[blade]

Golden sun 3
"issac" "Felix" wake up...
a storm is coming.says jenna hurry up.
Okay okay im up they both said at the same time
they got outside. hey wait a minute the clouds arenot supposed to be RED :!: this has to be one person behind this :silence: Alex!
suddlenly blast of water and fire rise up form the ground revaling 4 people... Prepare to die issac and felix.
issac got out his fire brand and felix got out his soul blade
Issac said carpet bomb as a big explosion happend in front of the mystery people
supernova said mystery person one.
Anniliation yelled felix as he hit the second person.
inferno said person two
pyroclasm yelld mp 3
grand gia said the 4th
suddleny mia walks up
she enters the battle by casting ice missle
issac unleashed smog
felix casted thunder bomb
mystery people 1 &2 cast firey blast
mia goes down
mystery person 3 downed felix with condemmed
mystery person 4 casted dragon fumed and the battle ened
The mystery people heard piers say what was that and when he got there the mystery people left
I have to go now but stay tuned for more action on chapter two

[Izar]

Fix the grammar problems, please, they kinda interupt what you got there. It's good though.

[blade]

got it and thanks for saying it is good

[Izar]

Yeah, no problemo, it's kinda really hard to read, in desperate need of quotations and periods.