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#1   Izar 

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    Posted 04 June 2005 - 10:38 PM

    Inspired by the nature of humankind, and as a birthright, it is our duty to love and respect each other. No matter how much some on hates you, remeber that they always hated Him.

    Text In Red
    [V1]
    The sun was out, the children play, and no one had a problem
    And now the blood red tourniquet has broken into solemn
    Burning torches and smoke-filled skies apprehend our vows
    And now the dark ones surface and turn us from the plows

    [CHORUS]
    Now today as I lay my head in rest
    I have to scream on drifted sounds into this hollow chest
    I had no heart, I had no soul
    And still you take my love with your hand and renew the old

    [V2]
    Look at the nails that pierced the skin of the hand of the healer
    Remember, my friend, you placed them with your own hammer
    And now the blood of pure thoughts drip on your angry face
    And still, my friend, he still offers you his everlasting grace.

    [CHORUS]
    Now today as I lay my head in rest
    I have to scream on drifted sounds into this hollow chest
    I had no heart, I had no soul
    And still you take my love with your hand and renew the old

    [V3]
    I come to you with an open mind
    I come to you with this distress of mine
    I come with you as an open heart
    I come to you with this distress that I am

    [CHORUS]
    Now today as I lay my head in rest
    I have to scream on drifted sounds into this hollow chest
    I had no heart, I had no soul
    And still you take my love with your hand and renew the old


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      Posted 04 June 2005 - 10:44 PM

      :P nice job Izar this song is very nicely written and i still need help on my song. The dictionary is broken!!!! >.< anywho, keep up zee nice work!!! :D

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        Posted 05 June 2005 - 05:39 AM

        You wrote this? Wow, nice.

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        Posted 05 June 2005 - 08:43 AM

        wow...and yet so true. Thats really inspiring, I hope it does get turned into a song.

        #5   Izar 

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          Posted 06 June 2005 - 03:30 PM

          Thanks alot. I'm writing a new one.

          Yeah, I think I'm gunna start a band and do these songs.

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            Posted 23 July 2005 - 02:45 PM

            Izar, on Jun 6 2005, 04:30 PM, said:

            Thanks alot. I'm writing a new one.

            Yeah, I think I'm gunna start a band and do these songs.

            cool i like it

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              Posted 24 July 2005 - 07:26 PM

              Thanks, but uh, next time, put the reason you liked this, It was kinda unnessisary to post something that short to revive this. :D But hey, I can now post my new song...

              High School Days

              [V1]
              I walk by
              Just another high school day
              She walks by
              Her looks, they just blow me away
              They come
              They kiss the ground she walks on
              I'm numb
              All the words just come out wrong

              [Chorus]
              Oh how we all remember our
              Good Old High School Days
              We wish we could relive all our
              Good Old High School Days
              Sometimes we all reflect our
              Good Old High School Days

              [V2]
              Downtown
              Just another high school day
              They roll
              The guys are drinking away
              If by prayer
              She's standing in the back alone
              Like Me
              She hasn't picked up a can to own
              I'm Numb
              All the words just come out wrong

              [Chorus]
              Oh how we all remember our
              Good Old High School Days
              We wish we could relive all our
              Good Old High School Days
              Sometimes we all reflect our
              Good Old High School Days

              [V2]
              At the end of school
              Everyone was trying to keep cool
              On the last day
              I had the guts to walk and say
              All my thoughts
              To her face and I thought I would rot
              But she smiled
              She whispered "Thank God I found you"

              [Chorus]
              Oh how we all remember our
              Good Old High School Days
              We wish we could relive all our
              Good Old High School Days
              Sometimes we all reflect our
              Good Old High School Days


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