[Yuki]

Okay, PDM encouraged me to post some of my poetry. Please be positive and really tell me what you think.

The Story Of Madonna

She sits upon presents and gifts given by admierers galore
Upon her lap there sits a boy but wait, there's so much more
For within this painting lies the story of pain, of grief, of cries
A hole deep down, dug out of her
Life torn from his little hands
Gifts thrown
Life torn
Not able to meet demands
The heart they shared was torn out
The life no longer lived the wounds that didn't seem to heal
The tresspasses never forgived
The only emotions left to see is the emptyness, pain, and misery
This is the burden of a mother's pain
No wings to help her fly
Her life shattered, cracked, and torn
Now her baby resides in the sky

^I did this poem to a painting by Salvador Dali titles 'Madonna Porté Lliggat'


Set Me Up

This lovey feeling causing war
And all you did was leave
Set up a bomb
Blew up my core
The blood's still on my sleeve
I long to choke the air out
I have a blood filled need
First to come and first to go
And never there to lead
You were a dead lover
Soul was cold and poor
Brush your pale face with my knife
Close your coffin door

^I was a bit depressed with the last two poems. I had to let it out and here's the result.

Never

Never leave never go
Always here to die
You pull me up push me down
These eyes can only cry
Here to back you up
Here to guide you right
Here to bring down my razors
Here to watch you die

Tell me what you think. Thanks!

[Mallick]

I'm pretty sure you already know what I think of them. ;P

[Yuki]

Thanks I appreciate it Piers. No one is looking at my topic...at least you took the time to read them ._.;

[Yuki]

Okay! Update!

Funeral Plans

Find me here my love
Come and dig me up
Catch me as I fall my dear
Show me some crimson love
Marry me
I'll be your corpse wife
Grab the fool
And use my bloody knife
I'll record it in my book
With all my thoughts and dreams
Throw it down and pick it up
Watch my pen kiss it's page

[Somia]

Nice I really liked them, ur talented in writing and art!~

[Venus dude 21]

good poems, i used to write some (add mocking laughter here) but my teacher said they were too dark when she read them in school, and then i kind of stoped.

[Yuki]

Thank you. The first poem posted "Maddona" was for school work. My teacher sent me to the counselor's office because she thought I was trying to let my "severe depression" out but I was doing it wrong. ._.; needless to say the whole class like it n.nV

[loz]

I like your poems all so good ^-^ good job keep making more =D

[Yuki]

Newest Poem! Kinda corny but deal with it!!!! ;^;

I think of you
Every moment I can spare
Your name it whispers in the wind
And echoes into the air
Everytime I hear it
It's as clear as a bell
Matt...it says
And I wish you well
For I love you
With every ounce of my beating heart
I'll love you forever
And I don't want to ever part

*for Loz*

What do you think...? O__o;

[Venus dude 21]

thats pretty good, better than i could do...

[Izar]

Nice one's there. I like that second one alot. Good work. If you need any help, just ask.

[el_Sethro]

Great poems, you use some really good imagery, especially in the first one, I found (I love good imagery :) ). Keep up the good work ;)

[I'm Always BROKE]

Yeah your poems are great! I especially liked the 3th one! Keep up with it! :)

[Yuki]

this poem will be short and odd lol

i feel as fragile as a leaf in autumn...just falling to the ground...not making any sound but the lonely crinkle of my heart...

Well?

[I'm Always BROKE]

Yes very short indeed. Still it's a good poem. Reminds me of apple yoghurt somehow... o.o;

[Nemphtis]

The poem looked long so I'll be blunt, I ain't reading that long-ass shiz. But I'm sure it's not that bad so I will use my psychic powers and say good job.

[Eugine]

Its really nice, I could see you write what you feel alot.

I like the fact that you use your real life experiences to bring out beautiful descriptions.

9/10.

[Yuki]

DiddyKong, on Jul 8 2005, 01:11 PM, said:

Yes very short indeed. Still it's a good poem. Reminds me of apple yoghurt somehow... o.o;

..............apple yogurt? .-. Wow Diddy that's a first. No one has *EVER*, in my history of writing poetry, told me that my poems remind them of food. But thank you because now I finally have some inspiration ;D

[I'm Always BROKE]

Well no problem.
It's good that you have inspiration because of that. :lol:
It really reminded me of apple yoghurt...

(1000 posts, FINALY! ;) )

[Isaac13]

...........................

[Yuki]

What Isaac13? Why the "......................................."?

Update~!

*S*U*R*P*R*I*S*E*

How do I laugh
When I only cry?
How can you still think
That I'm perfectly fine?
How am I pure
When I'm a pervert
And just how do my poems
Remind Diddy of yoghurt?!

[pHantOm]

Love_Guardian_Yuki, on Jul 22 2005, 01:17 AM, said:

What Isaac13? Why the "......................................."?

Update~!

*S*U*R*P*R*I*S*E*

How do I laugh
When I only cry?
How can you still think
That I'm perfectly fine?
How am I pure
When I'm a pervert
And just how do my poems
Remind Diddy of yoghurt?!

LOL awsome!

I like your poems alot, comming from someone so young and talking about love I find that your poems will only get better in time when relationships start getting more serious and deeper. (Except for any of those poor souls that get involved with Anubis)

LMFAO

[loz]

lol i like this poem, especially the last line xDD

[Yuki]

pHantOm, on Jul 22 2005, 01:21 AM, said:

LOL awsome!

I like your poems alot, comming from someone so young and talking about love I find that your poems will only get better in time when relationships start getting more serious and deeper. (Except for any of those poor souls that get involved with Anubis)

LMFAO

Thanks Phantom that's so nice of you to say. And I like the last line too. Hey, I said he gave me imspiration didn't I? =]

[lifeform287]

They were good. Actually, they were pretty good.
*Looks around* What? I can be nice.

[Izar]

Nice word. Keep it up. As long as your poems don't have some secret coded message saying "Kill Izar", that's good! :D

But seriously, they are nice, keep writing. I'm looking forward to your next ones.

[Yuki]

That's something that didn't even cross my mind...but...more inspiration! >;D j/k anywho, just got back from Italy and I still need some inspiration for new work.

[Mars Djinni]

Izar, on Jul 24 2005, 03:31 PM, said:

Nice word. Keep it up. As long as your poems don't have some secret coded message saying "Kill Izar", that's good! :D

The La Yuki Code >>...

I'd like to hear one about your trip or something. Might make it a real eye-catcher.

[Yuki]

:) I'll try MD, but it might be a little lame since alot of bad things happened during my trip...

[I'm Always BROKE]

Love_Guardian_Yuki, on Jul 22 2005, 08:17 AM, said:

What Isaac13? Why the "......................................."?

Update~!

*S*U*R*P*R*I*S*E*

How do I laugh
When I only cry?
How can you still think
That I'm perfectly fine?
How am I pure
When I'm a pervert
And just how do my poems
Remind Diddy of yoghurt?!

ROFL! :)

BEST POEM EVER!
Didn't reminded me of yoghurt though... Still it's great! :D

[Yuki]

:) :D ^_^ :P you said it reminded you of Apple Yoghurt...

[Mars Djinni]

He did say that yoghurt thing. Lookie!

DiddyKong, on Jul 8 2005, 01:11 PM, said:

Yes very short indeed. Still it's a good poem. Reminds me of apple yoghurt somehow... o.o;

See?

[Yuki]

THANK YOU see I have proof! >=3 so now you can't make me look stupid...

[Mars Djinni]

So... What do you think you'll write about next?

[Yuki]

Either about depression, love, or how morbid and dark life can really be...the usual. Or maybe I'll try something new: happy. Even though I write best when I'm sad or in a lonely state of mind. I'm positive happy will fail miserably though. So...give me some ideas!!!!!! Please...

[Elijah]

I'm thinking something like, sunshine, lollypops, rainbows, candycanes. Happyness.

I usualy think "The Monkeys" when I want to get happy.
Daydream beleiver:

Oh, I could hide 'neath the wings
Of the bluebird as she sings.
The six o'clock alarm would never ring.

But it rings and I rise,
Wipe the sleep out of my eyes.
My shavin' razor's cold and it stings.

Cheer up, Sleepy Jean.
Oh, what can it mean.
To a daydream believer
And a homecoming queen.

You once thought of me
As a white knight on a steed.
Now you know how happy I can be.

Oh, and our good times start and end
Without dollar one to spend.
But how much, baby, do we really need.

Oh, what can it mean.
To a daydream believer
And a homecoming queen.
Cheer up, Sleepy Jean.

[I'm Always BROKE]

Love_Guardian_Yuki, on Aug 22 2005, 01:35 AM, said:

THANK YOU see I have proof! >=3 so now you can't make me look stupid...

I wasn't meaning of making a fool of you.
Oh and by the way, this is the yoghurt your poems remind me from:
http://www.heidepoort.nl/pics/Produkten/Zuivel/Onken/Voorjaar%20yoghurt%20groene%20appel.jpg

[Yuki]

DiddyKong, on Aug 22 2005, 07:28 AM, said:

I wasn't meaning of making a fool of you.
Oh and by the way, this is the yoghurt your poems remind me from:
http://www.heidepoort.nl/pics/Produkten/Zuivel/Onken/Voorjaar%20yoghurt%20groene%20appel.jpg

.___.;; sorry Dee Kay, omg that yoghurt? o_o I don't see how...

[Izar]

Back on topic. I like them, if you need anymore help, jsut ask, and' I'll probably be on Aim Msn, or Yahoo.

[Isaac13]

I'm no poet, but they are all good nonetheless.

[Yuki]

Thanks Isaac13. I'm trying to come up with some new stuff. I'm having a writer's block. Argh...

[Golden Djinn13]

Good poems. I like to read poems about peoples emotions, and expressions :P

[Yuki]

Then you've decided to read the right poetry! :P

[Isaac13]

:P very good work, those are. Keep it up.

[Blue]

I like your poetry Yuki. Excellent indeed.

[Yuki]

thanks but I'm still having a tough time writing...especially since school started

[Yuki]

Update:

Same Old Death

Here I am
Same old place
Same old smell
Same old taste
Back to this
Over and again
I keep wondering
When will it end
Same old feelings
Same old sound
of pain and screams
that fill my ears
So I'll fire my gun
And the bullet will lodge inside my brain
And I'll fall to the ground
And shiver in pain
And as I bleed
And my eyes roll back
I'll say "goodbye,"
As my world turns black

I kind of went with a new apporach >.< Sorry if you don't like it...

[Golden Djinn13]

You really need to teach me how to write poems, I failed the one I wrote for school ;)

[Yuki]

ha ha XD I thought nobody would like it because it's emo o.o;

[Golden Djinn13]

Heres my poem:


Roses are red
violets are sort of blue
I want some candy
How about you?


Im an even better poet than yuki XD

[Yuki]

I WANT CANDY

and...you soo wish GD u_u

[Golden Djinn13]

I know you wish you were a better poet. Keep trying though ;)

[Yuki]

whatever GD...

C'mon, other people need to look at my newest entry too!! X_x

[Golden Djinn13]

Everyone should be here to see my poem thats better than yours. Whats taking so long

[pHantOm]

Love_Guardian_Yuki, on Sep 17 2005, 10:03 PM, said:

Update:

Same Old Death

Here I am
Same old place
Same old smell
Same old taste
Back to this
Over and again
I keep wondering
When will it end
Same old feelings
Same old sound
of pain and screams
that fill my ears
So I'll fire my gun
And the bullet will lodge inside my brain
And I'll fall to the ground
And shiver in pain
And as I bleed
And my eyes roll back
I'll say "goodbye,"
As my world turns black

I kind of went with a new apporach >.< Sorry if you don't like it...

I will respond for you Yuki. ;)

you are correct, it is emo lol. But I still find it to be really good, keep at it your doing great. Im really impressed by your writtings.

[Yuki]

Thank you Phantom! n.n! I actually came up with it while I was in church...
I was like "*praying**thinks* OH SNAP THAT IS COOL!!!!!" lol XD

[Lightning Star]

o.O you got that while you were praying? I'm not sure God wants you to kill yourself XD aweshome, none the less

[Golden Djinn13]

What about mine!!!!

I should really start my own poetry topic

[pHantOm]

Golden Djinn13, on Sep 18 2005, 08:12 PM, said:

What about mine!!!!

I should really start my own poetry topic

I believe the topic stats "Yuki's Poetry" thus we focus on her work, not yours. ;)

And its ok Yuki, things can seem bad sometimes...but someone comes into your life and things seem so much better.

[Yuki]

Thanks Phantom. But unfortunately, I feel I might be this way for a very long time...

[Golden Djinn13]

fine, ignore my work of art.

being serious now, im confused. Can someone explain

[pHantOm]

Love_Guardian_Yuki, on Sep 18 2005, 08:28 PM, said:

Thanks Phantom. But unfortunately, I feel I might be this way for a very long time...

When just being Emo and reality of what you are writing collide, you'll really rethink how things are going. And eventually you will meet someone that you care about and want to be with as much as possible. I really hope thats the case for you Yuki.

[Yuki]

It is...a case of lonliness. And it fires the passion inside me to write. Even though people find my poetry ludicris and dumb, it really expresses my feelings...

[Sea of Time]

Then that's all that matters. You shouldn't care about what people say about your poetry. So, you won't care when I say that that stuff is some great poetry.

[Yuki]

Thanks. I really wish I had come up with some new poetry, but I got kicked off the computer and I couldn't think because of all my homework and everything. New poems soon guys <3

[Sea of Time]

You can't rush poetry!!! I think that's a saying, right?

[Golden Djinn13]

Good, now they can listen to my poems :P

think of one soon

[Yuki]

O-M-G!
New Poem!

His love leaves me to cry
Alone inside my lonely mind
As i wipe the tears from my sore eyes
i wonder...
>x_iS HiS LoVe ReaLLY WoRTH iT...?


Chic-Chicky BOOM!

[Sea of Time]

That was great, but was the Chic-Chicky BOOM! thing on the end part of it?

[Yuki]

Uhh...yeaaahhh I was kinda just bored ._.;;


You're still got me


This time it will be different
This time I'll say no
Even though your eyes burn my soul
I'll refuse
I'll finally tell you
That your memory is gone
And that shouldn't make you move
Because I meant nothing

Even though I'm writing for you
This won't change me
I'll keep your opinions
And thrash my own
Because yours is the only one that matters

So I'll just stay here
And feel you
But I'll wash your kiss off my lips
And numb you from my fingertips
This is it

I'll bow down
Or rebel
I'll gag the ground you walk
And bleed my colors
You always did like blue


n.n;; Inspiration from a song my friend showed me from Spill Canvas (All Hail The Heartbreaker)

This post has been edited by Love_Guardian_Yuki: 24 November 2005 - 05:35 PM

[kate]

Holy popculture reference batman! that was awesome. Especially the last few verse thingies. and the last two lines were like "woah, deep". except it was something more profound then that. yes, that'll work <.< anyways, those last two lines remind me alot of a song by the arcade fire (the awesomexors) called neighborhood #1...or tunnels, whatever. okay, so now i'll try and save this topic jumping post. You, my friend, have talent. Kudos.

[Yuki]

Thanks so much and to be compared to Arcade Fire is just...flattering. It's called neighborhood #1 Power Outage n.n;

[kate]

actually power out is neighborhood #3. and i can't believe you know them n.n you're like the first person i've met who's heard of them o.o we must show the world how incredible they are >.o and post more poetry DDD:

[Yuki]

LOL oh yeah! I LOVE ARCADE FIRE! <3 and I'm comming up with some new stuff lol

[Sea of Time]

Good stuff Yooks!!!

I have not heard of these things of which you speak, all I want is some more POETRY!!!eleven!!!111!

[Lightning Star]

beautiful! its kinda hard to see how you feel abou the person though. its like do you like them or do you hate them?

[Yuki]

That's kinda the point of my poetry, I can't decide to love somebody or loath them. It's kinda like I'm stuck between emotions >.<;

[Yuki]

I wrote alot of new stuff =) yay me! >.<;;

Black Duality && White Cheats

Black Hearts
White Lies
Red Lips
Green Ties
Blue Soul-Dark and cold
Never Ending
Out of Control
Peach Cheeks
Violet Eyes
Maroon Tongue
Pink Cries

Leave
Through the flames
I saw your face
Smirking...laughing
I'll kill you
Your are not me
But I can see it
Your face, your laugh, your love
Burned into my retinas
Stuck in my memory
Can I erase you?
Can I leave it alone?
If I nurse my wounds,
Will they heal?
Or will they scar me
Like you did?
Why can't I leave it alone?
Get out of my head
Cause all I can think of is
You

Euphoria [X]
Euphoria creeping in
Euphoria gone
My solution to your problems
My medicine to your sickness
Me to you
Tell me, show me, give me
My daily dose of Euphoria [X]

>.<; Kinda lame, since I came up with it that last two days </3

This post has been edited by Love_Guardian_Yuki: 30 November 2005 - 08:15 PM

[Saturos S.]

Your are not me - poem leave

is that supposed to be like that or? does sound good, but it confuses me heavily....
rest is quite good though, the one with the all the colours ecspecially

[Yuki]

Yes, it's supposed to be like that.

Thanks. Color one was easy =D

umm...yeah my poetry tends to even confuse me xD

[Lightning Star]

I love Black Duality && White Cheats

[Yuki]

Thank you Icy =D

I think I came up with that one in math class XD

[Mallick]

Black Duality && White Cheats is amazing.

[Split Infinity]

Love_Guardian_Yuki, on Dec 3 2005, 04:07 PM, said:

My poetry tends to even confuse me xD

Yuki, your poetry is good and all, but if you don't have a real reason to write about something, it's not exactly real poetry. Poetry is all about expressing yourself and making a statement to the world, not just firing off lines which sound cool together.

Although, nobody would expect something of that calibre from a 14-year-old. So keep up the good work!

[pHantOm]

Split Infinity, on Dec 21 2005, 06:49 AM, said:

Although, nobody would expect something of that calibre from a 14-year-old. So keep up the good work!

Yuki is just that good and emo lol

[Yuki]

>.>

"Emo" is my excuse
and reason
go back a few pages
a read what's there

it's personal intenntions, and sentimental reasons -.-;;

thankyouverymuch come again

and thanks PDM ^^

[Mallick]

Write s'more. I'm waaaiting.

[Split Infinity]

I love s'mores! [starts building a campfire]

[Yuki]

Dude, that's what the common room is for.

Okay, since it's Winter Break, i'll come up with some stuff =3

[Mars Djinni]

Write something about...say... How it's not snowing where MD is? D:

[Yuki]

OKAY!
i'll get started on it right away =)

[Yuki]

Um...HAMSTER

First it rained
Then it poured
MD's hamster then let out a fit of snores
Now it's time to go
Wait...
WHAT HAPPENED TO MD'S SNOW?! i.i

MD added the hamster line XD

[Mars Djinni]

That would've been funnier if my hamster hadn't chewed up the swimming floatey noodle thingies.

[Yuki]

D: poor floatey noodle things

Guranteed more stuff tomorrow, if my creative organ decides to work x.x;

[Yuki]

Remix


For every little thing you are
I dedicate me
Despite the thrills
And the kills for words
I request my soul
To be played
Remixed with yours
I dedicate my whole life
To letting me love you
Cause the gentle tap
Of your heart against your veins
Is tuning the strings of mine
You're everything
My therapist prescribed
Do they have you in pill form?
I'd take an overdose
Just to have a part of you
Breathing into a part of me
They think I'm crazy
But to let you in on a little secret
I've never been so sane
You're the crazy one
Crazy enough to see me through




Like it? >.<

This post has been edited by Love_Guardian_Yuki: 22 December 2005 - 10:03 PM

[Blue]

Your poetry is awesome Yuki. Can't wait to see more.

[Yuki]

No Habla English::

You just can't see
What you're doing to me
That this feeling inside
Is tearing me up
That the life you led
Is haunting mine
And your image
Just refuses to leave my head
All I can do
Is wait it out
And let it unravell
Like the ribbon around my neck
Slowly stealing the air
That you used to infect
I'll just keep rhyming lines
With the vowels from your name
What rhymes with
'I Love You'?

>.< another random Winter Break poem~

[Gardna]

It's so depressive... ^_^
Just keep on training and one day you might become a great poem writer

[Yuki]

Ehh...i thought poetry was supposed to express feelings. At this age, we all feel depression at some time or another (in some people's eyes, they think i feel it all the time D:). So my poetry is supposed to relate with others.

[Lightning Star]

I can really feel the emotion in your poems. they're awesome! never feel sorry for what you write, even if others don't like it. like a random person once said "don't be sorry to say what you feel, 'cause thats like being sorry for being real"

This post has been edited by lightningstar: 27 December 2005 - 09:08 PM

[Blue]

Hey Yukichu, I thought you had a new poem coming soon. o_-

[I'm Always BROKE]

Don't haste the beauty of art...

Or something like that. Wow I haven't visited this topic in some time and I felt kinda guilty for Yukachu so here I am n.n
No Habla English was pretty good, keep it up! :D

[Yuki]

Okay...This one may be long...only read it if you have TONS of time XD

Dry cough, rich blood. Everything is just as it is. Nothing could ever be wrong. In such a dream there is no color just grey and black with a blotch of white. We run through this animation everytime you watch. Play, pause, rewind, fastforeward. Break the replay button because going through this act just kills the script. Our director is the one that tells us when to bleed. But that doesn't matter because our pain seems fake. That's all we seem to be: walking, breathing, harbors of pain disguised in a silent movie where the lines are all you can read. The actors move in grace and skill so fast that you can barely see the lines their souls leave. Unknown titles and unknown idea create the space we disturb. Playing on the innuendos and the swinging in the paint. Invert the colors and all you get is confusion mixed with a sore neck. 90 degrees more to the right and you would have seen the X. You need a hobby: what about digging up holes? Let's make them 7 feet deep with extra space to hide the evidence. No matter what the gun says the bullet's words are much more important. It's almost time to swim in bleach. A break from this camera life. I'm cutting this connection because the battery just gave out.

[Lightning Star]

omg, you write little stories like that too? I thought I was some freak that was the only one that did that XD

anyways, thats absolutely amazing. I don't quite understand, but I can definately sense pain and anguish or what seems a lack thereof. I can sense that these are words that write a story of your feelings; words only you can understand. Brilliant!

[Yuki]

In the poem, I'm trying to show that smetimes life looses it's color. Often times, I find myself trying to get through a blurry scene in a dream or something like that. You can't understand anything else...And with the sore neck and stuff it's like when people tilt their head to see something else from a different perspective. And the 90 degrees more to the right was like saying "go on...snap your neck...you're doing me a favor" x.x;

And the 7 feet thing...means "bury a body"

I know, it's kinda morbid-y

But I've been reading up on Edgar Allen Poe and Sylvia Plath and they just made new ideas explode in my head x_x

If you swim in bleach you'll die...o.O

And the::
"The bullet's words are more important"
means

that like, if you put a gun on a table and leave it there it won't do anything but if you shoot it then the bullet is the one that does the damage. I know it's really confusing xD;

[Elliott]

Bodies get buried six feet under, not seven.
And yeah there is some pretty ****ed up stuff there for a 14 year old girl to be writing about, takes you emo-ness to a whole new level.

[Yuki]

=.=;

I know it's 6 feet
"7 feet with extra space to hide the evidence"

:P I knew you'd say something about 'emo-ness'

[Blue]

Nice Yuki. Kinda depressing though.
On a completely unrealated note, why don't I see's you on AIM anymore?

[Yuki]

You say I'm wrong
You say you're right
You think he's stupid
I think he's nice
You want me to make the choice of a lifetime and you want me to choose...

Between the one that I love
and the one that hurts the one who
Forgot me and loved her first
the one who makes rain fall down everyday of my life
but I'm stuck between you and my Mr. Right.

O: start of the song I'm trying to write. Simple rhymes. Now I need a tune and a second verse :@
Funny thing is that I wrote this last night before I went to sleep :P

[pHantOm]

That is really good Yuki ^_^

I've got a poem, think I should share it? I suppose I will, its about long distance relationships, Love poem but hey whatever right? I wrote it before valentines day. I wrote this, because I could not be with her on Valentines Day. No stolen lyrics from songs, all written on my own. Im not trying to hijack your thread Yuki, I just want to share mine with you real quick. >_<

-Valentines Day-

Im sitting here in my cold dark room
Your gift from me is comming soon
One dozen roses and all the love I have
You are the only Valentine i've ever had
All I want is to not be lonely
When I dream of you, I feel so empty
There is no sound or smell, and I never hear your voice
Yet I smile, and couldnt be happier
Distance drowns me, as time holds me down
Only your smile gives me life, without it im gone
I jump in my car, with you in my heart
As I drive I feel you holding on tight
But the world pulls you away
I try to grab your hand
But I pass right through you
As you fade away and disappear

[Blue]

Hey Yukichu, got any more poetry for us?

[Yuki]

This was made for me and my friend because she's obsessed with Alice in Wonderland.

"A white rabbit in grey world. I'm her mad hatter. She's the one with time cutting air from around her throat."

:D

[Sea of Time]

That's...just weird. But it's very descriptional and picturesque even though it's short!

[Yuki]

How so? o.o;

Ack x_X I wrote new poetry but it's about a cultural sturggle..will edit it and post it later X_x;;

[Saturos S.]

Mmm... Alice in Wonderland. The Mad Hatter is soooo cool. (so what if I'm a disney fan.)

"A very happy unbirthday, to me? to you!"

[Yuki]

I love Alice in Wonderland. <3

Hey, it's my unbirthday too!

[Saturos S.]

What a coincedence! Here have some tea!

[Sea of Time]

I meant it was just unorthodox when I said weird.

I just didn't understand the meaning at first, but after reading it a couple of times, I get it.

Hey, I'll take some of that tea! *sips*

[Yuki]

they said
you were next
and it's no joke sweetie
they're comming for you and me
and we'll just have to wait
and slowly dissapate
and dissapear with the rest of the crowd
it doesn't matter that they've got nightmares
and snares
they'll take our dreams
and burn them in fires blazing
I'm sure it won't hurt
as long as we're dreaming
victims in the wake
and criminals in the sleep
but don't worry;
we'll break free
just like we did last time


x.X this is the result of being bored at...7:20 am n.n;

[Yuki]

I'd be lying
if I said I didn't miss you
Every moment I could
Your return is overdue
I'm begging
Come back
This time it got personal
I need you back here with me
I hope this message
Hits the airwaves
and haunts you in your dreams sweetie
when you play those soft melodies
and my subliminal charm
going away was your sorrow
begging was mine

Dx likey?

[Yuki]

OKAY nobody ever looks at my stuff anymore but meh.

The place where
I won't be backstabbed
and kicked when i'm down
the place where I can smile
and not be pulled down by some negative force
I want to be where razors don't exsist
and tears are a distant dream
where wings are not broken
and smiles never fade
I want to be with friends
Friends who love me
Friends who make me love being alive
I want to be with a person
that makes me love waking up in the morning
and who i think about
day and night
i want to be in serenity
and bliss
and be in a euphoric state of mind
this is where I want to be

[Yuki]

Probably one of my best pieces of work:

HISS. it hurts.
The sizzle of skin.
Stop the sensation
The fire that's been.
Personal arson on something so dead
Frictional start to a fiery end.
It's just a scorch, some bandage will do
Melted skin like globbing glue
Instant pull as sparks fly
A burning flight crashing into the sky
A tiny spark
A little gleam
It starts up fast
And spreads like a disease
Some stand by and watch
Some try to fight
Some come out coughing
From the smokey site
Some come out as heros
Some come out in bags
A deadly sacrifice for a natural trend
They happen each year
Like Clockwork's hand
Just a rejuvenating storm
To kill perished land
We're fighting with fire with gas
And also with water
Helictopers in flight carrying dead firemen martyrs
We don't let it happen
We break off it's course
Changing natures work
To a blazing force.
It has to happen, why can't they see?
Brush needs to die to give life to the tree.





---

Talking about how we've been fighting nature's natural ways of reprodcing dead plants. Brush fires.

Blargh. I'm not in the mood to explain. If you want a REAL explanantion, come join my philosophy class =P

[Folcon]

I get the meaning of the peom. And I like it. Forest fires are a b****, but they are nessasary to clear out the underbrush. I live in Florida, so I have to deal with fires every summer, and I get this. Anyway, this is a good piece.

[Yuki]

Yeah. California has the same (w00t w00t). It's THEIR fault for building their houses there ~_~

[redchi]

i love them great job ^^

[Yuki]

Every coin has two sides.
One is heads.
One is tails.
Toss it, and you only get one.
However you land is how you will be seen.
But what if
You threw the coin
And it landed on it's middle?
Can't touch the ground with either side?
50/50 and I still only add up to 25 cents.
We live in a wallet world.
Some are pennies.
Some are silver dollars.
I'm the dirty coin you scrunch your nose at and don't want
To touch.
You're only half they say.
You're not even full.
Your struggle isn't real.
Closure is what I wanted.
I needed to know I wasn't alone.
But in the end,
I'm still a fraction.
Still a percentage.
Do you see a dirty white girl?
Or a failed attempt at Asian?
Am I white on yellow?
Or yellow on white?
Wallflower all my life.
The future will be mixed.
There is no such thing as purity.
Keep your coins.
I want change.





Not supposed to rhyme.
It's spoken word.
And freestance.
>_<

[Drizzy Drake]

I totally thought of 50 Cent reading that poem. But that aside, it's really good. Props.

[Lightning Star]

Yeah, yuki. You're really talented at writing poetry. (Something I cannot do to save my life, though I like to try XP)

The forest fire one hit me the most; here in Arizona we see quite a few forest fires, and in my town I think I've personally seen 3. It was sad, though, to see such beauty be destroyed by a fire, but when you think about the rebirth, it's comforting.

Keep up the good work, you're a natural!

[Mallick]

Yuki, on Apr 21 2008, 05:09 PM, said:

Every coin has two sides.
One is heads.
One is tails.
Toss it, and you only get one.
However you land is how you will be seen.
But what if
You threw the coin
And it landed on it's middle?
Can't touch the ground with either side?
50/50 and I still only add up to 25 cents.
We live in a wallet world.
Some are pennies.
Some are silver dollars.
I'm the dirty coin you scrunch your nose at and don't want
To touch.
You're only half they say.
You're not even full.
Your struggle isn't real.
Closure is what I wanted.
I needed to know I wasn't alone.
But in the end,
I'm still a fraction.
Still a percentage.
Do you see a dirty white girl?
Or a failed attempt at Asian?
Am I white on yellow?
Or yellow on white?
Wallflower all my life.
The future will be mixed.
There is no such thing as purity.
Keep your coins.
I want change.





Not supposed to rhyme.
It's spoken word.
And freestance.
>_<

@#$%

that was depressing. impressive, yet depressing ):