[Crimson Barrel Knight]

I thought I'd might take a crack at making yet another art topic. I think I've improved some over the months of my absence, etc. Though, it's up to you to determine that ...

Here's one of a character I recently thought up of as I went through a sort of clothing simulator for something other than Maple Story. The guy's name is Woodrow, who roams the country side as a homeless boy with absolutely nothing to do. No one know's why he's there or where he came from, but he has a curse; albeit more like a certain power that's both unexplainable and understandable. It's known by an ancient proverb as the "Blind Scarecrow". If you study the drawing a bit more, you'll probably see why it's called that.

http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/7317/woodrow0hm.gif

[Somia]

Ah..neatoh you DID improve. I like the pose and expression of him, the details are nice..over all I think you did a great job^-^

[Lightning Star]

wow, I must admit, that has to be one of your best artings yet! good job! I love his eyes.

[Eugine]

Haven't seen any of your previous art so I don't know if you've improved but this one look alright, can't do better myself :)

[Crimson Barrel Knight]

Here's a link to some of my previous stuff.

http://www.goldensun-syndicate.net/forum/i...5032&hl=Crimson

[Crimson Barrel Knight]

Alright, time for some more stuff.

Me with a guitar.

http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/5489/burusu8ln.gif

Some girl I made up ...

http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/262/fiora7jo.gif

Enjoy.

[Somia]

x_x U improved so much! Aw..this isn't fair why don't I get improvements..anyways=p they are very good, I like thier costumes^-^

[Crimson Barrel Knight]

Something I drew quickly that I thought I might put up. And besides, I felt a little emo at that moment.

http://img269.imageshack.us/img269/3883/burusuleave5zx.gif

Well, it had to happen sooner or later, not that they'd care. The two illustrated above behind me are some key friends I've lost today. They've been real pals ever since they came around GSSF, and though, I still wonder if I could go back to those good old times ...

... I'm not afraid to post this, since I'm pretty sure it's safe to say that they won't come around and bother to look. But, I'm not really worried. In fact, it's perfectly fine, seeing how annoying I am to them. =P

I took them off my MSN since I wish not to bother them anymore. They're perfect with their lives right now, and they don't really need me to hang around. Hope you two are happy for the remainder of your life spans.

*salutes*

[Yuki]

oOo those are really nice Burusu :) Keep up the flippin' awesome work ^^

[Lightning Star]

-.-; I speak for myself, and, I don't hate you. I just dwell over hurt as long as it goes, and sometimes I can't help blowing up at that person; even if it whatever happened, happened almost a year ago. But forte? I really don't know.

but *Sighs* good artwork. You know I'd never stick my tongue out at you in a mean way.

[Elliott]

You just come here to create drama don't you?
Your drawings are pretty good. I think with a bit more time though you could be better. Also, drawing on blank paper, and adding colour wouldn't hurt.

[Somia]

Well..even tho with that theme..the drawings are still good, and that's all I'll say..

[Yuki]

i agree o.o not to get involved or anything

[Neo]

I think that the third one, if she hadn't had glasses and other shoes, would be awesome. it still is, but a bit less.. the rest are great too, but as Gatio said, maybe a bit more work would be useful. Coloring isn't needed, but maybe a bit more shading would be nice.

[Nemphtis]

I like the first and third ones, good shizzy.

[Sea of Time]

That is very cool, the jagged edges on the first picture promote movement. As for color, I don't think you need it, the shading is so darn good. Judging by your previous work, I think you did improve.

[Zaffa Dot Xom]

Since I've had such an itch lately to post something relatively new on a certain forum where people would actually give critique, I [fatally] decided to post it here, where the grass grows brown and people are generally pissed off at me 70% of the time (which is literally hysterical if I think about it).

So, without further adieu ...

http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/2412/comic14yn.jpg

[MysticWarrior]

I want to be just like that Jedi Master up there. He's leet.

Apart from that, your comic doesn't show much movement. At least compensate with a text-heavy comic.

[Zaffa Dot Xom]

Well yeah, it's an intro comic. I wasn't expecting much.

[Yuki]

._. I don't understand it. The jedi guy scared me. And the key chain was random. Yay for randomness.

[Valistrix]

Dude, you pwn alot more than you used to. I like the first drawing, looks so evil and l33t. The comic is awseome, keep up teh good work! ^^

[Zxor]

Your first 3 are really good, REALLY good. The first one is my favorite, and it does look kinda evil. Keep up the good work and post more.

[Linear]

._. Sumo Jedi!! I don't mind the little movement. ._. It was funny and random. *adore*

[Nemphtis]

What is with you people and bad humour on the GSSF forums? Come on people, something that actually leaves people properly laughing! The comic was not funny, the sumo jedi was humerous. But slapping on a humerous image from the internet onto your comic doesn't make your comic funny, it makes the Sumo Jedi funny. Work on your humour, and a little on your drawing, there are some parts where I can't even make out wtf you have drawn.

[Someone Else]

...I don't get it...

Too bad I don't have the time or the parents to work on my own comics.

Damned people... always coming up to the monitor asking me "WHATCH4 M4K1N'?!?!1"

[Nemphtis]

My point exactly WD. There's no damn humour. Seriously guys, you need to focus less on the artistic side of your comics and more on the humour. I'm not gonna read your **** because I think the pictures are pretty, I'm gonna read it because it's funny as hell.

[Zaffa Dot Xom]

Anubis, on Oct 20 2005, 12:22 AM, said:

My point exactly WD. There's no damn humour. Seriously guys, you need to focus less on the artistic side of your comics and more on the humour. I'm not gonna read your **** because I think the pictures are pretty, I'm gonna read it because it's funny as hell.

Wow, someone woke up on the wrong side of the critique food chain.

Maybe you should take a breathre or something? It doesn't exactly have to be funny to enjoy something.

And I'm not really gonna post anymore art. I'm in a locked stasis between how perfect and imperfect it is to me, not to you. :P