsaber, in her chest.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            She looked up, and saw Dustin's eyes burning in hot pleasure, and fury. Then, Dustin took his lightsaber out of Linear's chest, and turned it off. Linear fell, and stayed to the ground. Ragnos then left Dustin's body, and Dustin was back to ghis normal self. Dustin then looked down at Linear's body, then Ragno's laughing face.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "What have you done?! Look what I have done! No... Linear... why did I do this? Why..." Dustin said.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Ragnos looked up.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "It is because you were too weak and pitiful, with your own mind. You acred for her too much, that you did not finish her off. I had to do the job. I wanted to see some bloodshed." Ragnos said. He laughed a bit more. Dustin stared at Linear's body, then, at Ragnos. He then, shed a small tear, and turned to Ragnos.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "You will pay for what you have done. You will pay." He said.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Ragnos stood.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "Fool. My training only increased your endurance and strength. But, what about your speed?" He said. He then was behind Dustin in an eyeblink.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "No..." Dustin said.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "You can't do this any longer."
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "You have turned away from the dark side. Maybe, your friend, Linear, will."
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "NEVER!!!" Dustin yelled! He started his pounding at Ragnos in a mad fury, attacking his saber in a mad fury, trying to bat Ragnos's lightsaber away. He then pushed Ragnos to the throne chair, then smacked at the red lightsaber while Ragnos was on the chair handle. he kept batting, and batting, until he hit Ragnos's saber up, then cut off his arm. Soon after, he stabebd a hole in Ragnos's chest, and rushed back to Linear. He held her in his arms.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "Linear. Wake up. You are gonna be okay. I'm sure of it. Please!" He begged.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Linear opened her eyes, slowly.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "I told you that you could turn away..." She said softly. She stroked Dustin's face.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "Linear. Come on. Please! Don't die! i can't lose you!" Then, Linear forwarded her head to Dustin's, then kissed him. Dustin held that kiss for a while. Then, Linear drew her head back. Dustin had tears in his eyes.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "Dustin... I love you. And I know, that you feel the same for me, correct?" Linear asked. Dustin nodded. Slowly.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "Yes, Linear... I love you so... just don't die. Please..." Dustin said.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Linear shook her head.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "I won't, Dustin. I swear I won't. Now, please, promise me one thing."
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "What is it?"
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "Promise to stay with me... in heart, spirit, and mind... please... stay with me..." Linear said.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "I will." Dustin said back. Linear wiped a tear from Dustin's face.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "Now, please help me up. This burnhole is making me weaker by the second." She said. Dustin did as said. Dustin then went to Link, and woke him.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "Link, let's go. The New Republic should be here any moment." Dustin said. Lin opened his eyes.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            "I thought you would redeem your self. Okay, let's get out of here."
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Moments later, Dustin, Linear, and Link escaped the Death Star, and retreated back to YavinIV. I think you guys would know what happens afterwords.

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            If you don't, here's the abck data:
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Dustin and Linear
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Link and Jaina Solo

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            And if you thought of those other guys, Matt, John, Tyler,a nd every one else, they are gonna be in the New Jedi Order story coming up. Well, this is the end of my Jedi Academy story. Now, onto the New Jedi Order. -_-

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                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              Posted 03 December 2004 - 09:08 PM

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              :o Yeah, it really was a long chapter. Your longest one yet.

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                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              It stinks like everything that is yours!

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                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                That is not nice. Not at all. :angry:

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                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                Yeah well what about you? Saying I'm cyberRoll and then he/she post his/her self
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                and you still say that he/she is me!

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                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  Posted 03 December 2004 - 11:34 PM

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  Anyway, this story is done. I'm out. Reply if you want to.

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                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  I was groggy last night sorry.... Anyway nice story.

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                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    Nice ending I13, it was cool, I loved the story altogether.

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                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      Glad you guys like it.


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