[Mysterious Adept]

It's not the best but it's how i'm feeling right now:

Cherish the Moment


Verse 1
Sometimes, Life is so difficult, that you just want to die, but other times life is so easy, the path is there for you, but life can take a cruel turn, so cruel that everything is gone,

Refrain

But ya gotta Cherish the moment with all your heart, don’t waste a minute not one to start, before you know it your whole life is floating away, Cherish the moment today

Verse 2

Sometimes I run, Sometimes I hide and cry, sometimes I stand here and wonder why, Why did they go? But moments come flooding back so quickly I can tell, and start to see their lives in front of me,

Ending

(Repeat refrain once) (Pause) Before you know your life is floating away, Cherish the Moment………………….Today…

[Izar]

Nice, but do you have a tune set for it? Cuz All I just did was read it. :P Can't think of a way to put it together.

[Mysterious Adept]

i'm trying but i can't do it at the moment

[Betrayer]

Then I guess it's not a song; it's a poem. :P

[Izar]

Well, songs can have no melody. Look at most rap, it's just words and music, and the songs I have heard don't put the music with the words.

[Elliott]

Emo. Emo. Emo.

I hope that wasn't what you're really thinking, if so, you need to lighten up.
For the song itself, it was ok, a little bland though.

[Izar]

Emo? What do you mean?

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I hope that wasn't what you're really thinking, if so, you need to lighten up.

What in the world... What the heck are you talking about. I'm not angry or anything, so i don't need to lighten up.

Anyways, I suggest adding more to the song, like more verses.

[Elliott]

Emo = emotional people.
And I was refering to the person who made the song =/ .

[Izar]

Ah, ok, thanks. Thought i'd have to pull a rapture on ya. :lol:

Maybe putting the verses in seperate lines could help you come up with a melody.

[Betrayer]

He was talking about the writer of the "song."

And emo means emotional.

[Elliott]

Betrayer, on May 30 2005, 01:16 PM, said:

He was talking about the writer of the "song."

And emo means emotional.

Agatio, on May 30 2005, 11:12 AM, said:

Emo = emotional people.
And I was refering to the person who made the song =/ .

^ Betrayer, that is exactly what I just said :lol:

[blade]

okay i agree with everything.no music no tempo altough you got felling a little

[Mysterious Adept]

Betrayer, on May 29 2005, 12:35 AM, said:

Then I guess it's not a song; it's a poem. :P

yes then i guess it would be :P

Agatio, on May 29 2005, 04:21 AM, said:

Emo. Emo. Emo.

I hope that wasn't what you're really thinking, if so, you need to lighten up.
For the song itself, it was ok, a little bland though.

ya i know i gotta lighten up :( i just wanted to express my feeling that was inside me at the time :)