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My Songs/poems

#1   Izar 

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    Posted 13 March 2005 - 05:13 PM

    nick1presta told me that the art forum was for all kinds of art, not jsut visible art. So I decided to post my songs.

    Bleeding Hollow
    You forfiet your motive
    Despite my every word
    You bleed
    Your Hollow
    Locked in this empty world

    And all I ever heard was you
    And all I ever knew was you
    And all I ever needed was me

    Chorus:
    We are so in need
    Of some heavenly being
    While we bleed hollow
    While we bleed hollow
    And While we swallow our motive

    You give up your dream
    Accept false accusations
    You bleed
    You follow
    Locked in the dreaded cell

    Are you with me now
    In this time of need?
    As you need my LORD

    Chorus:
    We are so in need
    Of some heavenly being
    While we bleed hollow
    While we bleed hollow
    And While we swallow our motive(x2)

    And to my suprise you suface on these deadly needles
    Bleeding until our hearts turn blue
    Deprived of our oxygen suffercating within
    So we always wonder while were bleeding within

    Chorus:
    We are so in need
    Of some heavenly being
    While we bleed hollow
    While we bleed hollow
    And While we swallow our motive



    Under Your Wing
    I stand silent
    Witness to it all
    I stand quiet
    And laugh inside at them all

    It's such an odd thing
    My heart is a double-standard
    One minute I'm helping
    The next I'm helpless
    I know GOD hears and sees me
    I just want to know if you do.

    Chorus:
    If I stand right next to you
    And tell you I'm afraid
    Will you take me under your wing?
    And help fix the mistakes that I've made?

    It's truly amazing
    My heart is so dark
    But on this hardened outside
    My mind's just falling apart
    Lord, I take you into my heart
    Lord, please give me a fresh new start

    It's such an easy thing
    To cool a heated heart
    One minute it's aching
    The next I'm helped
    I love Jesus with all my heart
    I just want to know if you do.

    Chorus:
    If I stand right next to you
    And tell you I'm afraid
    Will you take me under your wing?
    And help fix the mistakes that I've made?


    I have Awaited
    I have waited for salvation
    The lord is my rock, my fotress, my high tower
    I'm not ashamed to show his salvation
    Not ashamed to show his gloified power
    (Genesis 49:18)(Psalms 18:2)(Romans 1:16)

    Kept by the power of God,
    Salvation is ready to be revealed,
    Kept by the power of God,
    Salvation is ready to be revealed
    (1Pe 1:5)

    Chorus:
    And then I fall face down in the abyss
    Only to be brought up again by the arms of my father
    And then I fall face down in the abyss
    Only to be brought up again by the arms of my father

    Keeper of Hope keeper of Glory
    I used to fear the Glory you gave
    But now I see and hope for the return
    And now why are you cast down?
    (Psalms 16:9)(Psalms 42:5 )

    Forbid them not
    I've been the subject of ridicule and asperations
    I've been the trash of man's selfish ambitions
    Born into a world so full of our sin
    My heart is ever burning from fears within

    All my life
    I've kept so much so close to me
    Now this time
    You try to take it from me
    But that will never happen

    Chorus:
    And he said suffer little children to come unto me
    forbid them not
    forbid them not
    And Jesus said those that seek me early shall find me.
    I love them
    I love them

    We all hammered those nails with our crimes
    Too many have died in desperate times
    Born towards a screaming life
    Literally buring from the searing of fearing and strife

    Chorus:
    And he said suffer little children to come unto me
    forbid them not
    forbid them not
    And Jesus said those that seek me early shall find me.
    I love them
    I love them


    Modern Gomorrah
    In this world of desolation,
    And this veil of tainted dreams.
    Bleeding from the tears of beasts,
    Crying through the viens of enemies
    As you would say this land is blight,
    And all it's chosen for me.
    And to the man who stood up tall,
    And wrote the last degree.

    Look at this now
    Look at the terrain
    And how you always told me that my life's in vain...

    It's like a modern Gomorrah
    It's like a deadly seed
    It spreads so fast
    Kills so fast
    As if it would have needed me.

    To all the foes and bloody crows,
    And all these fasinations.
    They burn so fast as it would pass
    through all the destinations
    And all this blood that fills the halls
    And all you've given to me.
    And to the man who stood up tall,
    And wrote the last degree.

    Look at this now
    Look at the terrain
    And how you always told me that my life's in vain...

    It's like a modern Gomorrah
    It's like a deadly seed
    It spreads so fast
    Kills so fast
    As if it would have needed me.


    Last, but my personal favorite...

    Giver
    I don't know what I am without you
    I don't know how to say I love you
    I'm to scared scared to admit I love you
    I'm too afraid that I will hurt you

    Chorus:
    Don't you see that in your eyes
    There's an ambience that parts the skies
    And to the One who sacrificed
    I owe it all to the giver of life

    I can't imagine being without you
    I can't embrace if something happened to you
    I'm a broken heart that loves you
    I don't know what I'd think without you

    Chorus:
    Don't you see that in your eyes
    There's an ambience that parts the skies
    And to the One who sacrificed
    I owe it all to the giver of life

    The air's so cold
    I'm being so bold
    Picking you up after you fall
    Doing as told
    Being so cold
    I can't take it after all

    Chorus:
    Don't you see that in your eyes
    There's an ambience that parts the skies
    And to the One who sacrificed
    I owe it all to the giver of life


    That's all for now.

    #2   Lyiana 

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      Posted 13 March 2005 - 07:04 PM

      Hey.. Neat!
      I wonder.. Would you be interested in music for your songs? Perhaps we could make a true song out of your lyrics?

      #3   Izar 

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        Posted 13 March 2005 - 07:24 PM

        I have them... Just not a band around that can play Emo/screamo/alternative! heh

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          Posted 18 March 2005 - 08:22 PM

          wow...those are so deep, and so true. I especially liked Bleeding hollow...that is so amazing.

          heh, the only thing that has really captivated me to post was your poems. ^.~ keep it up!

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            Posted 18 March 2005 - 11:43 PM

            wow those are really amazing! keep up the great work~


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