[Valistrix]

This story will have Fire Emblem and Golden Sun characters in it and it will be kind of humorous two -_- . I'll be posting the story soon in this topic so stay tuned

[Mallick]

*is staying tuned*
How come everyone copys BLL?

[Valistrix]

i'm copying not as his is a comic and he uses GSSF people in his comic

[Mallick]

You are copying the plot, just not the characters :P

[Linear]

Meh, it's his story. He can put whatever he wants.

[Valistrix]

Thank you linear
anyways here we go

Chapter 1: Prolouge :blink:

Thousands of years ago the world lived in peace and order for many generations. They did not know the name of hate and war but everyone got on, this was the land of Stanstell.
But then a drak aura drifted above the lands. One man defied the rules of love and peace and wanted the world to himself. The others fought back but they didn't prevail. But then a hero came around. He was a young boy but with his sword he destroyed the evil. After this dreadful event the boy was praised and named king of the lands but the land no longer lives in a world of peace...

That's all for the moment :D and I know it's quite short

[Mallick]

cool...... is this boy.... Link?Oh well I guess I will found out later

[Valistrix]

It might be it might not anyway on to the story

Chapter 2: The begining(might be spelt wrong)

After this horrible incident the land was split into countrys. Bevensburg, the only place in the land where it is so so so cold. Kenenstith, the country of blacksmiths, the best place for weapons and armour. Jinerhelt, this is the country of the evil once born. some say the evil still lurks there. And last but certainly not least is Statenkel, the largest and mightiest of all countries.
Somewhere in the parts of Kenenstith live two boys who don't know that they will embark on a dangerous quest. Felix Gandere was a boy who lived in the village of Lanus. He was 15 years old and lived with his father Gordon. Felix was a brave young man and was always exploring the moutains with his childhood friend Eliwood. Eliwood had just hit 14 and looked up to Felix. They would adventure into caves and be driven out my mighty bears, they would climb moutains but race down from the fury of the trolls. They both lived happily in their village. When they went to spy on the cheif of the village they noticed he was talking to a hooded figure. "Well cheif Barham, have you obtained the ore yet" whispered the dark figure. "How many times have I told you, I will not help you in your plans to take over Statenkel. Why do you even need me" stated Barham. "Because you old fool this is country of blacksmiths and miners and with that ore imbued with your weapons for my army I can take over the land" yelled the figure, then he drew a knife out of his coat pocket and stabbed the cheif in the heart. "Die painfully you old fool" sniggered the figure. "OMG did you see that he just killed the cheif" shouted Felix. Then suddenly the figure turned round and stared at them. "Felix you idiot now he's seen us ruuuuunn" whispered Eliwood and the two boys ran back to their home.
Meanwhile, in the land of Bevensburg, in a village named Breeze lay a girl in the snow. She was making snow angels with her best friend Sandra. The girls name was Lyra. She was a wild adventourus little girl and she and Sandra always were climbing on the town hall roofs, breaking windows while trying to skip stones or even stopping a crook or two. They lived in the town hall with the Cheiftain who loved them and made there lives more easy than they were before. But then one day a hooded figure approached the town hall and would change there lives for ever...

[Kikuichimonji]

woah cool story Link, stupid cliffhangers...

[Valistrix]

Lol, thanks Kiku that's the first coment i've had

[Kikuichimonji]

no probs, er where's the rest, sorry impatience...

[Valistrix]

I have to think of the story you know.
Oh and i'm currently working on a game for the story ;)

Here's third chapter

Chapter 3: An Unexpected Arrival

"Cheiftan Boris, how good to see you again" said the hooded man.
"You, you, how did you get here, you died 10 years ago. How did you survive Jenome" said Boris, his eyes like bonfires.
"How dare you call me that name, I am the almighty Gondal,(weird I know)" Yelled Grondal.
"Now where are those two girls".
"You mean Lyra and Sandra don't you. I know why you need them but I will never let you take them for whatever purpose" shouted Boris. Suddenly the door flew open, Lyra and Sandra walked in.
"Is something the matter cheiftan" said Lyra and Sandra.
"No! quick you two, RUN!" yelled Boris.
"Aha" said Grondal as he ran at the girls. He grabbed Lyra but Sandra cast Artic Blast on him and he lets go. Grondal then runs at Sandra and grabs her.
"Ahhhhhh! help me Lyra" srceamed Sandra.
"Sanra! Nooooo!" yelled Lyra. Then Grondal teleported off with Sandra.
"Phew that was close Eliwood, he almost caught us" huffed Felix. "What are you stupid Felix! he almost caught us because of you!" Yelled Eliwood.
"Okay, okay. I messed up I know but what do we do about the cheif?" asked Felix.
"Lets go gather the elders, they'll know what to do"
So they ran off to the elders tower and spoke to them about what happened. They explained about the evil coming back and who Grondal was.
"We have received a message form the village of Breeze in Bevensburg that Grondal has abducted a little girl named Sandra there. There is an other called Lyra but she escaped" explained the elder.
"Sooooo, where do we come in" asked Felix.
"Felix for someone who's older than me you sure are stupid" mumbled Eliwood.
"You must go to Breeze and consult the cheiftan and find more about this Grondal" explained the elder.
"Cool an adventure, yippeee" sighed Felix
"Oh come on Felix it'll be a blast, fighting bad guys, exploring the lan-"
"Ok ok, just stop going on i'll go" said Felix

[Linear]

*Reads it and continues to read it while eating popcorn* Good story Link...! Continue it soon...! *realizes she ran out of popcorn* *goes to get more* And reading and watching these stories/movies are really good too.

[Kikuichimonji]

sorry Link, amazing story though, *takes some of Lin's popcorn*

[Linear]

Anyone else want popcorn while we read the stories? *eats popcorn*

[Valistrix]

Been a while but here's next part (i'm using a school comp)

Chapter 4: The truth is known

Felix and Eliwood arrived in the icy village to find nobody around but themselves. They walked over to the Town Hall but they could not open the door. They heard fighting in side then Felix had an idea.
"Use my head" he said.
"Wha??" said Eliwood.
"Now now Eliwood just smack my head into the door" sighed Felix.
"Ok, but..." then Eliwood smacked Felix's head into the door and suprise suprise, it opened. They saw loads of fighting and blood then decided to join in and fight for breeze so the battle raged on...

Soz thatas all but i'm at school so I don't want to get caught so see ya'll

[Linear]

^__^ Yay...! I liked the story! *was holding onto a pillow* ^.^ I enjoyed it!

[Amon]

Um...interesting. Funyy, though. Keep up the good work!

[Linear]

Hey! It's been a while Amon! ^__^ Anyways...O.O I really like the story!

[Isaac13]

Popcorn, please. This
story is getting good.

[Blade Lord Lyn]

Hmm. . . you may want to make sure you have longer chapters. . . the story itself is good, but you need to work on grammer as well, it was kinda hard for me to read. . .

[Isaac13]

Yes, it seems that grammar is the very problem in these forums. But, with a little help, you will succeed in your spelling. Not saying you guys aren't good spellers, just that, you play around with your words.

[Valistrix]

Umm can I please have this topic closed as I have a new story.