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#1   cyberRoll 

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    Posted 19 January 2005 - 05:04 PM

    This is it my first pic

    #2   Kikuichimonji 

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      Posted 19 January 2005 - 05:06 PM

      hey, the basic structure is pretty good. Just be more confident in your drawings because at the moment they are a bit shaky ;)

      post more

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        Posted 19 January 2005 - 05:20 PM

        Basic structure eh I got it!
        BASIC STRUCTURE hmm.....

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          Posted 19 January 2005 - 05:26 PM

          What I mean is, the poses are well done.

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            Posted 19 January 2005 - 05:29 PM

            Yeah, I agree with Kiku, the poses are good. ^^ But why isn't it all coloured in? I'd like to see it completely coloured. <_<

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              Posted 20 January 2005 - 06:39 PM

              yesh the posing are well done just practise more and you'll become a great artist someday.

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                Posted 20 January 2005 - 06:41 PM

                i think the drawings are good but im gonna spread my "anti-colour" vibe in here - colour doesnt always work very well and sometimes you can get a much more professional looking image by just penning it in with black.

                still very good though so make more soon!

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                  Posted 20 January 2005 - 06:42 PM

                  Yea, good first drawing, I do like it keep up the good work.

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                    Posted 20 January 2005 - 07:38 PM

                    This is the second one. personally I think this one is worse.

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                      Posted 20 January 2005 - 07:46 PM

                      It's very well drawn, the shape is awsome and so are the poses, and I think
                      Raven Blade is right about something. coloring isn't best for everything
                      KEep up the good work!

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                        Posted 21 January 2005 - 07:37 AM

                        Hey, that's awesome! The proportions are good and he has a cool expression on his face. ^^

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                          Posted 21 January 2005 - 11:41 AM

                          See, this one looks alot more "confident". proportions almost spot on ^^ and I like the pose.

                          Foot looks a little dogdey (like it's sprained backwards) but it's very good, don't say it looks bad!

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                            Posted 21 January 2005 - 03:42 PM

                            Cool! You are an artist in the making, I can tell. Unlike me, you are

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                              Posted 21 January 2005 - 06:45 PM

                              you drew chibiesh-style wich i like just keep practising!^^

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                                Posted 21 January 2005 - 06:47 PM

                                Don't call your drawings bad, cyberRoll. Everyone makes mistakes in the beginning. Keep up the good work!

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                                  Posted 21 January 2005 - 11:59 PM

                                  gsninja, on Jan 21 2005, 04:47 PM, said:

                                  Don't call your drawings bad, cyberRoll. Everyone makes mistakes in the beginning. Keep up the good work!

                                  Tru, like everyone knows practice makes perfect


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                                    Posted 22 January 2005 - 10:04 AM

                                    Next picture is coming after my scanner is finished scanning.

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                                      Posted 22 January 2005 - 10:10 AM

                                      sorry for the double-post
                                      Heres the next picture:

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                                        Posted 22 January 2005 - 10:13 AM

                                        sorry for the double-post
                                        Heres the next picture:







                                        He's looking... At something......

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                                          Posted 22 January 2005 - 12:09 PM

                                          err, triple post, but the first of the double posts was an accident right

                                          but next time, use the edit button if you want to add more to you r post

                                          anyway, me likes that picture, see you've got the flare for drawing for sure

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                                            Posted 22 January 2005 - 12:14 PM

                                            I did press the edit button but it went off as a new post for some reason. I remember it saying submit modified post. then instead of a modified post it was a new post.

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                                            Posted 22 January 2005 - 01:48 PM

                                            Nice art me likes

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                                              Posted 22 January 2005 - 05:51 PM

                                              um...you need a post of more then 5 words or its spam

                                              it is ery well drawn though - the detail and shading are both very good and it seems you're developing your style quite impressively

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                                                Posted 23 January 2005 - 12:04 PM

                                                Good news people! I'm making a comic!
                                                (Coming soon)

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                                                  Posted 23 January 2005 - 12:21 PM

                                                  A floating head! I'm kidding, it looks really really good! XD and we can't wait to see what comes up.

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                                                    Posted 23 January 2005 - 12:23 PM

                                                    Why does everyone call their own art bad?

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                                                      Posted 23 January 2005 - 01:45 PM

                                                      I have no idea, Ivan is my name.

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                                                        Posted 23 January 2005 - 03:14 PM

                                                        Good one cyber roll, is your comic gonna be funny? Can I be in it?

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                                                          Posted 23 January 2005 - 03:18 PM

                                                          Cyberroll's comics are sometimes funny, and mostly action. When posted you'll find them good. I'm currently working on a GSSF tournament comic right now.

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                                                            Posted 23 January 2005 - 04:25 PM

                                                            I really like your pictures, and I like how you draw the faces ^_^

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                                                              Posted 28 January 2005 - 03:57 PM

                                                              The scanners down at the moment so The comic won't be on for a while,
                                                              But The Charecters will com up first.

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                                                                Posted 28 January 2005 - 03:58 PM

                                                                I like your megaman signiture, anyway good artwork. <_<

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                                                                  Posted 29 January 2005 - 12:47 PM

                                                                  My dads working on the scanner

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                                                                    Posted 29 January 2005 - 12:50 PM

                                                                    Did you start your new comic yet?

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                                                                      Posted 29 January 2005 - 08:08 PM

                                                                      (^o^) can't wait to see it though! *would be angry at scanner if that happened* T_T

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                                                                        Posted 29 January 2005 - 10:25 PM

                                                                        heh heh, that's a great gif in your sig! You make it yourself?

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                                                                          Posted 29 January 2005 - 10:35 PM

                                                                          Yes I made this signature all by myself....
                                                                          with a little help...


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