[golden_djiin]

before i give you the prologue,heres something:
i'm gonna update alot,for i often have nothing to do.but even if i don't that much,i ALWAYS update on fridays and sundays,unless i go on vacation,or i'm very sick.



Prologue:
One person,kraden,of one town,vale,studied the elementals.and found that the different adepts tried to destroy each other,fire,water,earth,and wind tried to destroy one another.so they each took territorial shelter and a war started to wage between different elements,but the war could be stopped.each elemental army had thier best people at thier elemental lighthouse,guarding it.for if they take out the beast at the top,which uses the element of the lighthouse,they will stop the army of that element.but there was also a reason the war started.for somewhere,in the sea,there is black water,with a whirlpool within,taking them under weyward(sp?)and to something that will help them re-unite the elements in peice...the team of 8 from the end of GS2:TLA have split up into teams of four again,knowing what to do.here is what the split into:
jenna,garet,sheba,isaac
felix,ivan,mia,piers

during this time,thier djiin split up as the war started,and they lost quite a bit of power.anyway,heres where the elemental armies went to(and thier guards):
water:sea of time/lumuria,guarded by posiedon
fire:magma rock,guarded by the avimander
earth:izumo and gaia rock island,gaurded by the serpent
wind:jupiter lighthouse surronded by 3 miles out from it with giant walls and a gate,gate guarded by king scorpian


and heres what they are guarding the lighthouses with:
mercury lighthouse:guarded by aqua hydra
mars lighthouse:flame dragons
venus lighthouse:tret
jupiter lighthouse:killer ape

other guarded stuff:
black portal guard:fusion dragon
peace orb holding room guard:doom dragon
peace orb guard:???

but also,when the war started,the lighthouses glowed,and revived anyone who died at the lighthouse,hence;menardi,saturos,karst,and agatio.but thats not all,alex is with them!

Felix
echo


comments?

[golden_djiin]

((i will also use smilies for what thier doing,like... :ph34r: ))
Chapter 1:It beggines(or something other that says it begins or starts...hehe.)
isaac:okay,since saturos,menardi,karst,agatio,and alex,will be coming after us,we need a plan... :ph34r:
sheba:i say we split up...
jenna:i'm with garet! :)
garet:righto then... :ph34r:
*garet blushed.they were in the izumo ruins,under izumo.*
mia:even so,what numbers will we go in?
ivan:i suggest four,unless we go in four groups of two,then we'd be to weak...
piers:i say felix establishes the groups...
felix:well... :D okay,here are our-
*suza used move!*
isaac::hey,i detect psyenergy...
*suza used reveal!*
then suza climbed down the ladder.
suza:guys,alex and his team are coming from gaia's rock!
felix:okay,heres the plan!
*he used his sword to draw lines and labled circles in the ground,planing his attacl.*
*later...*
izumian1:hold them off long enough,and suza will get there to get themaway with the cloud brand.
izumian2:but 1st we have to fit his armor and get him ready,and by then isaac's team will be gone,and you can follow up.
felix:got it...mia,ivan,piers,lets go!
*they ran out,and found alex's group in the middle of the path going to gaia rock.*
|Rival Battle!|
Saturos appeared!
Menardi appeared!
Agatio appeared!
Karst appeared!
Alex appeared!

(quick tip:when there are four or more enemies,battles will circulate in one on one matches!)
Saturos VS Felix
Saturos:now its time for me to beat you dead...
felix:that made nearly no sense...
*felix used stone spire!*
*saturos used fireball!*
*felix used quake sphere!*
*saturos used searing beam!*
*felix was burnt.*
felix:AH!dang...
alex:glacier!
karst:rising dragon!
agatio:rising dragon!
menardi:rising dragon!
*mia blocked!ivan blocked!piers blocked.*
felix:there to tough...retreat!
ivan:but thier not ready yet!
mia:just trust felix,ivan!
piers:yes,he knows what hes doing!i hope...
*they ran back,meanwhile,isaac,jenna,garet,and sheba took a boat,while piers,ivan,and mia get in the boat from GS2:TLA,while felix ran back to izumo.*
saturos:...he has the cloud brand,get away!
*saturos,menardi,and alex start running away,karst and agatio following short after,*
karst:whats so bad about that thing,anyway?
agatio:it destroys all evil...but the serpent is immune,for some reason...anyway...RUN!
felix:why don't you come with us,suza?
suza:i'd lvoe to,but,alas,i must stay here and protect izumo from evil...
felix:gotcha...
mia:c'mon,we have to take off,felix!
felix:fine...seeya later,suza!
suza:yeah,i hope so...
*when he went aboard,a djiin came up to him.*
djiin:hey felix,its me,echo!i saw what you guys are doing,and decided to rejoin you...
felix:i don't know...
echo:WHAT!?
felix:just kidding,c'mon!
*felix obtained echo!*
|end chapter 1|

[Mallick]

Learn proper punctuation, and I'll give it a shot. No offense, but something with "felix:just kidding,c'mon!" in it, is no something I'm wanting to read, now, if it were, "Felix: Just kidding, come on!", or "Felix replied, 'Just kidding, come on!'"

[golden_djiin]

((they were in izumo,now thier in the flying ship,and sorry for not updating.i dissapeared for a while.sorry.))
Chapter 2:Flint the venus djiin
ISAAC'S PARTY
------------------
*isaac's party,not having the flying ship,was assigned to the venus and mercury lighthouses.because the izumoians were thier freinds,they were not gonna try to stop them from dissabeling the venus lighthouse,so thats where they were bound.but so was saturos.*
isaac:sheba,how far till we reach the cave leading to the venus lighthouse?
...
isaac:sheba?
...
isaac: :huh: :huh: :huh: ...
*the boat shakes rapidly.*
isaac:...garet,what happened?
garet:it seems we'v crashed INTO the cave...and theres a boulder infront of the only entrance we can currently get to.
isaac:great,just GREAT...what now?
jenna:... :idea: why don't we try to move it?
isaac:er,okay...
|Move|
|Move|
|Move|
|Move|
sheba: :( its not working.
jenna:wait...
garet:what is it?
jenna:listen.
*...scratch...scratch...scratch...*
:angry: :angry: :!: :!:
Venus Djiini appeared!
isaac:a venus djiin!get it!
*garet unleashes kite on garet!*
*garet casts serpent fume!*
*venus djiini casts quake sphere!*
isaac:jenna,healing,now!
jenna:no need to yell...healing aura!
garet:liquifier!
*venus djiini casts earth force,but it has no effect.*
isaac:ODDESEY!
*isaac's team felled a venus djiin!*
venus djiini:seems your having a bit of trouble here,mate.
isaac:whats with the australian accent?
jenna:australian?you can't say that line yet!austalia doesn't exist yet!
sheba:er,ignore the fire adept and the earth adept talking about austrailia which doesn't exist.
((XD))
garet:yeah,were stuck.
venus djiini:well,i'm stuck to.but if i added my power to isaac,we could get through!and with this war,i think i'll stay with you.
isaac:okay then,come and...hey,how did you know my name?
djiini:its me,flint!
*isaac obtained the djiini flint!*
|Move|
|Move|
|Move|
|Move|
|Move|
jenna:we did it!
|mad growth!|
sheba:ah!
garet:what the-ACK!
isaac:what the heck is...jenna,tend to garet and sheba!
jenna:you got it.
*tret appeared!*
issac jenna sheba garet
300 HP 320 HP 70 HP 120 HP
200 PP 180 PP 300 PP 175 PP
*jenna used healing aura!*
isaac:here we go...

END CHAPTER TWO

[I'm Always BROKE]

golden_djiin, on Mar 12 2005, 04:13 AM, said:

again,knowing what to do.here is what the split into:
jenna,garet,sheba,isaac
felix,ivan,mia,piers

Man.. thats like thoe WORST party I ever saw of GS... Well the story is good so it doesnt matter :o

[golden_djiin]

yeah,mabye so...i say ther best is:
felix,isaac,sheba,mia
so the other can be garet,ivan,piers,and jenna.
EDIT:no update on friday/today,sorry,i'm feeling to under the weather to come up with a chapter.

[Isaac13]

Kay... wierd... looks like a screenplay for somthing...

[blade]

Okay i agreee with issac13