[Valistrix]

I decided after a few failure FanFics I will make one that will last!

Prologue

Thousands of years ago in the land of Xanthalas, peace and harmony was the peoples main target. The land was split into three realms, the Light Realm in the north, the Human Realm in the west and the Dark Realm lied in the south. in the west there was just a baron wasteland where nothing could survive. All of a sudden, this peace and harmony was shattered when an army from the west invaded the human realm...
"Come child, we must leave" shouted an escaping civillian. His son quickly emerged from the burning house and ran beside his father. The whole city was under attack. The child looked up at the Palace to see nothing but flames,
"mother"... he whispered to himself. An Ogre jumped from the top of a Noble's house in front of his father. The father was quck to draw his sword and stab the Ogre in the heart.
"Father, what about mother?" asked the young boy.
"Your right, you go hide and i'll go get your mother, ok?". The child wanted to say no but instead he nodded and ran to a small opening in the city walls. All he heard was screaming but then he heard his mother and father inside his head, screaming in pain. The boy got up and ran to the Palace, he wasn't sure what happened but he was about to find out.
"So where is it!" yelled a large, shadowy figure. Joseph, the boys father stood up slowly, holding his arm.
"How many times do I have to tell you, I don't know!". The boys mother, Hilda ran beside Joseph,
"The Pendant went missing a week ago" she shouted.
"That Pendant is the only key to the Lost City in the Light Realm and I need it now!" the figure yelled. Then the gates of the Palce threw open and the boy ran in,
" Mother, father!" said the boy. The figure smiled then rushed at the speed of light behind the child and scooped him up, then one of him ogre minions aimed an arrow at the boys head.
"Ahhhhh, mother please help!" screamed the boy in fear.
"Stop!" Hilda yelled, pulling out a necklace,
"Here is the Pendant, now please take it and leave this city!". The figure smiled then calmy said,
"Your desicion was wise Queenie" he then dropped the child, and walked up to Hilda and Joseph,
"But not wise enough..." he shouted and drew his sword and slahed of Hilda's head, then swirved around and plunged his blade into Joshpeh then it to the floor.
"Noooooooo!" screamed the child,
"Hush child! I could kill you aswell!" Bellowed the figure. A tear dropped from the boys eye but he wiped his face with a part of his shirt and looked at the monsters blade. The figure turned around but he had forgotten the Pendant. The boy picked up the Pendant and wrapped it around the blade then shouted,
"Here, you forgot something!" and threw the blade nito the figures neck. The figure coughed and choked then fell to the floor and melted with all his minions. The boy ran over to the Pendant and picked it up. He held it close to his heart, then his face became a valley of tears...

[Mycarayne]

Gotta watch out for those little kids. They'll always screw you if you don't be careful. A very nice prologue. A bit uh, violent though...

[Linear]

*arms frailing* that was an nice prologue though! Heehee, you have to admit it was really good. ^.^; and hey, he added the Light/Dark Realms in it! Oh my...*claps alot* ^.^ even in the begining to 'awe' at it. Wonderful XD

[Valistrix]

I'm glad you liked it. The First Chapter will be up sometime this week so stay tuned!

[Linear]

:3 cool Link, can't wait to read it. Nya han!

[Mycarayne]

Great. I wanna see how this kid avenges his parents. Besides stapling the guy who killed them to the floor.

That was a great story. Oh wait, I said that already.

[Ravenblade]

thats a nice story link, so far. I take it that it will unfold into something quite special which should be nice to see.

Keep it up^^

[Isaac13]

Whoa, whoa, whoa! You made this, Link? Very good!!!

[Mycarayne]

Yo Link, you gonna continue on with this? *sitting on edge of seat*

[Valistrix]

u.u Won't be a new chapter for awhile since I have a project for school, I might try later on when I have a break, just too much homework...

[Linear]

O.O! We all have a lot of HW. Take your timeish. :X

[Mycarayne]

Yeah, no hurry. just making sure you didn't forget.

[Valistrix]

Ok I have half an hour on this thing, lets get rolling.

Chapter 1

Part 1

The boy shot up from the cold marble floor. He had remebered what had happened the night before, the blood, the pain, his parents...
A Noble charged through from one of the servant quarterrs shouting,
"Queen Hilda, Queen Hilda!". He frantically searched around then looked at the young boy,
"Prince Atarius!" he yelled, it all came back to the boy now. He fell stood up and tried to speak but he didn't have the energy and fainted to the floor. His mind was buzzing with thoughts of the dreadful night then there was a big loud BANG!.
"Who are you?" asked the boy. The Noble looked at the boy in amazement,
"Prince Atarius, are you ok?" he said. Atarius looked down to the ground then looked back up, he didn't know who is was, where he was or even what he was.
" Atarius? Is that my name" he said in a small voice.
"Oh no, you must be suffering Amnesia. It's ok Atarius, we'll take care of you now" He looked around at the dead bodys then noticed one particular body.
"Queen Hilda!" He yelled then ran for the body,
"It's too late, your mothers-"
"Dead, I know, I saw it all. I knew something bad was going to happen, I saw it in my dream before the incident" Atarius looked down at his father's swordthen picked it up.
"I know what I must do, I will avenge my parents death, I will strike down the evil that ruined my life, vengence shall be mine..." whispered Atarius, he slowling walked through the Palace doors, like a mindless robot, then walked out into a storm...

Part 2

"Hyyyyaaaaa!" shouted Ayra as she shot another arrow at the target board. The arrow hit dead center with a 'Thunk'. Ayra Savenri was a woodland elf. She lived in the Witchwood forests on the edge of the Light Realm. She and her clan had to stop any evil entering thier realm. She trained by her self deep into Witchwood, away from the crowd so she could concentrate. She mostly was skilled in using the Bow and was swift with her twin daggers. She didn't think she was that important to her realm, but that soon would all change...


Sorry guys and gals, all i got time for tonight, hopefully i'll get some more up soon. n.n enjoy ^^

[Linear]

O.O ooOooOoooooooo........Nice chapter Link. n.n!!! I loved it. *claps while eating popcorn* Heehee

[cyberRoll]

TIs story in pretty cool.I couldn't come up like somthing like this oif I tried, wait THATS IT!!!

[Mycarayne]

Kewl. Lovely uh... sound effects. "hhyyyaaa" lol. Very VERY cool.

[cyberRoll]

Very interesting chapter Link I like it.

[blade]

oh sure say nice things about his story and not mine...what did i do not to get nice things said about me and MY STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?????