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#1   Izar 

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    Posted 08 April 2005 - 10:04 PM

    Well, the artwork forum is flooded with just visual art work, and although it also applies to literary artwork, I guess this place is deemed more worthy. So for all of you here today, here's my latest Lyrics/poems. Each reflects my religion in a very clean way.


    Everburning Hatred is Surpassed by Everlasting Faith

    I feel so dreadfully near the end
    Every day is one I wish would never begin
    I'm tortured inside, bleeding 'till we win.

    Falling further away from doubt
    Hearing beauty only by word of mouth
    Now you can see what we are all about.

    [Bridge]
    Bring me further to the truth
    Bring me further to you

    [Chourus]
    I say Hallelujah, Hallelujah,
    Take my life, Lord God, take my life
    You can have my all, Lord God, have it all

    Your stuck at a dead end cliff
    You can't seem to gain anything past theft
    I'm tortured, bleeding 'till there's nothing left

    [Repeat Bridge]

    [Repeat Chourus]

    Let your holy name be known, oh God, let it be known
    I'm so sick of the fury bleeding through the hearts of man
    Oh I'm so sick and tired of the world as it is in, in disease
    Break me oh Lord, break me from this chain of misery
    Oh God, please break me from this chain of misery

    [Repeat Bridge]

    [Repeat Chourus]

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    Hello Dear Friend

    Hello my dear friend
    Remember the good old days?
    The days where we would be sitting and looking through that midnight haze
    We'd sit for hours Sunday night thinking
    "Hey its the summer! There's no fright!"
    But it all took a toll one day
    Because then, we didn't care
    You were always happy, cheerful, and funny
    Now I just can't seem to take that one night, I'm just running
    You took just one drink, not like it was gunna hurt you
    We all just had the greatest party anyways
    And then, just like that
    You turned off the road a bit
    But stumbled back on
    And then you became weary
    Your mind was just tired
    And there was nothing wrong with taking a nap
    You swerved again and still, you snapped back to it
    But then, yes, just then
    You saw two cars... exact cars
    No use hitting one, you just would slip through the middle
    But you see, that's your mistake
    Because now I'm standing 6 feet on top of you
    Looking at your granite all carved with roses
    And now, my good friend
    I'll say good bye, and hope that this never happens again
    But you know them, don't you?
    Well, see ya later
    Goodbye my dear friend.

    #2   Sea of Time 

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      Posted 11 April 2005 - 03:00 PM

      Nice to hear from you again Izar. Good stuff, I love the lyrics. You should keep this up, seems like you have a talent for this.


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