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Not Really Mine...

#1   Mallick 

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    Posted 24 October 2004 - 01:21 AM

    Okay, so my friend like writes poems, so I thought I would post one of hers
    titled:why don't you love me?

    Why do you leave me standing here, all alone?
    I am waiting for you, out in the cold.
    Please come out, and comfort thee.
    Why, oh why, don't you love me?


    Why don't you love me?
    Why, oh why don't you love me?

    I am getting wet, I am getting cold.
    I want to be with you until I grow old.
    But when ever we are together, you inch away.

    Why don't you love me?
    Why, oh why, don't you love me?



    I am currently writing guitar for it, it will be my bands next song.

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      Posted 24 October 2004 - 01:38 AM

      Aww...that one is so cool. Sad, but with emotion, and that's what makes it good. =D That's good PDM!

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        Posted 24 October 2004 - 01:39 AM

        Awwwww, that is so...cool! Emotional is what it is, well done.

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          Posted 24 October 2004 - 01:53 PM

          Yeah, She is the singer of my 'band' so she writes poems for lyrics....
          there was another one I liked, but I don't remember it very well...

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            Posted 24 October 2004 - 02:27 PM

            does someone die in it?
            i hope so...

            #6   Mallick 

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              Posted 24 October 2004 - 04:59 PM

              Dude, its not a darn story! if you read it you wouldn't probably get in trouble...okay so yuo won't get in trouble...but DUDE!

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                Posted 24 October 2004 - 08:45 PM

                O.O Ayee! The lyric's are sssooo...emotional! Like I said before. ^_^ Hmm...I wonder what it will sound like.

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                  Posted 25 October 2004 - 02:52 PM

                  Emotions belong to the dark side.... well, at least they did. Nice poem, PDM.

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                    Posted 25 October 2004 - 03:44 PM

                    Isaac13, on Oct 25 2004, 04:52 PM, said:

                    Emotions belong to the dark side.... well, at least they did. Nice poem, PDM.


                    At least someone here has his proncipals straight
                    *pats Isaac13 on back* :P

                    #10   Mallick 

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                      Posted 25 October 2004 - 04:47 PM

                      Dude, that was kinda spammish! (IMO, anyways)

                      Well, I am about to get lyrics/poems emailed to me by my friend....i should have a couple poems up by tomorrow...

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                        Posted 07 November 2004 - 11:41 PM

                        Actually, Percy, if this poem is made by someone else (and you didn't get permission from them to put it up in the first place), then that's plagerizing. Next time, please get the permission of the sole individual before posting something up made by them.

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