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#1   Wiflewood 

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    Posted 21 January 2007 - 12:24 PM

    My first full piece of Digital Paintng, using my new Graphics Tablet.

    Any comments on how to tweak it to improve it would be appriciated.

    http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/8871/finalsubmitjeg0ze.jpg

    Please try ignore any JPeg-ish-ness on it. I uploaded a JPEg as its quicker to load.

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      Posted 21 January 2007 - 10:32 PM

      Criz!

      1) BODY NEEDS WORK. Leg is longer then the upper chest as the head is smaller then the shouders.

      2) the snake's head is too big for the body.

      3) tree braches don't look like tree braches, they kinda looks like leaves.

      I see greatness though. Keep on going~

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        Posted 22 January 2007 - 03:48 PM

        It reminds me of frank from Donnie Darko. ;o

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          Posted 22 January 2007 - 04:01 PM

          View PostXelina, on Jan 22 2007, 04:32 AM, said:

          Criz!

          1) BODY NEEDS WORK. Leg is longer then the upper chest as the head is smaller then the shouders.

          2) the snake's head is too big for the body.

          3) tree braches don't look like tree braches, they kinda looks like leaves.

          I see greatness though. Keep on going~



          I'll kinda ignore the criticism about the proportions of things, as the whole style was meant to be cartoony and a bit wacky.

          I agree about the branches though. I might try adding some smaller branches coming off the thick ones, I think that would make it look a bit more tree-like.

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            Posted 22 January 2007 - 04:39 PM

            http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y30/betrayer93/Frank.png <--- That's frank.

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              Posted 02 February 2007 - 07:10 PM

              It's good, but kinda scary. I think the only thing wrong is that syringe thing in his hand. Don't know what it is supposed to be, but it looks weird. The moon is great though.

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                Posted 03 February 2007 - 08:25 PM

                http://www.goldensun-syndicate.net/forum/public/style_images/gssv3/snapback.png' alt='View Post' />Lifeform288, on Jan 23 2007, 09:39 AM, said:



                I love that movie :)

                You're off topic and you posted less than 5 words. Avoid this in the future and you will live long. - MD

                This post has been edited by Mars Djinni: 06 February 2007 - 01:56 PM



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