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Oblivion part one of 3

#1   Venus dude 21 

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    Posted 06 March 2005 - 10:15 AM

    This is my first Fan Fic, so be lienent.

    We gods are angry. This man is a plague. We must stop him. These wars will only lead to their destruction. It will be final. (short prolouge, thats it)

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      Posted 06 March 2005 - 05:11 PM

      Can really say much with that. I can't really comment on it, except that could quite possibly the best bit of foreshadowing I have ever read. :agitated:

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        Posted 06 March 2005 - 05:53 PM

        Well it is short, but it's still a very very good prolouge, look forward to see the rest.

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          Posted 06 March 2005 - 07:06 PM

          is this a preview? well its got me interested now wheres part 1? :agitated:

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            Posted 06 March 2005 - 08:01 PM

            (everything in parenthesies is me just giving a little info. Well, here we go. Doing in chapters, just to let you know)

            (the scene is a house out in the country, its dark and raining)

            "Does the rain just hate me? It always stops me from doing anything."

            the teenage boy let out a sigh and layed down on his bed. He had been told that the rain was his enimy by his grandfather, but has always wondered why. Sure, he could manupulate flames, but what would a little water do to him?

            "ALEX!!" shouted a woman, his mother, "come down here right now!"

            Wondering what his mother wanted now, Alex headed down the stairs.

            It had been hard dealing with his parents divorce, but he lothed them for this. Forced to move from country to country, he had virtually no friends. He also was considered wierd beacuse he was a sorcerer. He didn't belive his Grandfather's tales of the great battle between sorcerers and gods, but liked them none the less.

            "Alex, the time has come" said an old woman, in a mysterious tone.
            "The time of unveiling has come"

            (please post comments here)


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