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Liberi Corps. Sprite Tactician

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Posted 23 April 2005 - 03:46 PM

Hello.

I am here to distribute my design works, with sprites from a rather popular game series known as Fire Emblem. I only speciallize in the work of Sprites from 6, 7, and 8.

I will first start out by giving out a sample, or two of my work. (Starting with the worst, IMO.) I hope I get some good feedback, and I'll start showing the rest of them for you all. ^^


http://img235.exs.cx/img235/66/av3902gr.gif
Liberi Fatali

http://img65.exs.cx/img65/1064/newmug3jv.gif
Random Face Sprite.

#2   Mallick 

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    Posted 23 April 2005 - 04:00 PM

    I'm getting turned off of making FE sprites now that so many people are doing it.

    Mug 1) Work on the shading at the forhead, here, I'll edit my post to give an example. Also, the hair just doesn't work. Also, the shoulder on the left is out of shape, I'll see if I can fix that too.

    Mug 2) Fir's head doesn't go with Percy's body. Let's leave it at that before I start telling you to customize your work.

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    Posted 23 April 2005 - 04:02 PM

    Piers diamondberg master, on Apr 23 2005, 05:00 PM, said:

    I'm getting turned off of making FE sprites now that so many people are doing it.

    Mug 1) Work on the shading at the forhead, here, I'll edit my post to give an example. Also, the hair just doesn't work.

    Mug 2) Fir's head doesn't go with Percy's body. Let's leave it at that before I start telling you to customize your work.


    I said in my first post, I was going to show off my WORST first. So, here's some of my better work, but not EXCELLENT, like some other people said. ^^;

    Lacus Clyne from Gundam Seed. Still needs a bit more work though...
    http://img172.exs.cx/img172/725/lc1bm.gif

    Myself:
    http://img260.echo.cx/img260/9071/ashleynew4ga.gif



    My first animation:

    http://img62.exs.cx/img62/3895/liberifatalisprite4lz.gif

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      Posted 23 April 2005 - 04:30 PM

      You seem to need a little practise on hair; the shading is kind of funky.

      Cecillia's hair = Good idea. Cecillia's hair with hair thing that's huge = Not so good of an idea.

      On your second mug of your second post, on the clothes, you broke the one pixel rule, too. =/

      And for your animation, that's pretty good, although you need to work on where you're placing each frame on top of each other. ^_^

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      Posted 23 April 2005 - 04:42 PM

      Piers diamondberg master, on Apr 23 2005, 05:30 PM, said:

      You seem to need a little practise on hair; the shading is kind of funky.

      Cecillia's hair = Good idea. Cecillia's hair with hair thing that's huge = Not so good of an idea.

      On your second mug of your second post, on the clothes, you broke the one pixel rule, too. =/

      And for your animation, that's pretty good, although you need to work on where you're placing each frame on top of each other. ^_^


      For the Lacus one, it looks SO much like her, so I don't have to change anything about that one.

      The second one, doesn't really look wrong in anyway that I can PHYSICALLY see. So I don't know what you mean by ONE pixel rule.

      And on the animation, ALL the frames are in the correct places, on on the other, so I have no clue what you mean on this one either.


      But here are some more.


      http://img193.exs.cx/img193/6213/re4leonmugfacesprite1sr.gif
      Leon Scott Kennedy, folks. Mm.


      http://img107.exs.cx/img107/3889/leonattack6dx.gif
      Leon Attack! XD Though the death scene for the regenerator was sucky... I did an excellent job on the Leon attacking sprite. ^^

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        Posted 23 April 2005 - 05:42 PM

        The mug: His shoulders need to be more broad, and mascular. Not to mention you can still see some of the old clothes behind it.

        The animation: One of my friends did nearly the same thing. Coincidence, or did you just take it, change it a tiny bit, and then say it was yours?

        Here's your mug following the one pixel rule, and without black as the color to outline etc. ...Oh, and I edited the hair.

        http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y30/betrayer93/redonee.png

        The chin was also whacked out, but I fixed that, too.

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        Posted 23 April 2005 - 05:45 PM

        Piers diamondberg master, on Apr 23 2005, 06:42 PM, said:

        The mug: His shoulders need to be more broad, and mascular. Not to mention you can still see some of the old clothes behind it.

        The animation: One of my friends did nearly the same thing. Coincidence, or did you just take it, change it a tiny bit, and then say it was yours?

        Here's your mug following the one pixel rule, and without black as the color to outline etc. ...Oh, and I edited the hair.

        http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y30/betrayer93/redonee.png

        The chin was also whacked out, but I fixed that, too.


        Mug: Well, there aren't any other clothes behind it. o_o; But it looks pretty much close, but the only problem I see is that it seems a bit small.

        Animation: I'd like to see it. I did this all on my own, while bored.

        Self Potrait Mugshot: Ah. I see it now. ^^; Thank you.

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          Posted 23 April 2005 - 11:58 PM

          No problem.
          I took another look at your animation and then at my friend's, they're not that close, sorry to be rude to you earlier.

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          Posted 24 April 2005 - 04:34 PM

          Piers diamondberg master, on Apr 24 2005, 12:58 AM, said:

          No problem.
          I took another look at your animation and then at my friend's, they're not that close, sorry to be rude to you earlier.

          Quiet alright. n_n; As long as noone claims that I keep copying thier work, I'm ok.

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            Posted 28 April 2005 - 09:47 PM

            atleast you can make sprites >_< , all i can do is draw and paint that's where i'm good at :ph34r: , but i hope i can learn how to make art in the computer, and since my photoshop won't activate i'm gotta stick to drawing and painting for a while and still have to fix computer, nice job btw


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