[Valistrix]

My old story got kinda boring and I ran out of ideas but i'm gonna make a new story with you guys in it ^_^ .
I will put the GSSF username in then there story name.
Link=Levian
Blade Lord Lyn=Lapis
Linear=Linear
Isaac13=Isaac
Piers DiamondBerg Master=Piers
Nick1Presta=Nick Presta
Kate=Kate
Kikuichimonji=Kiku

I will be posting the story soon so stay tuned.

[Kikuichimonji]

^_^ what about me?...meh

[Valistrix]

Sorry Kiku i've added you

[Valistrix]

Well since no one else posted i'm gonna have to double post, sorry ^_^

Chapter One: Two Young Boys

Levian Cinder, one of the best Archers in all of his hometown Cecian. His father was one of the best archers in the land. He is fourteen years old, just the right height for his age. He had nice red wavy hair, a red scarf and purple leather armour. Levian was scouring the mountain tops with his closest friend Lapis. Lapis was very talented with the blade. Lapis was just a year older than Levian, hes fifteen, just a little taller than Levian, He had dark green hair and a green suit. Levian and Lapis were climbing over the Xylion mountains, exploring as usual.
"How long do these mountains go on for?" moaned Levian.
"Oh Levian, stop complaining we'll be back at Cecian soon ok" said Lapis.
"Ok ok" whispered Levian.
Up on a ledge, something was spying on them, silently shifting across the mountain.
"Can you hear sumink?" said Levian.
"Only the sound of you complaining" said Lapis.
Suddenly, the creature jumped down in front of Levian and swept his arm into Levian's chest. Sitting against drowsily against the wall Lapis drew his sword then slashed at the beast.
"Damn it, it's an orc" yelled Lapis.
He then jumped in the air and waved his sword at the orcs arm, it flew into the air. The orc was screaming with rage and anger shoving Lapis onto the floor. Levian jumped up and whipped out his bow and shot an arrow right in the orcs left eyes, then Lapis stabbed the orcs in the chest. Blood went everywhere.
Levian and Lapis were gasping for air.
"Well that was tough" said Levian.
"You don't say" said Lapis.
The boys jumped up and continued down the mountain.

Back at Cecian Levian and Lapis went back to there homes. When Levian went in and saw his mother. She opened her mouth to speak but Levian just bursted out with all that had happened at the mountains. After half an hour Levian noticed his father wasn't there.
"Mother..where is father?" asked Levian.
"I was trying to tell you Levian" said his mother.
"Let me guess he got caught up by some monsters again, don't worry he'll be back soon" said Levian
"Well, no actually-"his mother was cut off.
"Well then maybe he was held up by traders or something, what else could of happened", Levian was starting to get worried.
"Levian my dear dear child, Lyle, your father, well, hes missing" said his mother.
Levian couldn't believe it.



Well that's all for now folks, hope you enjoyed chaper one.

[Isaac13]

Oh! I'm in it! Are you going to put me as some strong warrior type guy?

[Linear]

Am I going to appear in the next chapter? Yare yare, nice first chapter.

[Isaac13]

Am I gonna be in the next chapter, fighting someone?

[Linear]

@.@ Oh well, were just going to have to wait and see.

[Isaac13]

Yeah....

[Blade Lord Lyn]

Hmm, you used my FEP RP character. . . Lapis is a bit more laid back and calm then that, and he's not much of an insulter. But still, 'tis good.

[Isaac13]

Can you start this thing now? I want to see me in it. I'm getting impatient.

[Valistrix]

Blade Lord Lyn, on Oct 12 2004, 08:03 PM, said:

Hmm, you used my FEP RP character. . . Lapis is a bit more laid back and calm then that, and he's not much of an insulter. But still, 'tis good.

Ok BLL i'll remember that.
As for you Linear and Isaac13, you're coming soon, I have to think out the story you know. Update coming soon.

[Kikuichimonji]

At least I'm not a wall or something...hehe

Anyway cool story so far

[Valistrix]

Thanks for posting Kiku now I can post Chapter Two

Chapter Two: The Maiden Linear

"Why did this have to happen to me, father ment everything to me, he gave me my first bow, he taught me the arts of archery. What will I ever do without him" said Levian, his hands buried in his face.
"Listen Levian, i'm asking of a bit much and I think it's to soon but, I want you and your friend Lapis to go find your father" said his mother.
"Really" said Levian.
"Levian, you're old enough now, you're strong enough, I can trust you to do this" said his mother.
"..." Levian couldn't answer.
"Please Levian, do it for me, and yourself" pleaded his mother.
"Ok, i'll go get Lapis, we'll be going up the Xylion mountains again" then Levian gave his mother a big hug.
"Thank you so much my dear child" whispered his mother.

Outside Lapis was leaning against the wall of his house sharpening his sword.
"Whats the matter Levian, you look down" said Lapis.
"My father has gone missing, i'm going out to look for him" Levian answered.
"Well you really think i'd let you go alone, i'm coming with you Levian" said Lapis, a warm smile grew on his face.
"I was hoping you would say that, thank you Lapis" Said Levian.
"Well what could I say, i've been looking out for you since we met, now lets go find your father" said Lapis.
"Yes, lets" said Levian, then they both walked off to the base of the Xylion mountains.

When Levian and Lapis had gone a fair way up the mountain, they saw a maiden being attacked by a goblin. Without any speech or hesitation, Levian pulled out his bow and whipped up five arrows from his quiver. He then shot the arrows and they hit the goblin between the eyes. The madien looked up, as soon as she looked Levian into the eyes he stared with amaze,
"I've never seen something so beutiful" he said. He walked up to the maiden and took a deep breath then spoke,
"Excuse me miss but are you ok?"
"Oh please call me Linear, I am a maidne of the nearby legendary village, Xylion. Thank you so much from saving me from that goblin" then Linear kissed Levian on the cheek. Levian couldn't help going red, then he said,
"So what are you doing up here anyway, a pretty girl like yourself should not be up here in the mountains, it's dangerous".
"Well as a maiden I have to check out the mountains every once in awhile to check there are no monster when the goblin attacked me, he knocked me to the floor, I thought I might die, but then you saved me" replied Linear, staring right into Levian's eyes.
"Well I..umm, I would never want to see a beuty like you hurt" said Levian.
"Umm I don't want to interupt your little love conversation here but Levian we need to press on and find your father" said Lapis.
"Why what has happened?" asked Linear.
Levian and Lapis then told Linear everything that had happened.
"Oh I see...well I shall come help you, losing a parent is a horrible experience and I would never want to see you like me Levian" said Linear.
"But Linear, you are a maiden, you must go back to your village" said Levian.
"Levian, a maidens job is also to help others, so I will accompony you no matter what" Linear smiled and hugged Levian. Levian blushed then the three looked at the sunset.



That's all for now, hope you enjoed this chapter.

[Isaac13]

Good Chapter. Am I in the next one? I hope I am.

[Linear]

^^ Yay....! I'm in it now! o.O Do I get to fight? Just wondering. >.>

[Kikuichimonji]

>_<
never mind
w00t, carry on!!

[Isaac13]

Yes, please carry on!

[Isaac13]

So, uh... when's this thing coming, anyway?

[Kikuichimonji]

please don't double post, I13, use the edit button

can't wait next chapter

[Isaac13]

I know. Hey, Link. Please continue the story. I just did mine and I don't want to double post.

[Linear]

=D Yeah, continue it! Dont leave us hanging!

[Isaac13]

Dude! When are you gonna post the next one? My patience has it's limits, you know.

[Valistrix]

Sorry guys been REALLY busy.

Chapter Three: A Guy And A Girl

Somewhere in the wilderness lived a family of swordmasters, well not exactly. One of the members of the family, a lad called Isaac prefered to use an Axe. Isaac was medium high, dark blue hair and loved dueling with his older sister Kiku. Kiku was the best sword user in the family.
"Hey mum, whens dinner ready?" asked Isaac, he was very impatient.
"How many times has mother told you Isaac, it'll be ready when it's ready" said Kiku. The wolderness was a dangerous place to venture, so much evil lurked there.

"Oh man" sighed Levian, "we gotta cross the wilderness to look further for my father.
"Have hope Levian, we'll find a way" said Lapis.
"Yeah, as long as we're a team, nothing will stand in our way" said Linear, placing her hand on Levian's shoulder. They walked down the mountainside and into the wilderness. They walked a few miles and a few more then they were ambushed by demons.
"This is why I didn't want to come to the wildy" said Levian while drawing his Bow.
"It' ok, we can do this" said Lapis, holding his word with both hands"
"Ummm...i'm a maiden so I can't fight but I can help you with my spells" said Linear. Levian pulled out an arrow and fired at the first demon. The demon dodged and lunged towards Levian. Just then a shield popped up in front of Levian and he saw Linear was casting one of her spells. Then, two more demons flew into the fray.
"Theres no hope" said Levian, all three were surrounded by 7 demons. But then, an axe came flying from a hill and knocked out a demon cold, and one demon was sliced in half from behind by a young woman.
"Let's get this show on the road" said Isaac, smirking.

[Linear]

Yay, you continued Link. =9 You didn't abandon it. We know your busy, so dont mind us and out impatience.

[Kikuichimonji]

I'm Isaac's sister :lol:

How did you know that's my fav weapon?!

continue it please, this is good

[Valistrix]

Thanks for comment but i'm tired an it's 8:52PM here so maybe tommorow.

[Kikuichimonji]

you're tired? :lol:

I wasn't expecting you to continue the story now, just soon

[Valistrix]

Oh ok I see, well i'll think it up tonight and get it done tommorow.

[Linear]

Dont be too tired. Dont get too worked up in making a story, or any other things your doing. @.@

[Isaac13]

Swords kick ass! I'm the swordmaster! This chapter was good. Anyway, you know when kiku says "It'll be ready when it's ready?" That is what my mom says all the time! Hey, you got my character, Isaac from Taurus, didn't you? You sneek! Anyway, it's cool.

[Linear]

=9 I suppose he's a bit busy, I guess the story wont update till later then.

[Valistrix]

Hole in one Linear, really, really busy so no update for awhile.

[Isaac13]

How come I only get free time for my fanfic? Ah, well. I'll just wait till then.

[Linear]

x.x people are so busy. I am too.
I'll wait too.

[Isaac13]

Yeah. I'll wait. Though I am not good at waiting.

[Valistrix]

Isaac13, on Oct 19 2004, 08:17 PM, said:

Yeah. I'll wait. Though I am not good at waiting.

Ok, to let you know, next Chapter Tomoz!!!

[Linear]

Link, on Oct 20 2004, 10:54 AM, said:

Ok, to let you know, next Chapter Tomoz!!!

o.O Tomoz? O.O Alright then..cant wait to see the chapter then.

[Isaac13]

Quoting Quagmire: "Heh, heh, alright!

[Valistrix]

Really really sorry guys but since I had a Bsketball game this aft (we won 40-12!) There will not be one till sometime in the weekend.

[Isaac13]

Congrats on your victory! I love basketball. I'll just wait a little more. Wait a moment, I wanted to use the sword!

[Valistrix]

Ok i'm pointing it down to sunday so check this out on sunday!

[Linear]

Alrightly then Link. We'll wait till tomrrow!

[Matthias]

Wow. This story seems interesting. :P Better then all the other ones in the fanfic (hopefully none of the other writers saw that :blink:). Get that chapter up ASAP! :lol:

[Valistrix]

RagaKnight, on Oct 23 2004, 11:53 PM, said:

Wow. This story seems interesting. :P Better then all the other ones in the fanfic (hopefully none of the other writers saw that :blink:). Get that chapter up ASAP! :lol:

Awww gees thanks,

Chapter 4: New Friends, New Foes.

All the demons had fallen, blood was everywhere. Levia lifted up his dagger to Isaac's neck,
"Who are you barbarian, speak!" said Levian.
"Levian stop it" said Lapis then he walked up to Kiku and Isaac, "I am Lapis and this is my friend Levian, you have our thanks for rescuing us but we must really getting on our way" said Lapis then the three adventurers walked off.
"Hey wait a minute, they must be on an adventure!" said Isaac to Kiku.
"Yes it looks like it, hey you now what that we saved them their in our debt!" replied Kiku.
"Alrighty it looks like they can repay us for saving them, mother and father wouldn't mind" said Isaac then they ran up to the trio.

Somebody was watching them in the trees, it jumped down right in front of Linear and swiped her up.
"Welcome oh chosen one" said the figure, judging by it's voice it was a male.
"Linear!" shouted Levian,
"hey leave her alone, whoever you are!" he also said. Lapis said,
"I am going to get angry with you if you do not reurn the lady".
"Then fight me for her" said the figure in a shadowy voice. Immedieatly, Levian pulled out an arrow and plunged it into the figures arm, he let go of Linear. Lapis then ran up to the fugure and kicked him to the ground. The man was angry,
"FOOLS!, you dare fight the almight N--. Just then an axe hit the figure in the chestplate sending him flying back.
"I'll be back for you maiden!" vowed the figure as he teleported. Levian looked back, he saw Isaac and Kiku.
"What are you guys doing here?" he asked.
"You really think after saving your life we were gonna leave you alone, no way you owe us, remeber?" replied Isaac and Kiku.
"Fine you can come" said Lapis.

They rested for camp. Linear was sitting by herself, Levian walked up to her and sat down beside her,
"Did you know that guy?" Levian asked,
"No, but I have seen him before, at the temple of Xylion, he came and argued with our priest then left. No one knew who he was, but as he was leaving he lookied at me and gave me an evil grin" said Linear.
"It's ok Linear, I won't let him get to you, I will protect you from the evil" said Levian. Linear leant her head on Levian's shoulder and he put his arm around her...

[Linear]

Yatta~! ^_^ Ayee! Yay, the story continues! *claps and wonders if anyone wants popcorn* lol
O.O *stares at the part she was caught* O_O;; meep. XD Oh well! That chapter was good, just like the other ones!!! ^__^ *claps happily*
Cant wait to see the other chapters!

[Valistrix]

Linear, on Oct 24 2004, 01:43 PM, said:

Yatta~! :P Ayee! Yay, the story continues! *claps and wonders if anyone wants popcorn* lol
O.O *stares at the part she was caught* O_O;; meep. XD Oh well! That chapter was good, just like the other ones!!! ^__^ *claps happily*
Cant wait to see the other chapters!

Thak you all for enjoying my story so far, I have worked really hard. BLL is in this story yet he has not rated it ^_^

[Kikuichimonji]

I'm sure he'll see it soon enough :ph34r:

yay, good chapter! I'll be back fighting I hope :wacko:

can't wait!

[Valistrix]

Kikuichimonji, on Oct 25 2004, 11:05 AM, said:

I'm sure he'll see it soon enough :ph34r:

yay, good chapter! I'll be back fighting I hope :wacko:

can't wait!

Thank you aswell Kiku.
NOTE: Since all my buisiness has gone I should be able to update tommorow.

[Isaac13]

Hey! It continued! Awsome, awsome, awsome! Alright, alright alright!

[Linear]

o.O BLL will read the story soon Link.

[Valistrix]

I will not be able to update the story for awhile beucause of the amount of homework I have (it sucks when it destroys your week off).

[Matthias]

*sighs* Another great Link original! Splendid! :lol: Anyways, good luck on your homework I guess! :ph34r:

[Kikuichimonji]

well, as long as you continue the story I'm happy

good luck with homework (same prob)

[Valistrix]

Wow homework is easy at my age.

Chapter Five: Linear's Fall Down

Levian woke. He must have fell asleep, Linear was asleep on his shoulder. He looked forward to see the sunrise,
"I hope that is a sign of good luck" he whispered. He looked down to see a town. That must be Xylion, he thought. Linear slowly awoke.
"Good morning Linear" said Levian.
"Good morning" said Linear,
"Is that Xylion?" she said while looking down. Levian nodded.
"I think so, do you want to visit?" asked Levian.
"Well it would be nice but I did not complete my mission on the mountains, so the father of the church would be ashamed".
"No he won't, well he might but it's worth a try" shrugged Levian.
"You're right, lets go" said Linear. Isaac walked towards the two.
"Hey guys, we're continuing down the mountains towards Xylion. Kiku wants to go shopping" sighed Isaac.
"Well we don't have a choice now do we" said Linear.
"No I don't think so" said Levian. Lapis and Kiku woke up and walked out of the tent, then they all packed up and continued down the mountainside.

They had arrived at Xylion, Linear smiled as she saw the sight of the church.
"Well see you guys later" said Kiku and Isaac, then they walked into the town center. Lapis walked behind them,
"If you want me you know where I am" he said. Levian said,
"Well it's just the two of us so lets go". The church was huge, more like a chathedral, inside next to the entrance on either side were two statues of saints, one holding a long metal pole and the other a sword. A man was standing by the altar,
"Linear!" he roared. Linear looked down.
"Yes father Carius?" asked Linear. Carius turned around.
"How dare you! You betrayed your purpose, helping out these, these barbarians!"
"Hey!" shouted Levian, "She only just got back and your yelling at her!"
"Please Levian, don't. Father Carius, I am sorry but these people needed my help, they--". Linear was cut off.
"Never mind that! Becuase you did not seal the gate on the mountains we had an attack here at Xylion!". Carius walked up to Linear and pulled off her cloak and snatched up her religous necklace.
"Get out of my sight, now!" shouted Carius.
"...Ok father Carius but let me tell that I helped out these people becuase that is what we do, come Levian" said Linear then while walking to the exit she looked at the metal pole. She lept at the statue and ripped it out then stormed off out of the church.
"Ummm, I better go two" said Levian and followed Linear.

[Linear]

O.O Interesting that happened! Ayee! n.n continue it soon Link! *continues doing hw*

[Valistrix]

I wish I could but like you I have a ton of homework waiting next to me on my desk.

[Valistrix]

Ayeee, well I do have alot of people already being put in it put i'll see what I can do.

[Linear]

>< ayee! My word! >.>
n.n heh, I wonder what will happen next. Cant wait.

[Valistrix]

Linear, on Oct 30 2004, 03:56 PM, said:

>< ayee! My word! >.>
n.n heh, I wonder what will happen next. Cant wait.

It isn't your word I found it on VGcats 2 years ago. The next chapter should be up tommorow.

[Linear]

Ohh...I just began saying it when I began saying it.
Alrighty then Link. Cant wait it see it.

[I'm Always BROKE]

Can I be in your next story? :unsure:

[Valistrix]

So...many...people...asking...I am not sure Dk I have alot and I don't know if I can out Serendae in it so possibly a no...

[I'm Always BROKE]

Ow well... Maybe the second next?

[Linear]

n.n nice, DK is going to be in the story too.

[I'm Always BROKE]

Yay! :silence: Thanks for the warm hearted welcome Lin.

[Valistrix]

Linear, on Nov 1 2004, 09:37 PM, said:

n.n nice, DK is going to be in the story too.

Linear, I posted that Dk could not be in the story since I have planned it out already, maybe a future FanFic DK.

[I'm Always BROKE]

Well OK I guess I just need to wait...

[Linear]

Link, on Nov 2 2004, 10:17 AM, said:

Linear, I posted that Dk could not be in the story since I have planned it out already, maybe a future FanFic DK.

Ayee, alright then Link. @.@ Cant wait to see the chapter then!!

[Kikuichimonji]

>>

<<

okay then

GREAT STORY LINK!!! continue!

[Isaac13]

Very good. Awsome. Very good literature, there.

[Valistrix]

I might be dissapointing you all saying this but I cannot continue the Fanfic, I am very busy in my real life and I just don't have the time, sorry.

[Linear]

It's alright that you cant continue the fic. Many of us has difficult times in your lives as it is.

[Isaac13]

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
That can't be possible!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ah, well. It was great while it lasted.

[Linear]

It's a bit sad that the story wont continue, but it's been great while it lasted!

[Kikuichimonji]

Apparently Links going again anyway...

I'll drag him back

[I'm Always BROKE]

No he's leaving for good... I tried to let him stay on MSN but I failled too... I am sorry.

[Kikuichimonji]

but DK

I-have-my-ways...

[Linear]

Is there a reason why Link-san is leaving? *sees their going off-topic* Oops.

[Valistrix]

It was nothing. I am soory all very much as I can see everybody is said I have stopped it.